User blog comment:Johnarch77/Dual Wielder- Champion Concept/@comment-3391671-20170729073207/@comment-3391671-20170729180712

There are surely dual wielding champions, but only in visual. I too would push for a champion who actually acts upon being a dual wielding swordsman or the likes, but if that's the case, as you had understood from my criticism, the kit doesn't offer that aesthetic.

Critical strike is surely not so easily controllable, but you are also then making it that "he can control his powers by buying some items." I do not know how that would fare for his lore, but I do not find it to be the best way to implement a thematic part of their backstory into the kit. It's been done before with other stats (limited AS for ), but not every implementation is perfect.

The lack of backstory is so detrimental to the champion because of League's model of champions with cohesive and unique backgrounds. This kit would be review for solely its kit if it was another MOBA, but if there is a lack of thematic connectivity to the kit in League, then people question why the champion even has the theme in the first place. has been part of this discussion for a while, since he's not only supposed to be a hack-n-slash demon-warrior but a monster who incites others to war (which is not seen in his kit at all). I won't call it a mistake, but surely it was something that was missing.

I won't ask for any large changes, but I will ask if you brainstorm further how to make his dual-wielding theme unique. As mentioned before, this kit can easily be changed to suit another weapon, so other measures should be taken to make it truly for "two swords in each hand." It may even require large changes, and as a content creator, that is one resolution you should be ready to take if you want this champion to take its next step towards being a fantastic Stellar Knight. You can stay to a template, but keeping aspects for the sake of keeping to "the original model" will not prove well, and that's something I've learnt with some of my own concepts. I too want to see a Stellar Knight, as much as you do.

If ever, you could even hop of discord, where you can PM me easily for a nice discussion. The LOL wiki also has a custom champ channel for discussing these items. Join us. ;3