User blog comment:Witchking99/Celestia, The Empyrean Sovereign/@comment-3391671-20160607075324

Oh my, the bloat in the basic abilties... I will advise that the abilities needs to be simplified, especially because she is a transforming champion who is quite prone to that effect from the start.

Otherwise, I feel that, yet again, flavour text can be removed to allow more breathing room within the ability boxes.
 * To start, her R (her transforming switch) can be reduced to one description and one effect instead of being two separate "abilities."
 * I say to reduce it to one effect (which I believe the rooting effect is a nice touch) is because the Moon effect is weak early game and at most alright late game. It does have value for her AP focused kit, but I feel that a basic attack should not be modified in this manner.
 * Look at 's transform box too, since I believe adding the "cannot rank" description can be added here.
 * "Celestia calls upon the powers of her parents, changing form and attaining new abilities. Her next basic attack within 8 seconds after transforming will root an enemy for seconds but not deal any damage."
 * Her innate can also be simplified to the following:
 * "Celestia applies a mark of "Servitude" to champions within a 1250-radius. When in Sun Form, this mark is only applied to enemy champions, while in Moon Form, this mark is only applied to allied champions."
 * "Eclipse: When Celestia kills or assists in killing an enemy champion, Celestia enters Eclipse Mode, granting additional effects to her abilities for X seconds."
 * This straightens out the abilities and removes any unnecessary complications between "slaves" and "disciples".
 * I also wish to point out that while the idea of "Eclipse Mode" is wonderful, it creates a third ability for players to remember per ability. Essentially, she has 9 active abilities to work with. What happens if she is charging her Q, and suddenly she assists in killing an enemy champion before the end of the charge?
 * I would like to comment on the other abilities, but for now, as mentioned before, these abilities are absolutely bloated. Not only does it mean there are too much going on, but it also makes my head spin a little trying to understand what her kit does in an entirety.