User blog comment:Kenetron/Avelica, the Creep Lady/@comment-11434673-20130923182223

Dark Mind: This ability seems random (but I can see where her title comes from). Its like Elise's spiderlings plus HueHueHue's ult. Creeptoids give 390 + 30% of AP in extra health, correct? Having a champion replica gives way too much armor (if they have 200 bonus armor and you have 200 bonus armor you'd have 400 bonus armor!). Also, what amount of bonus AP do you get per creeptoid? What are the stats of each creeptoid and replica? An alternative: Creates a creeptoid of the last minion or monster she killed, up to a max of 2/3/4/5. While she owns a creeptoid she gains increased AP (10-15 per replica, higher if you lower the AP ratios of her abilties by a few %). Also, damage that she suffers is reduced and transferred to one of her creeptoids. She takes 4% less damage per creeptoid, which is transferred to a creeptoid. Each creeptoid follows Avelica around, standing behind her and has no unit collision. Creeptoids have a 125 hp each and reward 5 gold when they die (whoever deals damage that would kill a creeptoid gets the bounty).

Fog of Death: Whats is the range of the fog around her? Can you please put what the maximum damage is under the damage per second (also, you might want to make a note that that damage is actually damage per second). Also, sight reduction is a powerful debuff, as only two champions have it. I think instead of the sight reduction, it should heal your creeptoids slightly. Also, please reduce the damage per second slightly, like 10-15 damage over the levels.

Dark Ashes and Death Laser: I feel like these abilities are out of place for this kind of champion. I would recommend you rethink, remake and repost some other ideas for these abilties. Right now, they are just two more damage dealing abilities. She needs some kind of ultility (I am aware that Death Laser does stun, but I think it is out of place for a "Creep Lady").

Plague Grounds: Again, seems out of place but.... Does the entire damage last for the 10 seconds? What the range/AoE of this ability? This spell pretty much gives 20% spell penetration and lacks any kind of connection to the rest of her kit. Instead of plague grounds, you could make it act more like a feeding frenzy for any "creeps" (summons creeps that attack for the short duration, dealing damage per second to all in the field), slowing and maybe (maybe) reducing defenses. Currently, this ability would fit more of a "disease" caster over a "creep lady".

Stats: After you get the abilities worked out, I can post again about the stats (which are a bit low, so they'll need to be increased).

Good concept, but needs a little more work. Please think of new abilities to replace Dark Ashes and Death Laser that will fit her kit more. Thanks for posting and good luck!