User blog comment:Aldari1994/The Man Beast/@comment-5077844-20150731092005/@comment-25235491-20150802110711

GutsyTick: Accusing people of having no soul and no morality does not make you better. You're visibly an example of a thing you should have called out, seeing as you barely tell to "go all the way and provide constructive criticism". This is as easy to say "My tips for jungle? Gank shit, don't feed, buy wards. You're on your way to Diamond." Plus you're not exactly providing advice to Aldari, which - since you're here - you should have done.

Let me try one second to reinterpret Keith's comment. Because someone needs to do it:
 * We don't have stats to judge this champion on except the range. 175 is relatively high melee range, but if he's a beastman-something, he should probably fight with bare hands or short-ranged weapons like daggers. Taking Rengar (who is an anthropomorphic beast) as an example, your champ should have 125 attack speed. PS's thoughts:
 * P: It's rather simplistic and gives AD against specific targets. The fact that it needs to be stacked up to 10 times to reach a cap of 40 bonus AD at level 16 makes it look relatively low-impact. PS's thoughts:
 * Q: An autoattack reset that synergizes simply with the passive. Perhaps too effectively as the passive scales this skill's damage up and this skill scales the passive stacks up. PS's thoughts:
 * W: 150% AP ratio is extremely high. Even AP specialists rarely have 100% AP scaling, let alone 150%. Plus investing levels into this skill isn't really worth it. PS's thoughts:
 * E: Very reminiscent of Warwick's own E, which doesn't exactly go in your champ's favor in terms of finding his niche. Also, non-linear scalings are rare and usually are done as answers to specific problems, so by default I advise against it. PS's thoughts:
 * R: That ultimate isn't really play-making as much as non-decisional automatic counterplay on your enemies' damage. The 75% cap is easy to reach since, even with no build, you get around 100 AD at level 18 (this is counting no Dragon or Baron buff and a zero-AD build), which means 30%, and the scalings are somewhat easy since Infinity Edge alone gives you 8 extra percent damage reduction. Plus, the cap is above Alistar's own ultimate which only has this effect (except the break-out-of-CC initiating part). This makes your champion as unstoppable as a tank, while doubling your passive stacking and halving spell costs, plus extending its duration on-kill. This sounds like you bashed together the ults of Alistar, Master Yi, added some extra passive synergy and halving spell costs. Which makes no sense at all. From this ult alone, it looks like you want your character to be a tanky-mage-bruiser-DPS-assassin, who excels at everything. The only thing is this doesn't bring anything unique to your champion. PS's thoughts:
 * "The Man Beast" isn't exactly a unique concept in the first place, since Warwick and Rengar both these dawgs fill this niche each in their own way. You should get a more precise idea on how you want this guy to play, otherwise even reworking it might not save it. PS's thoughts: