User blog comment:1111kkkk/Damian/@comment-24036535-20150825004549

First thing: Try to edit the grammar and syntax of the champion. I can sympathize if English isn't your first language, but asking for help from someone else you know can work.

Onto the kit itself...

Q: The mark shouldn't automatically detonate, that removes the point of the mark, at least add some kind of incentive to pop it, otherwise there's no reason to not just throw the mark on an enemy in lane an boom, huge harass. At level 1 it's 100 magic damage plus 120% of your AP, which is easily 150 or more magic damage at level 1. Late game, having a 120% definite ratio on any ability, especially a basic ability is silly, as frequently as every 6.6 seconds, this guy can half-hit a squishy targat so long as he builds AP. The range is low, but the damage is certainly high enough to justify that.

W: I get the concept of an on-demand knockup. But a 100% movement speed steroid, even at the cost of mana per second, is basically a free escape, especially since he knocks up all enemies hit for 1 second. That's a lot of power for a basic ability when his Q already has a lot of damage in it.

E: It's kinda boring to be honest, he steals movement speed, even though he already has a huge movement speed steroid in his kit. The true damage portion however, is rediculous. He already has a lot of damage shoved into two abilities, making that damage true is just going to result in nuking someone inspite of their defenses.

R: As a champion who is melee and has no AD scalings outside of his auto attacks, the AD steroid is really just pointless. The biggest problem with this ability however, is that the ult has an instant, high base damage, high scaling damage nuke attached to it. Literally no other ability in the game has that kind of damage instantly. Ekko's super unreliable ult is the only other ability which provides an AP ratio of over 100%. The base damage of his Q and R alone, especially when coupled with his E is almost enough to kill most midlaners outright, without any AP. And then, a little AP, goes a long way. A decently fed Damian, will literally oneshot people.