User blog comment:Rehoma/Rhodium, the Purge Seeker/@comment-3391671-20130816080645

I have a question (or maybe two...?):

Both his Q and W state "critical damage", I presume this is relevant to his Innate, not the critical strike chance. But I feel that you can restate how such things are worded. His Innate can reword "When Rhodium lands a critical strike with his Abilities" and make it state separately that the damage from his Q and W will activate the innate.
 * One example is that instead of stating "These hits will critically strike, and apply critical damage boosts such as runes, masteries and items.", you can state, "These strikes will also benefit from critical damage runes, masteries and items." Using critical strike can make the description confusing, at least for some which happens to include me.

Also, may reword his W for you. I understand how it works, but...there are some parts that do bother me. One example I will state now is that instead of having the spirit be something like an invisible pet, it should be that his body becomes an "immovable object" or something. If the body is supposed to have health, oh please tell me...

I apologize if any of my comments were rude. I also apologize for this long comment...