User blog comment:AcesRockz/Faedryn, Strider of Bandle City/@comment-3391671-20160409184044/@comment-26424623-20160410030710

Thanks for the critical review! I really appreciate it!

The core aspects that I had for Faedryn are "fishing rod", "camper", and "fighter", though hiker would be more fitting than camper in context of her passive. I thought that the sword would be a good addition into fitting her into the fighter aspect but the fighter aspect itself seems to clash too much with her theme of being a camper. Being a camper would give her the fishing rod and the utilities that she has but being a fighter will probably take away all of that. I really want her to be a camper and a figther, but I'm having a lot of trouble finding a middle ground for that.

I'll get around to fixing the stuff on her Q and W that you have addressed. I really like your suggestions on them and they do seem more balanced that way.

Her E and R are too much for a fighter with the mobility and utility of the fishing rod. Those will be completely scrapped in favor of either camping-based abilities that provide toned down versions or completely new ones that focus on the support side of being a camper. I really just need to decide on what role I want more for her than mixing two that seem cool but are too big of foils for each other.