User blog comment:Nuclrdmntr/Zelos, the Ionian Fallen/@comment-4022742-20121201122504

Passive:
 * lower the value of shred, 30% is just too much for a passive.

Q:
 * it's a fine skill, but 1.5 total AD scale is too much, level 1 full AD starting with Doran's gets you about 90 AD *1.5 +25= 160 DMG on level 1, every 6 seconds. With instant 7.5% armor shred from your passive and even 15% from full AA's, he's gonna be way to strong early

W:
 * Good job.

E:
 * The channel is a good enough penalty to justify the stun, I'd say remove the root on himself, maybe decrease the stun to 1.5 secs

R:
 * Radius is a bit small, otherwise gj.