User blog comment:Nhan-Fiction/(Custom, Fan-Made Champion) Kiya, the Fervor of the Sands/@comment-4068613-20130416042503

This is...a lot of words.

Alright. Well. Regarding the second version of her W, I'd recommend a duration for the blind/silence that doesn't last 2.25 seconds. That's quite a duration for what is effectively a stun without the movement negation.

As well, on her ult, I note that stacking each quarter-second is a weird value. Cutting that back to each half-second seems more fair, seeing as it's essentially an AOE Nasus wither with a hilarious amount of damage tacked on. And the radius is ridiculous. There is no viable formation of the enemy team that doesn't allow you to cast it on all of them simultaneously. It has a diameter larger than the AA radius of the most utilitarian carries. You can cover an entire lane with it. You can barely flash halfway through it, you can't even QSS/cleanse out of it efficiently. It seems to me like a 100% successful gank in the laning phase. It would be overpowered if it had no damage component.