User blog comment:EloHell/William - Dragon Slayer/@comment-4022742-20121130132001/@comment-4022742-20121130182504

There's a small problem with your description for your Q:

"William smashes his target ... snaring them... on all targets.."

First part sounds like it's still 1 target while the following 2 hint that it's some kind of AoE, might want to clarify this.

And with the new bit you added to Searing Wave: "The next ability William casts on targets with Fatal Burns will slow them." the description on your Q that it consumes it and applies slow, is kind of redundant ;)

I prefer Talon Ripper, as it would be the first non tank type to poses the mechanic that currently only the tanks singed and volibear possess.

Does your Ult actually hit targets behind your original target? I think you could get away with that to be honest, That way you could form a combination attack going W -> Q -> R... Only applying the bonus true damage that was based off the first target hit. This way it becomes a choice between: "Do I hit the tank for the biggest amount of true damage to the cone behind him?" or "Do I attack the carry for the physical damage and go for the kill?"