User blog comment:Threshlesticks/Nocuous - The Toxin Progenitor WIP/@comment-3391671-20170105080722/@comment-3391671-20170110005827

If you want his passive to be the bulk of the damage, then there are different methods in doing just that. Look upon fellow champion  who has much going on, all through his passive. Instead of your abilities inflicting their own form of, I advise that the innate then represents what kind of your AAs and abilities inflict.

A "gap closer" is defined as any ability that allows you to get closer to your enemy either by dashing, blinking, or granting oneself a movement speed buff. It does not include the capability to CC an enemy through and, although they achieve a similar goal. I understand why you applied the on Q now, but I recommend you use the term correctly next time.

As mentioned, I prefer champion with lore than those without, mostly due to my aspiration to being a writer and an advocate of good lore. It does not mean that you have to write it; it just means that you will not be getting much points from me personally.

I'm glad my criticism has offered you a reason to change the ult. To those who did not complain, and no offense to them, they must have been blind as to what is good and what is not.

I too thank you for responding. But if you do not mind my little squabble, but next time, please respond to each section individually instead of marking them up into summarized paragraphs. I asked some questions, and they remain unanswered too.