User blog comment:Ukanlos Subspecies/Quor'Gath, the Horror of the Void/@comment-36.229.191.141-20121226034008

You have good lore connections and a good foundation, but there is some serious work needed. The taunt, is in my opinion a little over done in league of legends, not to mention the cone effect and his Q seem to be all hacks of Cho'Gath, I understand that they are brothers but even then, too much. But your Ult is interesting and I love the Voidwalk Crash down idea.

1. I think you should remove the self stun idea, that's a little too-crippling, Make the passive bonus something like Slowed after the duration, that would be impressive.

2. That taunt cone thing, get rid of it and start afresh, maybe you could try something like Hecarim's Ult? Call it Unrestrained Bloodlust, and watch the guy dash a certain distance and doing extra damage to one specific target based on their missing health.

3. Q is too generic and too much of a Cho'Gath hack, in my opinion, Cho Gath's little brother should be more Damage-Dealing focused and less defensive tank than Chogath, then the two champs can synergize well, and you have a kickass lore piece working well. How about instead a Q that shoots a spine straight down a line, like Zyra's passive that knocks champions hit to the side? This gives him enough poke to be viable.