Thread:Lesdin/@comment-3391671-20160912054757/@comment-27802145-20161002215443

"As for the knockback, if I'm reading it correctly, the maximum knockback is 300? What is the reason to utilize this knockback?"

If you were trying to claim that the knock back was to negligible, then point granted. When giving its initial value I just wanted to avoid it becoming too powerful in comparison with the others, but adjusting it to an increased variable amount should do it.

As for the lore, it's nothing short of brilliant. Though I must ask, why does Nine reveal herself near the end? I don't see much reason to it, though it was a valid way of announcing her appearance. Was she perhaps expecting the Ionians to just hand over the stone if they realized her not being a normal person, or just cause?

Anyway, really looking forward to some more of that written goodness, which I of course implore you to write more of at your leisure. If perhaps you presented me with a piece that demonstrates her scale of power, I could also make some changes to the kit accordingly as well. Some more glimpses of personality would be nice as well, though I guess that could wait.