User blog comment:Lesdin/Darssan, the Inciter/@comment-26815373-20160224202750/@comment-27802145-20160224230223

If I may make a quick correction: the AoE only affects the nearest enemy champion, and the unit left by the AoE can be attacked by any enemy champions. Other than that, Primus reworded it perfectly.

As for your critique, I feel the need to comment firstly that prior knowledge with the Fate series isn't required at all to perceive this champion. Darssan merely used True Assassin as a template and inspiration; he is in no way supposed to be LoL's version of True Assassin.

His E may seem more complicated than it really is just because of my style of writing. I will be aiming to improve my verbosity in my future works, and am currently considering rewriting the ability itself, so please understand.

For his ultimate, I think you misunderstand. Delusional Heartbeat is supposed to function like Jhin's curtain call, but imagine that it only has one bullet, and that the bullet does what the second cast does. While channelling, Darssan can reactivate the ability to violate an enemy champion's heart, dealing physical damage based on their tarnished health and slowing them.

Lastly, thank you for your praise on the presentation. The kit itself is probably overpowered by at least a bit, and if not, overloaded, but I can only blame that on my inexperience of this stuff. I aim to improve with each successive publication, and am happy enough to know that I at least have the formatting down (it took a long time of lurking and inspecting newer champ's pages).