User blog comment:CasperNox/Qorkhoi, the Void's Creeping Death/@comment-128.187.97.20-20120302013249

Suggestion: Passive is that when his health drops below 40% he gains the "Hardcore" buff, which stuns the next champion attacker for 1.5 seconds. This buff can only be activated once every 90 seconds, and is not affected by CDR.

Make his Q a skillshot with a speed like Amumu's bandage toss. And make the DoT part weaker. more like .4 scaling.

Raise W's Aoe. It's a soft CC so it needs more size. And reduce its cost.

Make his ult be a channel more like recall. If he's damaged while channeling, the ability goes on a 3 second CD. Also, it needs a indicator where it is going to land, like Pantheon's ult.