User blog comment:YaoiBlossom/Champion Concept: Ryorin the Energy Vortex/@comment-60764-20120309230457

Aside from the numbers, I have a few things I'd like to bring up.

Cons

1) How is she support if she's supposed to fill that role? She has a heal and a shield but otherwise does scads of damage akin to SupportSivir from back in the day and Viktor.

2) As others have pointed out the ult is rather on the heavy side with both base damage and her other ratios. Looking at it she can out-Brand Brand, Anivia, and Annie. Nevermind it's a multi-level cc (in LoL) that affects the entire team. If any move needs to be re-evaluated it's this one. If only to reduce to the base damage and change how the spell works proper.

3) The cooldowns and mana costs per level don't quite make sense. The increments are small enough that they don't really give much of an incentive. to improve.

4) Her abilities lack lot of psynergy you'd expect from most of this game's mages.

Pros

Q is an an interesting enough ability that doesn't need to be changed. It's a bit like Cone of Cold(ness) in D&D. This is probably the ability that should probably not be changed.

All in all, though? Not bad for a first draft.