User blog comment:Panduhh/Alorra, Queen of the Underworld/@comment-128.230.241.195-20121212031537/@comment-1330314-20121212044042

@Anon: Now that you've described your main food source, maybe you could elaborate more on the champion herself? You know, as opposed to trolling on every other blog as you're currently doing.

Regarding your passive, I'm confused: do you gain one stack of +3% AP, capping at 5, or do you gain 5 instantly? In both cases, the scaling may be a little too high. 1% per champ is already a lot.

Lifeless Grasp is a bit like Lux's Q, except easier to cast. It's good, and works well with her other abilities. You may want to indicate the damage it deals, though, if any.

Bone Shredder looks a bit like Evelynn's Q. Do all six bone picks hit the target, or do they fire in a row? Again, you may want to indicate the damage it deals.

Call of the Dead is a great idea. There are very few minion master champs in the game, and so having a dedicated minion ability would be a nice gameplay mechanic.

Your ult looks like a great teamfight ability, and doesn't look broken either. As with the other abilities, though, you may want to indicate its damage output.

Overall, you've got a solid champion concept and great ideas to accompany it. You just need to detail her abilities a little more.