User blog comment:Jao and jom/Champion Concept: Aselia, the Blade's Edge/@comment-5266525-20121022152243

Funny, thing is, out of all the things that got to me, her lore is the thing that makes me scratch my head. xD Her childhood in Noxus doesn't match the descriptions given in canon (where daughters are typically raised to be proud family-raisers). It's also odd that she willingly drew out the torture for her victims yet suddenly does a heel face turn (or a face heel turn, I forget which is which) when she sees a mother being killed, which is an unexpected kind of trigger.

Of the champion herself, she should not receive natural Mr/lvl, as she is an assassin. Her designation as a carry seems misplaced since she her base statistics are quite high and she is melee.

Lotus Storm and Ethereal Blades lack a cooldown and energy cost. Assuming neither of these abilities are spammable, her passive doesn't seem all that useful as she is unable to proc them repeatedly and consistently refund her energy. You should state how long the Greivous Wounds debuff lasts for.

Staggering Blow has scaling energy costs - these should not grow with levels as they clash with the static energy pools of their champions. Also, that's the name of Nautilus' passive, so you should change that. You should also clarify the shape of the reticule - is it a cone, or a point-blank ability?

Avoid redundancies! You shouldn't state specific values in the tooltip and then add to it in the leveling section. Just state that allies are granted a shield and then also say how long that shield lasts.

Her ultimate is very confusing. The wording suggests that it's a targetted ability (not discriminating between either minions or champions) but then states that the blades have a set duration, as if its a selfbuff ability. You should reword it to be more clear.

Finally, because of her good base stats you should probably change her total AD ratios to bonus AD - you want her to build damage to deal damage, not build tanky and still deal a lot of it.