User blog comment:Witchking99/Saburra, The Desert Slaughterer/@comment-26378838-20170304143617/@comment-9155327-20170306020042

So I made the changes that you suggested.

So I added AP Ratio's on all 3 basic abilities because of his role as a mage, and I do agree that mages do need AP ratios. I didn't add it to the ultimate mainly because having 3 scaling ratios is kind of overkill.

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Fists of Sand Formatting is Fixed

The Sand has been buzzworded

I specified the damage type for both

I fixed the typo of Sand Aegis to Desert Aegis

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if there are no problems with the kit, may I ask your opinion on the Lore?

Its so that I can improve my skills in making such things. I don't have much practice nor do people tell me what I need to add or change in the story