User blog comment:BlitzerRyuusei/Octane, the Shadow of Fear/@comment-5433392-20130822202806

W is extremely powerful. A free reveal while stealthed? It is like rengar's ult but with no cooldown. The mana cost in the only thing limiting it and with blue buff that wouldn't be much of an issue much of the game.

The range on the ult is also too high for a un dodge-able pull. That is a free instant kill with no counterplay at all. Way too powerful and would be perma banned for it. In addition, the damage on the ult is extremely high. If it were bonus AD I could agree with it, but having it as base AD means at level 6 with no items or runes it is still already hitting at 225.

Your abilities are cool and sound interesting, but the they also need work to not just be way over powered.