User blog comment:Lyndongwapo/Dex and Hay, the Gemini/@comment-7709681-20160205162219/@comment-3391671-20160205204309

I agree with Primus that the above concept has too much within by League standards, especially the fact that it is two seperate entities, not a champion and a clone.

Couple other items though is that the ability box should avoid flavor text to the limit of a sentence, or even a phrase. Any description of the champion can be done through backstory and lore, along with visuals if you have any to supply. Some of the flavor text includes the description of Dex and Hay in the innate, the change of color in Hay's Q, and the information of Cackoo in E.

Otherwise, as some custom champions have an issue before, the naming sense of some of the abilities are bland. Cool to you, but Magic Blink sounds like an ability you can have on anyone.