User blog comment:Numinous J/Tenbotsu, Adept of the Cursed Spear/@comment-3391671-20160807233555

Oh, so this is the champion you were talking about... neat. Onto critiquing then!


 * The first thing that caught my attention are the names: Why Tenbotsu? Is there a special meaning behind it? Is it a spoof of "Tenbatsu" which means "Heavenly/Divine Punishment"? And how about Ame no Yari? From the abilities, I'm sure you meant "Ama no Yari" (天ノ槍) which means "Spear of Heaven"; "Ame no Yari" (雨ノ槍) means "Spear of Rain" on the other hand, rarely using "天" for "ame" when used in a title.
 * Onto the Innate, I believe that the MS changes should be switched so that when Tenbotsu has the spear, he has reduced MS instead of gaining it when not having it. I also believe 100 increased base MS is a bit much and may need a little tone down on the difference between with-Spear and without-Spear.
 * More TBA