User blog comment:V3ctor/First Champion Concept/@comment-3976638-20110813171359

How often will his innate proc? How I understand what you've written is that he gains stealth and movement speed as soon as the enemy gets within range, but after it wears off there's no residual effect. The problem I see with this is that in a teamfight where everyone is in range an extended period of time, his innate is pretty much useless and he'll be a sitting duck after those few precious seconds.

As long as his Q is not a percentage of max health TRUE damage, it sounds alright.

I personally would extend the effect of the silence on his W by .5 or 1 second - .5 seconds flat doesn't seem rewarding enough to be used consistently.

Ultimate looks like it would be hard to balance for the following reason: Fiddlesticks has a 3 second fear already, and that is obscenely long in its own right; to make the ultimate viable it would have to be even longer or have an additional effect. My personal opinion, which I've considered for my own champion concepts but could never fit into the theme I wanted (but seems like it would be perfect for your idea) is an AoE stealth that effects your entire team: something similar to Akali's W, but on steroids.

However much or little you may choose to read this, I like the concept and the skillset you created to go with it, nice work.