User blog comment:C9 Teemur/Paige, the Phoenix Guardian/@comment-27859592-20170216145211/@comment-25235491-20170216162854

Okay, I need to congratulate ClayHuang for the comment and elaborate on it. Thanks for the wink by the way, buddy.

Stats
 * All relatively correct, but you might want to check dat armor growth because I'm not sure a should have that.

P - Phoenixfire Ash
 * I'm pretty sure it's the phoenix spawn (due to how powerful its travel paradigm is) that should get a cooldown, not the Ash generation.
 * If the phoenix spawns on Paige's location, it creates a different kind of problem: if the Pheonix can't, Paige needs to while alive or just fly to base on foot (impossible within an early death timer's duration).

Q - Burning Breath
 * The damage is flat-out overpowered. It scales on a total !
 * Level 1, tag your enemy in lane with that and you've dealt 54 (I'm considering that you didn't get an AD item like a or ) damage just from hitting, then you get, over the next 4 seconds, 120 +  =  damage.
 * isn't really something that should be added just like that.
 * The skill is a one-point wonder, since you gain only 40 damage over the duration per rank invested.

W - Phoenix Egg
 * 250 AoE is kinda large. For comparison, is 175 radius, and yet it has a  second delay to avoid being completely broken.
 * second at all ranks is usually not something we see. Fixed durations are usually multiples of second, and thus  is usually seen in scaling values (e.g. ) with most having at least one end be a multiple of  second.
 * The damage should be written on the side. All of it. It's the second time I see an AD-scaling value in the description text and it gets ugly. We should see something like.
 * Since the phoenix "attacks", I'm going to assume that the damage is physical. Otherwise would be sinfully powerful.

E - Flame Flight
 * No, you didn't just create an ability that smacks your enemy with a buckload of damage to the face for successfully countering it. >:(
 * Especially not when it does nearly squat otherwise.
 * Also, the ult-exclusive version where the Phoenix's next attack is empowered is hitting like a truck, around 3-4 times harder than its usual attacks. With no indications outside of maybe a cast animation on Paige. Basically reeks of #TONSOFDAMAGEFROMOUTTANOWHERE.

R - Unleash the Phoenix
 * The speed of the phoenix's flight isn't precised, but if it's too fast, it's guaranteed to be game-breaking due to the sheer numbers behind the damage.
 * The Phoenix has . It's going to be a secondary tank with its 3000 HP late-game, even without armor or MR.
 * It's almost a sad thing to see that your summon can't be controlled and really just uses basic attacks. Which makes it really just a sack of stats which isn't that interesting to see, because we will be graced with this summon who will want its own lifebar late-game.