Thread:Willbachbakal/@comment-1876049-20150728142137/@comment-1876049-20150728235029

There are some parts of yours that I like, but I think some aspects are too generic, which is something I don't like. Things like "possessing explosive damage" or "although weak early on, Twitch becomes tremendously powerful" over the course of a match are rather... universal things that could be said about many, if not all, marksmen. Several champions have explosive damage. Several champions scale over the course of the game. And, while it may be fine to mention those for champions whose key concept is precisely about that (of course you'd mention Veigar having ridiculous burst or Nasus' scaling damage), I don't find either to be core to Twitch. Yes, he has burst and he scales, but those aren't his "thing".

What I believe are his "things" are, indeed, the poison and the stealth, which I why I really try to emphasize those in my descriptions. I don't know if I'm making my point clear.