Thread:GreenMoriyama/@comment-28298814-20161207084656

Hi so I'm Messaging you :D

I added Part 1 of his Lore and its just the background surrounding his birth. It does not explain much but it did take quite awhile and I am working on Part 2. his childhood. I am not really good at giving short summarized version of the stories I make (its a personal weakness of mine). So for the Lore I started at the very beginning.

I hope it isn't too disappointing. Please Don't hold back on your critisizm. I want to improve my writing and I personally am very bad at grammar on a writing basis since the way I write is basically the way  speak. 