Thread:Willbachbakal/@comment-1876049-20150728142137/@comment-1876049-20150729001636

But the thing is, I what to define what really is unique about the champion. Yes, Twitch may be a hypercarry, but so is Kog'Maw, or Tristana. He may have burst, but so does Graves. Spending valuable lines in their descritpion stating that they're hypercarrys that could be better used explaining how Twitch has stealth and poisons, or Kog'Maw has extreme range, or Tristana has her cool explosive gimmick comboes, or how Graves is more resilient and "in your face" than the usual marksman seems wasteful.

Still, let's try this:

"Twitch, the Plague Rat is a sneaky marksmanwho lurks in the shadows, waiting for his opportunity to skewer his opponent's with a flurry of poisoned bolts. Through infecting multiple foes at once with his poison, Twitch is capable of inflicting heavy burst damage, and his ultimate allows him to easily shred entire teams apart within seconds if left unchecked in the later stages of the game. Twitch also has the rare ability to enter stealth at will, allowing him to lay in wait to overwhelm unsuspecting foes or slink away from unfavorable fights, something necessary due to his fragility and poor escape potential otherwise."

Makes both a more direct version to his heavy burst damage and his potential for team shredding later in the game.