User blog comment:Endless Exceptions/Ritz, The Discordant of Sound/@comment-4881935-20120316054349

Ahh, don't be so hard on yourself. No one is perfect in writing and I like your writing. At least you have an idea and put it down with words. About the story itself, it got my attention and I am quiet curios to see what Rumble does to poor little Ritz.

If I could edit it, I would. But I can't so.....sorry.