User blog comment:Tizop/Champion Concept/@comment-10768370-20150710194611

Ok, a couple of points here since you said you'd like criticism. Please don't feel offended ^^;

His passive seems rather descend, although I'm doubting to remove the minion-kill-AD as a good farmer will get around 150 CS in a game which means 50, nearly a free.

His Q seems decent, although the name's already taken by. Furthermore it's ok!

His W seems a bit sketchy, I don't really understand the mana cost to be honest... but furthermore it seems ok.

His E is ok except for the stun, oh god the stun, that stun duration is the same as. But already from level 1. And I don't know if you've ever been hit by a late-game Morgana snare but it's INCREDIBELY frustrating. So yeah, shorten that.

As last, on your ultimate, lower the channel duration as it's very hard to channel for 2 seconds straight in the middle of the enemy team. Also, remove the enemy-team dealing more damage. I know the mechanic seems interesting but you'd kill your own team in a teamfight. Also, try if you can give your champion some kind of name. Even something like Tempname is ok, just as long as it is somewhat easier to read :)