Thread:Willbachbakal/@comment-1876049-20150728142137/@comment-1330314-20150729161032

Alistar's bio looks perfect. It really integrates his kit into a rich description of how he feels and plays in-game.

Kog's description is also really nice, though it might perhaps be a bit too technical for a bio (mentioning tankiness, health and resistances could just amount to mentioning stuff like resilience or toughness). Here's my take on it:

'Kog'Maw, the Mouth of the Abyss, is a fragile but deadly marksman-mage who functions akin to an artillery cannon, dishing out extreme damage from a very long range. What he lacks in speed and personal survivability, he more than makes up for in reach and raw damage output, allowing him to rain corrosive acid from huge distances. Though vulnerable when alone, Kog'Maw becomes a force to be reckoned with when protected by his team, and can eat through even the toughest of foes as they try to approach him.

What are your thoughts?