User blog comment:Takingday/Item ideas for Melee Carries/@comment-3391671-20161222015158/@comment-3391671-20161225023242

Before anything, punctuation please (the periods and commas), along with spacing out different questions (in source mode, the one with brackets, you need to double space to space items enough). It's hard to read sentences when they are mished and mashed.

is Ionian. He was someone brought from there to Noxus, then saved by, only to be brought back to Demacia. Read the lore.

Deflect and Redirect are fine to leave untouched, but when an item has two lengthy effects (beyond 2 sentences), that is where the trouble comes. Nonetheless, as you are doing, keeping to what is supposed to be iconic with these weapons is the way to go.

When asking others, all you have to do is remain humble and pleasant. Ask "May you review my concept? I believe your feedback would be much appreciated." Also, make sure to wait a few days before replying back if the receiver does not reply; if you ask three times total in a row without response, drop that person since the person is likely busy or inactive.

There's more that can be advised, but they can also be learnt through experience. If you ever need help or have such questions again, do not be shy in asking me through the message walls. I'm always pleased to be of help to those willing to get projects done on the wiki.