User blog comment:Umbralis/Razen, the Edge of Time/@comment-24862418-20140718231319

1. The theme: sounds like Katarina. I have watch a series on Youtube that explain Katarina's magic blade similar to yours.

2. The Passive: Kinda weak. You don't need that much slow. Decrease the slow and buff damage or decrease cooldown. You can make other skill to apply TD, too. I know that feeling: don't know what passive to apply on our champ.

3. Q: Target unit or direction? Reduce damage by 1s?

4. W: Similar to MF Let's it rain. You seems like cooldown reduction.

5. Too many mark don't you think. Passive, Q and E. E should always apply TD on the secondary dash.

6. The ultimate is Katarina's. And you shouldn't add the slow. You are the kind of assassin mage. Multiple slow don't help you. Anyway, I like your 2nd ulti. So you throw a number of knife away and can blink to a target that hit to throw again? That would be cool. Like Katarina with mobility!!!

7. The only thing I can find the Time - theme is the cooldown reduction on Q and W. You should make a kit around a theme and focus on it. You did the knife but then what? Knife falling is Place Manipulation, not Time.