User blog comment:Poisonshark/Custom Champion: Nadhild, the Swordswielder/@comment-26815373-20160322004252

So... I'm not sure what to make of this kit. At first glance, it seems rather tame. Your numbers and ratios look fine, too. I do wonder though, if she has too much mobility (she seems almost assassin-like in my mind, with her many dashes). Her kit vaguely reminds me of with the way she wants to combo / spam her abilities but also  since everything is a skillshot.

She also has two very strong slows, which seem supportive, but then her passive disarms and roots them, (again, something which seems supportive) but it screams 'utility assassin' to me. It also seems like she has a huge reach, effectively putting anyone within 1.5K units in her 'danger zone' while her abilities are up (talking about her W-E-Q combo). You might want to add how fast her projectiles (thrown swords) travel, and / or how wide the skillshots are.

Also, need ability icons for maximum communication / salesmanship. ;p

I want to talk about her flavor for a moment as well. I like the idea of 'collecting swords' and League can probably fit more champions into the 'Bilgewater' (pirate-themed) design space. That said, I think she needs something more, whether it's ability icons, artwork, or a more detailed description, to give us a better idea as to who she is / what she's all about (a player should be able to look at your champions splash and ability icons and have a sense of what they're about). Or you could find / capitalize on some other seemingly unrelated element, that combos with her 'sword-throwing pirate girl' thing in a unique, unexpected way.

I think her Q needs to be worded better to fit her theme (a sword-collecting / sword-throwing woman) 'fires a beam in a line' (??) and the name of her E 'Sharp Charge' isn't ideal, IMO (even though it maybe be accurate).

All that's just my two-cents though.

I'm still confused about this SMNK deal. I can't find you explaining what it is anywhere, and even Google had nothing to say. Help?