User blog comment:KaosCrash/Dark Demacian Champion Concept/@comment-5418658-20121010023627

I understand it's your firs time, I've been there too.

Well,here is my comment. He is too OP. Never put a passive like that,it will be abused,he may not have high AP ratios but he deals % of enemies HP which is much more painful than high AP or AD ratios. Imagine using evelyns ult on a large basis with suppress. your ULT btw is very misleading,you said it deals damage equal to enemies max health but there is an amount of 20/25/30% of magic damage,what is that value for? damage to yourself or enemies? and oh,terrible skill 2,thats very sick,it would bring down champs easily because of the % damage. Mordekaiser also as an ability that rates with % of HP but hes is weaker and its his ult so he needs to use it wisely,same with evelyn. The skill 1 too,that is pretty OP,you can dodge many things: Nidalee spear,Karthus Requiem,Nunu's Absolute Zero(even when beside him), Lux ult and etc., too OP bro. Lessen some effects.

Well,its a start and thank you for sharing your ideas. It will help you make good champion concepts some day :)