User blog comment:Ukanlos Subspecies/Vermin, The Elementalist/@comment-78.154.82.149-20121212220331

Bad points imo

-Low Base DMG on his spells as well as low scaling, his only good lategame spell is his Q with that hp burn

-W mana restore is pointless, it gives 100 mana at lvl 5 without any lategame potential, soraka gives you way more, she can also use it to silence and deal some dmg

-Why is Tri Force recommended if he has 2 high AP scalings and 2 medium/low Lich Bane seem better option

- Way too random, riot doesn't like randomization

-High cooldowns, way too high if you consider pathetic dmg on his skills

-I guess you meant to make him a jungler as he has 3-4 AOE dmg spells, healing ability, MAX hp based DOT and Easy to hit CC (i guess his W will work with very short delay or instantly) if he will be a jungler he will have really hard ganks, no way to chase opponent down, no way to close the distance before the fight as the E sub-ability works if you with with the main one

-What the hell even is 10dmg/lvl increase on W

-You have to make him AP because he has othing to scale with his autoattacks like nidalee Couguar Q and heal AS buff

-6% as increase? Really? Tier 1 masteries give you 4%, it could be at least 36% when maxed

-His CC is way too high, His dmg is Way too low, it says he is carry/assasin however you made AP bruiser with initiating capabilities

- i'm too tired to think of better so you can ignore that one

My advices

-He should be like Udyr imo, change R and make it 5lvl ability you can take at lvl 1

-Increase his spells base DMG, His actual base burst is 300+145+120+90, that gives you 655 at lvl 18 not including enemy resistances and if you hit with every spell, if he was meant to be an assasin change his R to some single target spell with increased AP ratio

Good points

-Passive effects on every ability

-Subability on almost every spell

-Idea of Great AP jungler however he has nowhere else to show, maybe support but way too low poking ability

-Obviou synergy with Archangell Staff, however not forced to buy it, you can manage without it

-Built in Tankyness, some DMG potential,

- Focus on one thing, it looks like you wanted to make a hero who will fit every role however:

As an AP caster-Pathetic Early game, Low Tier later

As a Carry - NOt even 1 steroid or eve AD increasing passive

As a Tank-Only he has i CC, complete 0 dmg, even rammus can do more dmg in teamfight

I gotta go to sleep maybe i'll think of it and make a continuation of this Essay :D