User blog comment:Lyndongwapo/Stalus, the Hope of Crystals/@comment-3391671-20170811012902

A... hero from Kalamanda, eh? A nice change of place-of-origins, and knowing your other concepts, I am not going to spite the background and theme which tend to be baseline alright. What I will criticize quickly is your use of words and grammar.

I've told you man times before to brush up on word usage and make sure the language you use is suitable for League. However, you continue to use terms such as "in over" and the likes. This time though, I see more strayed uses of terms, such as "continuous" or "future." I recommend that you observe live champions who use similar terms, and copy their choice of words. I may be able to discern what this kit is trying to do, but not everyone can read it as clearly.

I also find that the kit is rather aimless without knowing your train of thoughts. Please explain to us what is the theme behind the kit and how you came to produce such a kit.