User blog comment:Witchking99/Saburra, The Desert Slaughterer/@comment-26378838-20170304143617/@comment-26378838-20170305134004

Sorry for not commenting on the kit, but it's a kit that flows neatly as a whole and, as far as I can tell, only needs tweaks here and there.

Champion Role: Considering Saburra currently only scales with, both his roles and scalings need to be tweaked, considering he's functioning more as a Tank/Mage rather than a pure Mage and he needs some scalings in order to fulfill the Mage role. Here are some suggestions in order for Saburra to still heavily invest in but being able to build some mage items.
 * Overwhelming Wave: ==>
 * Sand Storm (per half second): ==>

Desert Aegis: I'd rather make the passive shield scale with each ability rank [something like  ] and make the active deal  equal.

Deadly Funeral: I'd shorten the tether duration to 3 seconds, remove the channeling bit and shift the damage type to.

Formatting/Others:
 * The Fists of Sands passive name needs to be corrected to not be melted with its description.
 * There's a "sand" mention in Sand Affliction that needs to be
 * Overwhelming Wave's and Sand Storm's damages don't have a type specified.
 * The Sand Aegis mention in Sand Storm should be Desert Aegis.