User blog comment:VirusVirus/CB1 - Neos, The Oracle's Light/@comment-26188361-20150325082413

For the ult you did not specify the duration of the Sun and Moon rings. It is implied by the maximum damage that both rings last for up to 5 seconds if Neos and his ally do not move too far away from each other, but the duration should still be told directly.

Oh and my brother suggests that the ultimate, Twin Lights, doesn't break if Neos and his ally get too far from each other. He suggests that the ult deal damage as long as the 2 champions are close enough. That way if a Tristana blows one of them away with her ult "Buster shot", then the two champions can get back together to still do some damage before Twin Lights wears off. Just a suggestion.

Overall I think this is a well-made champion. I question the "mage" typing as his main type since a lot of Neos' damage depends on his enemies. This lowers reliability. However Neos' abilities strongly suggest that he is a support so his main type may be better as a support.

Here are some corrections I made on your spelling and grammar. You did a good job of conveying your Champion concept through Google translate though. The bold is a small description of the changes that I made to each section of text that I made changes to. Please read them over carefully before deciding on whether you want to use my wording since they may not fully convey your ideas. Thank you for your time.

"Neos, the Oracle's Light is a Custom Champion for the Contest of Concept Battle #1."

'''[Small correction. Contstest should be Contest.]'''

P-Light's Eyes: "Every 8 th/ 7 th / 6th / 5th spell reveals the true in his next spell. If Neos casts a spell on himself or an ally, it will gain True Sight for 4 seconds (cannot reveal enemy ward with it), if Neos casts one against an enemy, it is revealed for the same duration."

'''[Some corrections. I am sorry, but I don't quite understand the wording for the first sentence. I get the point in that the nth spell will give the true sight effects that are explained in the rest of the passive, but the wording itself is a bit strange. ]'''

P-Light's Eyes: "Neos' spells deal 10%  / 15%  / 20% more damage against enemies that are stealthed ."

[Some corrections]

Q-Future Watched: "Active - Ally Cast: Neos shields the target allied champion for up to 5 seconds. If the shield is not broken, it will heal the ally for 50% of the remaining shield."

'''[Some corrections. I think you can increase the range a bit as it is kind of short right now. The restrictive element for the concept battle is already on the enemy cast so it's fine to raise the range up to 600 I think. ]'''

Q-Future Watched: "Active - Enemy Cast: Neos locks a seal onto an enemy champion for 3 seconds. If the enemy attacks 3 times in a row, it will  disarmed . If it casts a spell, it will be  silenced . If they travel more than 600 units, they will take magic damage."

[Some corrections]

W- Light's Arrow: "Neos' basic attacks shoots soulbound arrows, dealing bonus magic damage. Each 7 th/ 6 th / 5 th arrow will deal extra magic damage and counts as a spell for Light's Eyes."

[Some corrections]

E-Shine's Shield: "Neos protects his allies with a blinding light for a short duration. Enemies facing it will be  blinded while facing it and for 1 second after leaving the light."

'''[Some corrections. Question, am I right in thinking that this ability makes a ball of light around Neos that blinds enemies in range? The part about protecting his allies makes it sound like they all get it, but that would be a bit much. ]'''

E-Shine's Shield: "Enemies can cast a spell against the light to break it, but will be damaged with magic damage and  stunned if they do it."

[Small correction for the word "against".]

R-Twin Lights: " Active: Neos links himself and an allied champion with both sun and moon lights, creating a circle of light around each champion (400 radius), dealing huge magic damage to enemies inside both circles."

[Some corrections].

R-Twin Lights: "If Neos travels too far from his ally, both circles will disappear."

['''Correction from "to" to "too". Also, for clarification, the range between Neos and his ally before the circles break is 400 units correct? Just making sure.]'''

...and that's it. Great job and good luck on the Concept Battle (#1).