User blog comment:ClayHuang158/Edas/@comment-27802145-20160721110146/@comment-27802145-20160721233715

Oh, okay I see.

It's most likely that I was just being pedantic then about the wording. If you've any interest in streamlining Edas' passive with the actual Wikia format though, you should probably check out Jhin and Yasuo's pages.

I don't think there're any critical errors with the passive, but the description does indeed have redundant components.