User blog comment:Numinous J/Seph & Qliph, the Shards of a Broken Mind/@comment-26815373-20160402053915

Nice use of icons.

I like the idea of a 'dual champions' champion but I don't think this really captures the feeling of playing two champs simultaneously (he kinda suffers from what suffers from - being two 'individuals', but not feeling like it gameplay-wise). I suppose having a split personality gives you more leeway though (they share the same body, unlike Kindred which clearly depicts two entities).

I'm hesitant about your 'Sanity Fragments' as a resource. Is it flavorful? Yes. Does it make him (them?) feel unique? I'm not sure. It works as a gating mechanism for his spells and abilities, but I don't think it really does anything differently from Energy (being a shallow pool that quickly regens, as opposed to mana, which is a deeper pool with slower regen). It might be a nice middle-ground between Energy and Mana though. I have to ask though, why would I ever play as Seph? It seems like Qliph negates all of Seph's 'weaknesses' (his casting costs) at very little expense to himself (yes, he loses virtually all his HP regen but I hardly feel as though that's a good trade-off). I mean, compare him to who is Riot's 'best' transform champion (his two forms have definite and obvious strengths and weaknesses).

Q is simple enough, but effort should be made to make the charm distinct from 's.

W is OK, but it doesn't make any sense to call it 'Wicked Cross' when neither of the beams actually intersect each other. You outright say 'parallel' which by definition is NOT a cross. @-@

I like their E ability, but Primus' point still stands.

I like the ultimate, but it reminds me of Bloodseeker's Rupture from DotA 2 which Riot explicitly states is a bad design, as it may not be clear to the opponent what is causing them damage. Good visual effects and audio cues could mitigate this / clarify what's happening though.

All in all, not bad, I like the idea but I think you could make each 'form' more impactful / meaningful.