User blog comment:C9 Teemur/Paige, the Phoenix Guardian/@comment-3391671-20170226131234

Finally found the time to swoop around and get to reviewing this champion. Yet, if you do not mind a bold claim, I do not have much good to offer, seeing what has been below. Improvements could be taken, but please, take these comments into good consideration. If you are even an ounce unclear of our/my intentions, then please question them to us instead of guessing that you understand what we are trying to tell you. Fiegning understanding is an even worse error in life than admitting one's inability to comprehend what has been stated.

Kit

 * Starting off with stats, I believe people have made their claims below, and I have nothing else to say otherwise. Stats can change, but they should represent the champion than be a mockery.
 * The passive is still not so impressive than it was before. It's much more clear, admittedly, but the likes of the on-death effect and that increase through Ash do not look like admirable effects if not appropriate to the game.
 * The idea of gaining from Ash may seem alright at first, but soon becomes grossly unfair in that in the early game, Paige has  up until the ult is unlocked at level 6 (well, also 10% at level 20%), since Ash is not consumed by any abilities until ult. I wouldn't support this kind of loose passive and would recommend reworking the Ash resource mechanic so that is less a  ult-style cooldown and an actual resource.
 * As Clay mentioned, this on-death effect can be powerful, even if it does look outside the box. As already pointed out, it grants post-death vision of area with no way for enemies to counter it. If she dies because of a lane battle, it won't be as useful as when she dies in Jungle, but otherwise, it's extended vision.
 * There is also the issue with the respawn mechanic. Even with that cooldown (which is rather low), Paige is given a free lift back to her lane, or to where she wants to go on the map based on where she navigated her Phoenix.
 * Overall, I find it that this passive would need a change in regards to how Ash works and a overhaul of the second effect, if you want her to keep such an effect.
 * I won't tread on the writing style, since it has been a persistent item that ability descriptions will not be written in a concise manner. Plus, as I repeat, I will not take the readability of a work into harsh consideration, since it may not be your first language.
 * Q is a a skillshot, but what I find rather unnerving is that an ability that talks about fire deals only physical damage. I may be enforcing that fire should only deal magic damage, but I'm sure you agree that a burn is not physical damage, but something akin to what magic damage is supposed to be. Other   deal magic damage, so why doesn't Paige!?
 * Otherwise, the ability deals tremendous worth of damage (130%) for an ability with no cost. I would also believe that the base damage of a special arrow wouldn't be below the base damage of her normal arrows. Thus, I recommend that you reduce that burning effect's damage as you raise the impact damage to the appropriate 100%.
 * Making the base damage of an ability simply is unheard of, and possibly for a reason, one that is not as visible. Nonetheless, instead of not thinking of base values and sticking a "50% AD" to the base damage, I believe you should stick to what is usually done and give a base values.
 * As for the theme of this ability... I've seen some bizarre effects from your champions, and this one is no different. Why would someone who is the guardian of a Phoenix toss their egg as a weapon!? I will not take the reason of "Well, they can revive themselves anyways, so the phoenix is not dead." This ability on its own is simply a way to tarnish the image of this champion as someone who is a literal egg-tosser. While no one mentioned this before, it may have been because of how they were focusing on the mechanics, not the image of it. Nonetheless, I feel the need to express my disgruntled feelings about this ability.
 * Unless that egg is hard, and I am not reading this ability wrong, the damage dealt is yet again nothing physical in nature as it is about the Phoenix coming forth from the egg. Yes, Paige is a Marksman/Slayer, but that would be a bad justification to make something magical deal physical damage.
 * The connection to Flame Flight feels rather forced and incomplete. Thus, I would recommend rethinking about this part of the ability.
 * As to where this buff comes from, I don't know. I find it included just to justify Paige in being a Marksman and no more (I'm starting to believe you do not know how to construct a proper Marksman, since this kit is missing lots of vitals).
 * This ability is quite the mess and does not give a clear definition as to what its function is. On one hand, I feel it's a defensive stance, but on another, it is supposed to be some AoE magic damage dealer... I do not like repeating myself, but a recommendation for reconsideration of this ability's workings.
 * I also am starting to feel the same issue I had with Jericho (yes, not "Brayan"). The Phoenix here has much more significance than Paige. I would once again be fine if the Phoenix was doing everything instead and not her. I would even recommend that you create a Marksman who is not accompanied by a companion ot see if you can even make a compelling champion who does not need to crutch on their partner.
 * And then we have the Phoenix being his own being, as a pet to Miss not-really-the-Guardian-of-the-Phoenix. I do not like sounding negative, but I am not pleased with this ability that is simply a summon Tib, I mean a summon-pet ability and nothing more. Why is Paige even a Marksman/Slayer?

In conclusion for the kit, there are quite a bit of flaws. While you do uphold the proper standing of using templates, the champion herself is lacking in a strong character in-kit, a kit that functions correctly to their title, and theme that feels more for the Phoenix than Paige, who should be the focus instead. I'll elaborate more about lore below, since from what I've read so far... I have lots to say, even though I gave the advice below...

Lore
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