User blog comment:The Ruined King/Antagon/@comment-12049719-20140809114033

Your champion seems interesting. Here are a few comments/suggestions I have for you.

Passive- Too strong during team fights. At max level, 9 (4+5) = 180. 4 representing your allied champs, and 5 being enemy champs. That's a ridiculous 180% lifesteal there. I'd suggest limiting the lifesteal bonus to enemy champions and adjust the lifesteal amount. Like 3/4/5% lifesteal per enemy champion within range, for a max 15/20/25% lifesteal. And I'd suggest he have a passive 5% innate lifesteal (separate from the bonus lifesteal from enemy champions)

Q- It isn't "TOGGLE PASSIVE", mind you. It's just "TOGGLE." Other than that, I think this ability is fine.

W- You actually wrote health twice lol. But 20-33% missing health is a huge amount. Say you have about 3500 health, and you lost about 1000.

3500- 1000= 2500.

33% of 1000 is 330.

Add that amount to your armor and mr you have from your items (most of the time, you'd have around 200+ armor and 150+ mr for a bruiser build I think) You'd be getting A LOT of armor, even if it's for a short duration. Lower the missing health scaling, increase the duration and decrease the cooldown.

E- I think this is a channeled, weaker version of Cassiopeia's ult. In my opinion, it doesn't suit him. Maybe change it to a AoE slow? Your choice though.

R- The duration of the lifesteal feels a bit too short. But the real problem here is the 50% reduced movement speed. That is overkill. How about only your allied champions gain the movement speed, but you do not?