User blog comment:LancettaBreeze/Cassus, the Ember of Revolution/@comment-3391671-20180302003353

Quick tip: be careful with diction. I refer to the use of words such as "abstinance." Abstinance holds a nuance (at least to my knowledge) that the target of the restraint is something caused by compulsion, which in most examples is sexual desires and alcohol. However, rules/policies are not like that at all, as they are possibly the opposite of compulsion. Thus, abstinance is the incorrect term to use; if your aim was to make Cassus sound good.... it is better to demonstrate "not following the rules has its merits" instead of simply saying "XX ignores the rules." As of now, it sounds like you attempted to use fancy language through a thesarus.