User blog comment:JmLyan/Zelun, the Crowd Herder/@comment-4948122-20130528170906/@comment-4381416-20130529015835

The way that the passive for the slow makes it sound like it would kill him. For example if the slow had a 40% potency then he would take 200(50x40) per second and that seems a little much. Also the CC on the Q is a very interesting idea but it seems a bit inconsistent at the same time.

These are just my honest opinions. The champion as a whole is very interesting and I commend you for it.