User blog comment:MrSuperSpy/Beast, the Mercenary for Justice/@comment-3391671-20160916095429

Plasma blade...? Alright, not that we've had enough of that from the and ... but MM-9 rifle? Sir, this is League of Legends, not a Halo x Call of Duty mash-up.

Jokes aside, I would like if you explored a theme outside "justice." While not often, in the past year, I have seen a good number of custom champions encircling the ideology of "justice," and that has worn away especially when most of them were as lore-less as here.

I may have skipped over looking in detail at the kit in itself, but just by the names, I see that you didn't even consider integrating this champion into the League universe. While guns do exist in the game, they aren't some kind of AK- design model that is rather modern; League is closer to a fantasy game, where modern day tech is blended with magical aspects (such as 's rifle).

And to say... that ultimate doesn't sound imposing at all. I recommend going back to the drawing board as this concept looks even if you didn't rush it.