User blog comment:Shinaliss/Eikingbub, the Bubble Sorcerer/@comment-10958553-20141122070649

Hey, you posted on my blog post and I decided I should come around and give you some feed back.

As for your champions concept but some of the abilities are a little unclear.

The E confuses me, Im not sure if it places a bubble, or just makes existing ones act like little bombs.

The ult uses the word ball instead of bubble btw but agian I am a little confused with it. It feels like it should fire them randomly in a cone?

Kit wise I think your guy here needs a bit of a revision, and here is why: He doesn't manipulate his bubbles enough. You should look at Syndra for some inspiration here. She has an ability that creates balls. it deals damage, but its main purpose is to make balls. That is your Q, however it starts with a 12 second cooldown, so you can't exactly get a lot of bubbles out their.

I would suggest a slight rework of everything. There is nothing wrong with second drafts of your champions, I have done that with tons of mine, most of which I thought were league ready the first time.

In this rework I would suggest making his abilities rank up like Udyrs, with this current Q (with some changes like cooldown) moved to his R if that makes sense. That gives you the abiltiy to have one ability be in charge of making bubbles, leaving you three (and your inate) to manipulate your bubbles.

By the way, you can move the bubble jump to his passive. "By clicking a nearby bubble, Eikingbub will leap onto it and will bounce agian in that direction." so if you are near a bubble you can hop from it?

These are some ideas for you to think over. I really enjoyed reading your champion and look foreward to more in the future.