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All fair points! I struggled with some of it (obviously) but I thought it was better to get the ball rolling. As they say, the fastest way to get a correct answer on the internet is to post an incorrect one. :P

Karma's ult is not truly unique but it is still comparatively unique. Calling it a "rare" ability would imply (to me, anyway) that there's more than just two champs who can do it.

I tried not to describe the abilities in detail, but rather create an impression of what they do. "Burning" here is meant both literally (she has a DoT spell, and a typical Karma build includes Liandry's) and figuratively ("damaging").

The game phase thing is tough. It's such a core part of her identity (partly because she has access to her entire kit at level 3) that I thought it was worth touching on, but I agree with you that it's too specific to include here. How else can we communicate this aspect of her kit? I tried to touch on that with "find the correct tools [for] any situation", as well as "equally at home" and "versatility", but none of those really explain it - a hypothetical champ could be versatile from level 11, you know?

Agreed on the item dependency. I was trying to emphasise that she works as a support, and since the whole point of a support is that they are not gold-dependent, I don't quite know how to communicate this.

I also wasn't sure about "supporting". I went back and forth between that and "protecting"... Actually think "protecting" is the better choice.

Take 2:

Karma, the Enlightened One is a noble mage-support who is equally at home protecting her allies or burning down enemies. Her reliability and versatility is tempered by the need to make careful decisions. Karma's powerful ability to enhance and empower a select spell allows her to find the correct tools to deal with any situation. Despite being highly self-sufficient, Karma is at her best when accompanied by her team, allowing her to turn the tides of battle with her offensive and defensive magic.

I think that's much better. :)