User blog comment:BestNaPlayer/Prek the Hunter/@comment-24036535-20150912162847/@comment-27002630-20150924110714

I agree with you. First of all, I would like to review all of this champion. Let's see the things that you should improve.

Passive: The range is pretty great, I like that. The thing is as same as the comment was, the health gain is too low. I don't mind the channeling time, Prek needs to take time eating. But just take the same duration as when destroying Rek'Sai's tunnel (1.5 seconds), and the health restore to 8% of maximum health (certainly if you want to set the health as that low). Also, I recommend that the passive should active for big jungle monsters too (e.g. big raptor, big wolf, golem, dragon, baron, scutler, something like that). It will be a good option for jungling.

Q: Great, but I recommend to be in W skill instead. If you notice the skill key, the main damaging skills will be placed on Q and E, usually. W is for mostly buffs, extra-passive, for empwering attacks. There should also has cost, because the buff increases a lot. It's not gonna be fair. And for 2.5 seconds? My custom champion page also has been commented on the buffs like this. My page, Drakula, they commented that the slow effect should be longer (I've written as 2 seconds, now changed to 3). Looking at Warwick, his W buff activates for 6 seconds. So I recommended to change this skill to W, and duration to be longer (at least 3 seconds, but not more than 6).

W: Substitute it with Q. Pretty awesome, but I don't think slow should be included. This skill, I think it's like Wukong's Q, no need to slow, just for additional damage.

E: Nice, especially the passive. For active, I think it will be OP because the target can't use healing items. Think carefully, if you were the person that receives this skill, and healing potion is your last hope. It's not fair for me. For the skill name, as Centuriarch stated, Darius' skill has already used. I prefer to change, maybe "Hemophilia", because it causes the target to bleed. Or maybe "Burst the blood" if you want it simple.

R: The passive, well, I think it's useless. No one will came if their ally has already dead, unless they are a bit insane. Besides, they can just do CC to you, like knockback, knockup, stunned, or dragging to cancel the passive. It'll only be useful when jungling. For active, it uses too much health, it may cause Prek to die after channeling it. Besides, Prek has mana, not vladimir that has no resource bar and uses his health. If you want Prek to sacrifices the health, I recommend like Soraka's Q, using both health and mana, but both low requirements.

For the Stats, pretty low, just increase all of it. I recommend you to think the stats at Lv.1, and then stats at Lv.18. Then calculate for the range, and linear increasing rate.

Also, as Centuriarch stated, find something unique for Prek. His concept is like carnivores, or wild animals, which there is a lot of concepts to take. For example, my new page, Veloclaw, has three words for his concept, "velocity", "velociraptor", and "claw". For the claw, raptors have short claws, not eligible for fighting in the league, so I stated the lore to have relationship with Voids. So that, he can develop his appearance like Kha'Zix. For velociraptor, I stated that he was the velociraptor before, then developed himself as a powerful hunter. Finally, velocity, he could damage and kill the foe in a few seconds, marking him as an assassin. Also, with velociraptor's ability, he can sprint fast from place to place. My skills has to support all of those concepts. For you, maybe has concepts of carnivores, picking up some of them, like tiger and bear. Then find out the abilities and identities of tiger and bear, and forming up together as a unique skill.

That's all, hope next time you'll be able to create more interesting champion. for Centuriarch, nice comment. And I also want to give suggestions for my page too. I really want to hear it.

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