User blog comment:BestNaPlayer/Drak the Twisted Mage/@comment-25235491-20150817204451

Please try to review the comments on your previous champions before spamming poorly-executed champion ideas. Overall, this champ is forgettable due to the lot of flaws in its design. Hope the creator will explain things out here.
 * Stats: Once again, the magic resist is off, the armor is obnoxiously low, the health regen and mana regen start out underpowered but scale too well, etc... Most of the pitfalls we've talked about in your last champion idea.
 * P: This is not a support ability. Heck, he's not even a full support, simply because he has this passive. 45% bonus AP for 12 seconds on champion kill? This is a mage's ability, as your AP instantly hyperscales when you get kills.
 * Q: Early Rito ability. A passive that's forgettable, a huge mana cost, for a freakin targeted stun.
 * W: Not to be confused with the item Relic Shield'... lol. This is huge for a 2-man shield, add to that that there's an on-break effect. That's too many things piled up. The on-kill passive is unfitting to the name of the ability, but I'll pass.
 * E: Pure damage? Where are you from? Here, this is called true damage. On such a short cooldown, you're going to melt everything... if you're not out of mana before people start dying.
 * R: ... Wut. An ult is supposed to be defining for a champion, but here... random movespeed buff every 20/15/10 seconds? Okay? And it's what? A simple targeted steroid. And it buffs all stats? ... Far too vague. This probably only serves to make broken things more broken. At level 3 it's +75% everything?