User blog comment:Shark902/Bartok the Something Something/@comment-6941076-20130327164415

his passive is downright broken. you can't give the highest farming character in nearly every game free HP scaling per minion, that leads to an unkillable ADC. I suggest linking his Memory resource into his passive, granting bonus stats of some sort for his current memory level. Obviously you would have to be careful here, if its too strong then his ultimate will never be used as you'll lose this buff

I don't understand the passive aspect of his W, how does he gain a stack? additionally, there is absolutely no reason to level this ability as of now, it doesnt get a lower cooldown, and no level scalings of any sort

his ultimate scaling is insanely high, +540%BonusAD? its more than talons entire burst and ranged to boot. this needs a nerf, or at least an explanation of how exactly it works

also, on a more logical level, how does he attack whilst using his E if his weapons are attached to the target? he essentially disarms himself for 2 seconds whilst using this ability, maybe change the tooltip so it doesn't give that impression

I really like the concept, but it's definitely far from finished yet! I look forward to seeing how this concept evolves, with a bit of work this could be a very good concept