User blog comment:PotatoaDancing/Keras, the Prodigy of Serias/@comment-25016493-20141121211755

looking good. I would change his basic abilities to make marks on their targets, much more clear as to their functionality (next spell on someone with a certain mark=that effect). Don't worry about dipping into something leblanc's done, she's only got one (two?) abilty(ies?) that does (do?) that.