User blog comment:Godasshole/Nero, the Nightblade of Darkness/@comment-4384280-20140430030437

It's an OKAY kit. I like it, but I think the base damage on the Q is far too much. However I cannot quite understand all of it. A broken champion template (which activates the OCD inside me), some grammar errors. You should probably also specify that Black Heart lets you activate Shadow Blitz.

I suggest fixing the errors and try to improve your grammar. It helps :) You also forgot to add "Custom champion" to the categories.