User blog comment:XxCraftStarxx/Atarah, The Child of Nature/@comment-4680018-20130301055904

Feels awfully convenient the forest just gave its power to this girl all becuase she tried to protect it. Maybe you could explain that the forest was home to some kind of mystery or myth that hints at its power. Or maybe better explain this explosion's origin. Or something. This lore feels like its is missing a piece of Atarah's story. Also be sure to proof-read this, I'm noticing some mistakes.

Everything else is well written though. It feels immersive and I can easily imagine the scene unfold.