User blog comment:Pjheric/Iza, the Void Ninja (temporary, editted 2nd version)/@comment-3391671-20160711062901/@comment-3391671-20160714030043

New critique:
 * From the looks of the new Q... since there are not much values, I cannot say much about how much it will deal damage, but the trigger is what gets me. This is similar to 's old passive where every 5 strikes, he would strike twice, not consecutively. The two seconds "cooldown" is meaningless unless Iza has more than . Overall, this passive doesn't bring anything characteristic to Iza and in general to gameplay.
 * No power-ranking on abilities please (as in, "if champion has a stack, they get this stat; if they have two stacks, they get this stat). Not only does it mean that a lot of random stats and utility is given to a champion, it also creates a burden of knowledge. It also looks like a design where the creator was indecisive of what to give the champion, becoming a total irresponsible mess. As you might note, any existing champion with this kind of mechanism is not within my scope of appreciation.
 * It also seems like you didn't take heed of my advice for how the active works. It still looks like a theme, name and ability affect that have little relation to each other. I would see that this would be a skillshot that stop at the first enemy champion hit, dealing magic damage and casting vision on the champion for 3 or 4 seconds.
 * There is no slashing in this "Rift Slash". What it does include is a dash, a MS and AS buff and a Malzahar style AoE that closes when an enemy is rooted (and from the way it's worded, the root will ever only affect one enemy). Some thematic changes could make this much more interesting (for example, Iza travels through a Void Rift, with the Rift staying behind and dealing damage for a few seconds), but otherwise... it's another lacking ability.
 * Also, no need for the slow. As there is already one in the kit, don't add more overlapping slow effects in the kit. And please do not source, because IMO, as a concept, he needs some utility tone downs and a buff to damage instead.
 * More TBA