Thread:Daguplo John Crayelle/@comment-9713132-20130224094512/@comment-9713132-20130225110555

I'm not entirely sure of what you mean - I apologize for being so blunt but it is rather hard to understand what you say.

Nevertheless, if what you're asking for is to both structurally and gramatically fix your article, I'd be happy to do it for you if you wish. If you simply want tips I'll be happy to give them as well.