User blog comment:AoSspartan/Anzu the Sunderer/@comment-31656015-20120927154132

your concept is fine but it's just too... bland.

steroid passive that has a short occurance rate

AA enchancer

Passive that's basically - and 2 champions already have it  and

E is a basic ranged ability with a slow

R is a nuke that reduces armor.

try to use a bit of creativity or uniqueness to champions