Thread:Willbachbakal/@comment-1876049-20150728142137/@comment-1330314-20150729032622

That looks pretty nice! Here's the one ability I would rephrase:

Change from: "Through infecting multiple opponents with his deadly poison, Twitch is capable of inflicing heavy burst damage"

To: "With attacks coated in deadly venom and heavy follow-up burst, Twitch excels both in short ambushes and protracted combat"

For:

"Twitch, the Plague Rat, is a sneaky marksman who lurks in the shadows, waiting for an opportunity to skewer his opponent's with a flurry of poisoned bolts. With attacks coated in deadly venom and heavy follow-up burst, Twitch excels both in short ambushes and protracted combat, and his ability to enter stealth at will aids him in wisely picking his fights, a feature he sorely needs due to his fragility and lack of escape tools. While vulnerable and weak early on, in the later stages of the game Twitch becomes particularly dangerous, easily shredding through entire enemy teams if left unchecked."