User blog comment:Chase999/Tabbris, The Devil's Champion/@comment-27802145-20170605131727/@comment-3391671-20170605170533

Welcome back Chase. I wonder how you have been while away from the CCC scheme.

Lesdin already covers what thoughts I've had, in different words. To restate in my own words, the lack of background makes us readers question what kind of devil Tabbris is; the use of Irish not only makes the abilities too alien for those who do not know the language, but can also be perceived as a disrespectful implementation as the use of it is more for flavour than purposeful intention (unless Tabbris is an Irish devil surrogate); lastly, the abilities do not seem to be well constructed while also lacking much interaction.

While I know you for your intriguing champions that can be at times unbalanced, Tabbris seems to be even more over-ambitious than what you tend to create, having passed up on being too flavourful without the right mechanics. It makes me wonder if you are simply a little rusty from not releasing champions recently. Take time to tune this guy, and expand on those quotes so we can better understand what words he has to say to the world than just being selected and attacking.