User blog comment:Thurismund/Sarket: The Scorpion Warrior/@comment-3391671-20161222005732

Hidden buffs such as that one with are never so strong, and are usually minimal in impacting the game, since two champions shouldn't be solely chosen because they have a hidden synergy. Here, you grant Sarket bonus AS and bonus true damage on-hit just by having an allied Skarner nearby. Most hidden buffs are nonexistant (bonus in killing a specific enemy; minus  when teamed with specific champions), with the / conflict having / extra. Others are pure cosmetic. Either nerf that hidden passive to the level of minimalism or remove it completely.

There is much to learn with formatting, so I won't point that out. But from a design standpoint, there is a lot of lack of information throughout the kit. How long are the CC in Q? Why the style shield on Scorpian W? Again, why is a basic ability stronger than 's ult? What's the point of leveling R when there is no scaling? When creating a kit, make sure to fulfill all these information bits, even if incomplete.

If you ever need help with the concept, then ask around users who are prolific with their concepts. While there is overlap with Scorpians (And you seem to have intended that), there is always a way to at least make a custom champion more presentable.