User blog comment:GoejoeDenzo/Roselle, the Bionic Gunslinger/@comment-27002630-20150924132212

Nice champion! Maybe she can take over Lucian.

I find some mistakes of the description. First of all, you don't need to indicate the critical chance on the second shot. If you take a look at Master Yi, it doesn't need to indicate that the second hit can crit, only indicates when it can't be crit. And, every attacks do double? That's OP in my opinion. Master Yi does double strike every continuous fourth strike, with 50% damage. Well that's melee. For me, I'll rewrite as "if her first attack crits, she will immediatele fires a second shot, without any cost (if the second shot crits, she will not apply the third immediate strike)."

For E, that's really "out of the game rules". even it costs her health, but that means she can dash all the game instead of walk. It'll be pretty hard for enemies to catch up. Don't think it's good, think back if you are the person who is chasing Roselle. And that cooldown, she can dashes frequently more than Yasuo could, because he has to dash through hostile units. This skill, I prefer be like Lucian's dash. Maybe no cost, but let the cooldown be more (12 seconds minimum). You can still add the bonus lifesteal effects on her next basic attack.

For R, please tell how frequently she will shoot. Like 5 shots per second, so that, we can calculate how much Ammo she will use. Additionally, the effect on 5 champion killed is useless. They're all dead, you've got PENTAKILL!!!, no one is gonna damage you. For me, I'll rewrite as "For each champion killed, she can adjust the direction or uses Bionic Rush. If multiple champions killed, she receives 50% bonus money each (activates at the second killed champion and beyond)."

Others are great and awesome. But there's one mistake, indicate the range too. How far Q and target? How wide and how far W bullets go? How far the E will dash, fixed, or targetable? How far do the R's bullets go? I don't think she can target anywhere in the map, otherwise it'll be another "out of the game rules".

But overall concept is wonderful. Nice try! I think you can do Ammo-based champions, better than Asfidyll when he created Tridon. Keep up the work. You impressed me.