Thread:GreenMoriyama/@comment-32109419-20160914145432/@comment-3391671-20160926042630

A lot of champions to touch up on... if I allow myself the time. Here are a quick review of the two:

Actually, before starting, I believe with any concept creator, you may need to learn to cut down a bit on the complexity of the ability. I would love it if a champion has many aspects of them that is modified and changed to give uniqueness, but that uniqueness can be marred if you have too many tweaks around. The reason to simplify is so that people can understand a champion on the spot, especially if each ability can be generalized into two or three sentences. From what I can see with your champions, while they may be able to fit in with other MOBAs, for now, by what some may call the League standards, they have too much going on. My criticism on Verander will point this out often.

TBA