User blog comment:Fleufoille/Bonnie, The Mistress of Weapons/@comment-26815373-20151026133344


 * Bonnie used Confusion!*


 * Critical hit!*


 * It's super effective!*

But in all seriousness, what is her theme? She's 'the Mistress of Weapons', but her abilities imply that she uses only one weapon which is an... enchanted gun... hammer? Jayce, anyone? She's also implied to be a 'commander' of sorts, whose bullets steal armor (?!), whose smoke screen puts Graves' to shame, and whose ranged attacks heal her allies?

Maybe I'm missing something, but she seems all over the place. That's not to say she isn't balanced, or that this kit couldn't work, but rather why does she exist? What archetype are you touching on that we haven't seen before? What niche, both gameplay-wise and narratively, does she occupy? What fantasy does she fulfill that makes her interesting and recognizable across cultures?

This could work as a rough draft or a sketch, but on the whole I think you need to mull it over some more.