Talk:Renekton/@comment-5009341-20120911115644/@comment-5009341-20120911142633

^what is missing, or what part do u dont like?

i tried to give some inspiration to those who actually want to change it, it isnt set in stone, rather an idea, which has to be improved so it actually becomes good.

i by myself reread a post that i wrote some time afterwards and try to see what didnt work out, or what i couldnt point the way i imagined, when i wrote the post

ur critic might help, so plz tell me what do u not like and especially why