User blog comment:EloHell/William - Dragon Slayer/@comment-123.118.123.189-20121130120551

I like the concept, these are great skills, it'll make him a really good solo top and jungler. Few points.

1. You might want to change the passive to INCREASE the duration of all CC placed on a champ during the debuff, because there are no guarantees that they will build tenacity.

2. I think your W might want to become a skill shot similar to Hecarim's ult, a) because it'll make it look like fiery wings, and b) because I'm assuming your W is what applies the Searing Wings mentioned in the Q. I might be wrong, please explain the Two Cone concept.

3. You might want to change the damage from his ult to start off at 200% and scale to 300% cause currently what I'm getting is he deals additional true damage equal to 0.5% of the targets missing health, that seems a little weak, and should be boosted. so maybe make it higher because unless the target is building tank it won't do much good.

I really like your concept, it's a good all around champ, it just needs a few tweaks and it really looks like the ultimate dueler against Shyvana  (armor scaling damage, the snares, the true damage), which could allow Riot to include a new in-game interaction quest.