User blog comment:DBinitiate/Hawkeye, Thunder Breaker/@comment-3391671-20170115103542

So I can break armor if I simply get a pact with a thunder lord? Cool! Let me go try that... not. There is no thunder lord for me to make a pact with orz

Jokes aside, I'll be making a rather brief yet harsh critique here. Hopefully you know what's coming in for you.
 * To start off is the name... which holds no meaningful link to what it is usually applied to. He's a thunderlord, yet he is called "Hawkeye"... I do not know where you got that name from to bind with this theme.
 * Talking about theme, if you are going to aim to tread upon basic ideas such as elemental wizards or simple swordsmen, try to go up and beyond in making them unique. If you make theme stale, then they fall even harder than failures that at least tried something new.
 * So an ability that simply grants armor ignore, on top of causing abilities to deal more damage when comboed. The first part is not interesting, and the second is alright. More oculd be improved to making the comboing and actual combo.
 * Before going further, remove flavour text. It fills the ability descriptions with unnecessary information. Zip.
 * Thunder punch is just a powerful punch. It is overly simple and provides no identity to Thunder Breaker.
 * Getting better, but what relation does this ability have with a shark?
 * This ability works more like a all-around pull with a  on top. And as the same with Q, beyond those effects, this ability provides nothing else. No actual interaction with his other abilities.
 * Woohoo, Thunder Breaker deals another punch... I admit to being rather annoyed now that all this champion is throw punches. Even if it's the same punch, make each effect more exciting. This ability is nothing more than a possible dash version of Q. I am not impressed.
 * Typhoon? I will say that this is starting to look like an undedicated piece of champion work, with only imagination being applied to the kit and no sense of kit making itself instilled. I advise revising the kit more and making it interesting. Check out recently released/reworked champion to see what I mean by "interesting."