User blog comment:RubyDreamer/Si'ren the Thunder Scientist/@comment-25235491-20160108142658

Let me warn you, before reading, know that I only highlight the negative. Go from the idea that everything I don't mention is either fine, or I forgot about it.
 * Stats:
 * No champion has a base attack speed above 0.694.
 * Attack range should be a multiple of 25, like every champion in the game. His would be 125.
 * If your champion is manaless, insert the line |resource = Manaless in your champion info template.
 * Health regen does not start at 0, unless part of a gimmick. Refer to the List_of_champions'_health_regeneration for more info.
 * I'd like to know the movespeed of this champ, like Tridan before me.
 * As an aside general note, most stats follow the standards of old, and are kinda low.
 * P: I think it should be Gathering Spark, rather than Gathering spark.
 * Rito aren't fans of infinitely stacking mechanics.
 * If you're going to make him a hypercarry, do it well, we don't even know how much "spark" you gain from killing minions and monsters.
 * Q:
 * I suggest swapping the AP and "spark" scalings, so the spark changes something that's more gimmicky (range), while AP does its job, increasing the ability's power (damage). Though infinitely stacking range is kinda weird... Still, with no AP, your jump has 0 base range, and you need to really stack AP for it to go far...
 * W:
 * Is this a skillshot, a targeted shot, an auto-targeted point-blank ability? I don't know.
 * The number of bounces scales weird.
 * E:
 * A 3-second stun on the passive part of the ability? I'm negatively impressed.
 * The buildup time is unnecessarily long, as Tridan said.
 * Talking about the active part... What exactly does it do? Negates the spark cloud for an autoattack buff that does, well, what?
 * R: That's basically a death zone. Especially with the Spark scaling, this ability deals damage that's borderlining on unfair come late-game.
 * "Lore": I doubt scientists focus on saying the same word over and over. Or earn nicknames instantly from people who are used to seeing complete BS, let alone "Sparky".