User blog comment:C9 Teemur/Brayan and Jerrico the Dark Partners/@comment-3391671-20170904013540

Hello Teemur. I apologize for not answering back to when you had made your earlier revisions back in March. Busy life and all, and as you might know, the concept had been washed in the wave of other concepts.

Now, looking upon Brayan’s concept from changes made between V3 to now, V7, I still find issues with the kit construct. First and foremost, I can see that you have made the effort to make Brayan more prominent in the kit, such as by making basic attacks have more relevance in the way of damage (ie. more on-hit effects). It has helped him become a little more of a Marksman. Yet, that has not fixed the issue I had mentioned throughout my reviews: that this champion's identity hinges too much on Jerrico. Brayan remains a shallow character, and I find more importance in the panther. This is actually something you boosted by giving Jerrico and more effects. If I had to identify which live champion has the same issue, it would be.

I bring up the &  combo have this strange balance about them, and personally, Nunu can disappear from the background of said champion. Willump has more importance as he is not only the vehicle, but also is the one who seems to perform all the actions and abilities in the kit, even if some of them such as are by the little boy. What I mean to say that if you have one core champion and their pet, no matter how important that pet may be, you should tone down how much they contribute to the kit. The less 'Brayan does for the kit, the more he is replaceable as an Archer, no matter how much you describe the two as "life partners."

Back to the actual mechanics in the kit, there seem to still be a lot of power in the innate, although you have shifted it towards being partially more a Marksman's passive. Making Jerrico be targettable did not resolve issues with him, moreso only made the kit more complicated as to what kind of pet Jerrico is supposed to represent as. This comes hand in hand with the above issue of "too much power to Jerrico." But there is also that 25% max health true damage on-death... and that is certainly unfair to those who concentrate on Brayan to take out the duo, only to be killed because they did their job. Think if inflicted the same amount of damage to whoever assailed him. Wouldn't it be unfair? Please deliberate if you think otherwise.

Instead of these smaller changes that you've been making, I recommend that you perform an overhaul on the kit. Yes, this kit is in need of a rework in order to make a kit that has more thematic value that can be appreciated. Otherwise, I have no more to say further.