User blog comment:Witchking99/Saburra, The Desert Slaughterer/@comment-3391671-20170315045030/@comment-9155327-20170315092811

Thank you, I have added your suggestions and changes to Saburra, I am really bad at grammar and punctuation so i thank you for the lovely work you have put into making it look good. :D

As for the Ultimate, please do note that he is a Melee Control-Mage Champion, it will be though for him to reach the squishy backline so most likely he will be using this ability against the melee frontline, which could actually stay alive at this point.

As for the feeling on an Inescapable fate, well this ability is suppose to give that feelinjg to people. A feeling of Deep Dread as you try to escape from something that you cannot escape from.

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Backstory

The original personality of Saburra? He was sealed at the age of 7 years old, I am not sure if you agree to this but I don't think the personality of a person is dictated immediately from the age of 7, but if you want to know about some of the thing he did when he was young, He basically did nothing, his mother and father refused to put other people in danger because of the prophecy that was given to their son. He wasn't allowed to go outside and he was home-schooled and his parents always had this scared look whenever they saw him and when he became gravely sick, his parents thought it was a miracle and left him in his room to die but he didn't, the sand from the outside absorbed the sickness and removed it from his system, then started rejuvenating his system once again.

When his parents saw he was swallowed by sand and still alive, they immediately called a man who sealed him. The boy grew within the seal but stopped aging at 18 years old. His Body stopped him from aging at this point due to the sealed magical surroundings and the intervention of destiny. He became Immortal after 100 years and became concious after another 1000 years.