User blog comment:CrazyGothCat/Midnight - The Shadowslayer/@comment-7709681-20141104155313

First, she doesn't have an Innate Passive; now, that W should be an ultimate of its own (You don't list the amount of swords, but I'll assume 5 due to the artwork ---which seems to be the only good thing here-- that would make it deal either 200 / 300 / 400 / 500 / 600 (+ 150% AP) or 900 (+500% AP), since you have two listed sources of damage, and stun up from 1.8s to 4.2s from level 1), if not then the E (Or perhaps both) should be an ultimate of its own. Ridiculous ratios on W, E and R (+ 460 Armor and - 175 Magic Res., for 20s? I want some of the stuff that you were smoking when doing this).

Typos everywhere, unappealing lore (Begins sounding like it's Kassadin's Daugther, just to mention then that is another, unrelated girl that happens to pass through the exact same events that the aforementioned character did, just to magically appear in Valoran again, with amnesia and hunger for... shadows.), and complete inconsistency all along the kit.