User blog comment:Psychofreak2/Kyra - Chimera/@comment-3391671-20171104223159

Either I am being forgetful or the likes, but seems like you had updated that lore a bit a while back. I should be more attentive to custom champs like these.

I've been meaning to offer a review of the story aspect for a good week now, but have been juggling more than I can. My apologies if you had been waiting for the months. I am still busy, but would like to offer a small comment at the least so that you are aware that I have noticed the changes. What I can so for now is that you had broadened Kyra's story from being from only the jungles, but to also other landmarks. This is a nice expansion, but there are still some shortcomings. For example, I find that Kyra is still receiving too much from you, the author. By this, I mean that Kyra isn't expressing much of herself, since instead it feels like the story is the one leading her to glory. She goes about, and the plot follows her. In the eyes of believable storytelling, this tale feels powerful but rather empty. For me at the least, there needs to be more self-expression, and one way to do this is to have less aimless "I fight random enemies" and setup a more centered quest. For now, her quest is simply broad and reckless, thus makes it hard at least for me to think she's nothing more than your typical pelt hunter with powers dialed to 11; a compelling character (especially a compelling hero) should be more than just the powers they have, but also the way they use them and how mindful they are with their powers and without them. For now, Kyra exhibits none of the traits above and is nothing more than a badass but plain pelthunter. Take it that there might as well be other people else than myself who is thinking: "Where is the smirking evil but sly hunter I've been expecting?"