Thread:Willbachbakal/@comment-1876049-20150801141916/@comment-1330314-20150802174527

I think it does have a lot of flavor. You mention his soul collection and his lockdown potential in a way that really fits his theme, which I like. If you really feel like he needs more flavor, perhaps you should emphasize his undead jailer aspect by framing his repositioning/lockdown potential in a manner that also fits his theme, but the bio you have is fantastic.