User blog comment:Arcaneelf/Ranged Carry Pusher, Marxell the Sharpshooter/@comment-82.240.214.188-20121210082821

I can see two main problems in there.

First, the passive: it would be OP against a few champions and completely useless if they're not there. You need to change it so that it hase its use in whatever situation, and does not hard counter some champs in particular.

Second, the W: you obviously want to create a magic damage ranged carry. The problem is itemization: what are you going to build ? There are really few items that give both AS and AP, and you would be at a great disadvantage compared to other carries, because they have crits. Or maybe you had a hybrid build in mind ? Since your character only has AP ratios, I see no reason to toggle the W off. You would have to go full AP and keep it toggled on constantly, if only for the magic pen.

I would go as far as making it his passive and removing the mana cost (and make the magic pen scale with levels). But I think the whole magic damage idea would make him more a Teemo-like champion than a ranged carry.

Any other thing I might say is a bit less important, but still:

- The sharpshooter concept is already filled by Caitlyn. Your champion's Q is pretty similar to her ult (self-snare, long range, only one shot because -70% AS while being rooted, you won't keep that up long enough to get a second shot).

- This E is exactly, similar to Corki's Q. Zone-targetted, damage with AP-scaling, reveal. It's the exact same thing, just a bit longer range and radius but lower damage.

- The ult is nice, but a bit hard to use, I think. Something like a stronger GP's ult with a delay... Might be fine, might be too hard to aim / too easy to dodge / leave the area quickly. Also, I think it has too many effects. I would remove either the stun or the Grievous Wounds effect. Else, it might have too many uses and thus be too powerful.

- Finally, as was said before, MS is to low. The last patch buffed every champion's MS by 25, so I'll assume you were thinking with the old numbers and it would be 340 now. The lowest base MS in the current game is 325.