User blog comment:Beri98/Art Son - The Mountain Monk/@comment-3391671-20170524230547

Not going to go on a full spur of criticism for now, but here are the few things I do have to say.

From the looks of it, the main mechanic uniqueness Art Son is supposed to have is being the mark-applier. This isn't bad, but I wished to say that it isn't a unique enough mechanic to say that Art Son is an appealing champion. Marks are common in the game, as you may know, and if nothing surprising is down outside these marks, there isn't much to hand over to him.

The second is what similarities I have to the game's residence great monk,. They are both monks, have an AA-relient passive, has a shielding ability (well two actually, one a shield another damage resistance), the capability to skillshot-then-dash (Q->E) and a knockback inclusive ult. Looking at how you had also made Marrow, I find it that you should contribute more time to a custom champion than releasing them, even if you are releasing for release's sake. As of now, to others, you are poorly representing your creative prowess; constructing a champion with the community is a nice idea, but posting multiple custom champions in the span of a week makes it look like you are not willing to work on them on any of your concepts on your own, and that you don't have a focus at the moment. If push comes to shove, look around users who are custom champion creators (but are also around, as in not internet-dead) and chat them up in the message wall.