User blog comment:Draven, the Glorious Executioner/Dorte, Life of the Shurima/@comment-9245010-20130512135154

So she is a jung. Let's see:

Passive is the same as Alistars'. Her damage: 10+ 10%AP to mimions and champs alike. Ali's damage: 7 + 10%Ap to champs AND structures, 14+20%Ap to monsters. Alistar's passive is stronger, you should Dorte's.

Q - Basic bread&butter clear/gank skill. A well balanced skillshot with medicore damage and soft CC, low CD and a small manacost. You should clarify the slow's amount. Otherways a totally fair skill.

W - AA modifier, deals a fair amount of damage, makes her core item an IG, is at about the same level of strength as a Trund Q, but is AoE, so it should prove to better for clearing and worse in teamfights. Trund's Q has also much lower CD. Sej's W is a better AoE. A bit underpowered clearing skill.

E - her most interesting mechanic, basically a stacking garen passive, her only source of jungle sustain. Passively gives Life regen. At rank 1, 5 hp5, which means 1 hp/ sec, which means she wont get so much more sustain, as she will max it last. Lifereg is also an almost useless stat lategame, but 25 hp5 isn't that low, but for a tank, I feel it pretty weak. It's active is far more useful. Early on, before the first gank she can even have the full stacks, resulting in 75 bonus HP, which isn't that bad. Late, it would mean 225 Hp, which is not that good either. Underpowered regen, a bit weak heal.

R - This is where the real problem begins. It's a thornmail with a HUGE AP scale. Imagine Dorte building about 300-400 AP and resistances, and HP (for example abyssal for mr, even a thornmail or zhonya's for armor, a warmog, mr shoes, rabadon and one more Ap item. she would return more than 350% of the AA damage done to her. Before resistances ( guess). That would mean if Cait crits a 1000k unmodified HS into her (which actually deal less damage due to armor), cait would take 3500 damage. Which is too huge. You should reduce the Ap scale on the passive, as it would make her team focus the caster and w/e. Her ult's active is a burst, which isn't really good for a tank/initiator, and a soft CC, which is weak for an ultimate. All at all, its passive is broken, active is pretty weak (it could e.g. root instead.)

Another prob is that she is useless in teamfights: she is too weak to be an anti-carry, cannot initiate, and has no hard CC, which would make her one of the worst champs in the league

Please do not take this as a complaint, i just would like to help you with balancing the concept. Otherwise, I like her theme, fast clearing, and E really much, it's just she would be so UP this way :(