User blog comment:MickB/Khrax, the Archaic Overlord/@comment-4923836-20131027224507

Hi.

First of all, nice concept. I like what the champion does in general. A few notes though.

Mana cost: they are high, huge actually, and he doesn't get a big mana pool, or gain a lot of mana regen. My take would be to at least increase his additional manaregen/level a bit. Feels he may go OOM very quickly with 120/90/90 costs on his normal spells. Counter to that is that his damage on it is very high.

Passive: Scaling together with the very high ratio Q may be a little to much. it might be better adding either effects to skills (like syndra's max lv skills stuff) or keeping it's scaling a little under control. Perhaps changing it to something alike, adds 1 base damage for every skill for each 1% health missing. Would add 150 base damage on all using all skills, more appropriate if you want to keep assassin tag/direction.

Q: level 1 damage kinda too low. 65 base damage isn't much, especially at an 80 mana cost. Feels like your better of not using it till it's at least lv2 or so. Relatively low base damage with strong scaling makes him a stomp or die type of champion, doing well he is powerful, but losing lane will cost you harshly. it his staple endgame skill though. With cdr it's at a nice 3 sec. cooldown.

W: good as is. Lower damage skill with only mediocre scaling. It'll still be fine if this thing scales with the passive as he has.

E: Feels like his assassination-like skill I guess? May have the higher base damage/scaling as it's a single target skillshot.

R: Fine as is, but see tidbits section.

Tidbits: Assassin tag, it isn't fully justified I think. Though he has a lot of damage, it's medium range, has a (weaker but okay) skill to single out a target, he lacks any mobility to get in range to do his stuff outside a flash in like ryze/annie style. Comparing this guy to Ahri (mage/assassin), she has more reliable base damage and has a better single out a target skill (charm beats magic pierce), and she has the mobility to carry it out, combined with longer range on farming skills.