User blog comment:CrazyMori/Hakumen the White Void/@comment-3529242-20130203092723

I am a big fan of Hakumen (or any huge sword weilders for that matter), the concept is pretty solid. Might wanna make the follow up ability separatly like Lee to look clearer. Some ideas:

Q's passive is too much (12 attacks) plus he doesn't have any AS buffs, maybe if you add AS buff for Zanshin it would be worth it. Normalizing it a bit might help 8/8/7/7/6/6. As for the active I think the range is a bit too low, Riven's E has the same range but passes through champions, Sejuani's Q has 700 but feels like 400 because it stops when colliding, or you can make it each dash distance varries, first 450 second 375.

R: Make it channelling so he won't be spamming it while running away, and not a safe ability to use. As his signature move and only tanking ability I suggest your lower the CD.

HIs set is pretty strong, but he needs his magatama, which I assume it regens faster with CDR, I prefer the names in Japanese, as one of named after something (spoilers).

Good job overall.