Talk:Sivir/@comment-26350359-20150427201931/@comment-25970203-20150521230148

I'm just gonna let you know that your build has some notable weaknesses that you can't fix with this finished build. These are legitimate concerns that can be fixed if you are playing with a group of friends but not so much when on your own in soloQ. assuming the standard builds are IE, PD/SS, BT/BOTRK, LW, Boots, Defensive or the less common Trinity, BT/BOTRK, LW, Boots, IE, Defensive

First armor pen. If a teammate builds the new BC it's fine but otherwise you dont have what it takes to beat down a tank which is a big deal in this tank meta.

Second defense. you have no protection outside of your own skill. One positioning mistake against an assassin or some fighters and you will die. even a spell shield wont save you if a jax breaks it with his W and while his E is up and then stuns you. Or if a rumble ults your whole backline then you're still screwed. That's why most adcs get banshee's or GA. With something like a lulu thresh or janna to protect you it wont matter as much, but you will still be in a rather precarious position.

Third gold. Even if you take avarice it'll still be a really expensive build. Of note, trinity should probably be built first since it falls off more late game than IE. With its burst it'll help your mid-game but building it later will make you lose out on your dueling potential.

Fourth crit strike. I feel like you have too much. Normally IE + Trinity will yield 30% crit strike making trinity carries weak late game like corki. With the 15% from yomuus you get 45%. From my history of trying out max crit builds in my pre 30 days i found that max crit isnt all that great. With the 35% from PD i feel like its too much crit strike and you wont get much damage increase from it.

Personally, while several of the points are situational i feel that either you could leave yomuus and substitute PD for LW or a defensive item or sub out both for a shiv if you are really intent on getting the stat boosts of a crit AS item but yomuus alone is still decent.

TL;DR

Sub out PD for anything else. Your build's not good for dealing with tanks and dosent afford a lot of protection at any phase, but this is more standard with ADCs in general. I feel that it is more a situational build than a standard build. Your teammates are just as important in making this build viable as the enemy team.

this is my opinion take it or leave it.