User blog comment:TeamS5/Shin Lang, the Monk Templar/@comment-3391671-20130816084639

Passerby here.

First off...Q is, how to say, not displaying correctly, as you said. May be because you're missing certain brackets, "}}", or codings. Also, the E's image is not there, and sort of weird looking on its own...


 * His innate is unique, and I like it.


 * The Q is an AS steroid, with a chance to stun. The fact that stunning an opponent is chancy kind of gives the chance that this ability, at times, will only be an AS steroid. Maybe add "the first strike after activating this ability will always inflict the stun" or something. Just saying.
 * Also, God's Kick = Kick of the Gods?


 * W is a heal, which is probably helpful for this champion who is a fighter/assasin. But one thing that itches me is that...the fact the active regeneration increases from each damage dealt. I see a potential "jump into a swarm of minions, and activate W to get +100 regen per second". Gives me a weird feeling...
 * The heal should also scale instead, and that gain-heal-per-damage should have a maximum.


 * This E...is like an AoE version of Lee Sin's ult, with less damage. But two things: First, you're missing the knockback range. Second, I assume that the kick animation will only be 0.3 seconds long, maximum. Being untargettable is sort of unnecessary. If this ability is supposed to be able to somehow dodge Karthus Ult...I am not seeing that happen...


 * His ult is nice, although I do have to claim it is just a gap-closer version of his E, with more damage. Also, the scaling for the damage is awkward, since it just doubles each time. Most champions scales evenly, or close to evenly, right?
 * Not taking damage mid-flight is something I like; personally, I hate the times when I die mid-flight with champions like Tristanna and Xin Zhao...
 * Also, "not untargettable" might sound better as "targetable". Same definition.

You're not the only one who used that "Behold, a Sandwich" template. I used it for my concept, |Niina, the One-Yordle Circus]. We make mistakes on our templates sometime.

I deeply apologize if any of my comment seem rude or pompous, but the only intentions behind these comments is to help your concept become better, or at least from my view better. I like collaborating, and if you want to collab with any of your future concepts, I would be obliged to.