Talk:Varus/Background/@comment-4959312-20120406194939

I love that it's actually written with literary flair instead of the normal, boring sword-and-sorcery style descriptions that take so little skill to write. It's not that it lacks cohesion, it's that most people aren't used to quality writing in a judgement! Good writing makes you consider the words and what they mean. I love the sense of mystery that the intentional lack of clarity creates that gradually resolves as you read on!

It may be a bit over the average summoner's reading-level though, so I guess it'll be back to the normal hum-drum writing in later Judgements that pitches to a more average reading-level. :P