Thread:Denevir/@comment-1990160-20150928125127

Been busy - sorry

Feedback for early revision that I believe you linked to me (http://leagueoflegends.wikia.com/wiki/User:Denevir/Sandbox?oldid=2296509):
 * Leading with a video - not good
 * Good pages lead in with a short description of the page topic.. blahblahblahblah. This is general encyclopedic wiki procedure.
 * Videos can be severely outdated. Even if they aren't, most are at least somewhat obsolete.
 * Personal experience, may be shared with other users: videos are a large time investment - I don't typically watch embedded videos when I open a page. For instance, if I'm reading a news story, I will stop any video that autoplays and just read the story.
 * Generally speaking, just move the video down.
 * About section
 * Gameplay - probably move this content above even the first section.
 * Top lane
 * It's tricky here to define where someone should go. Try to avoid any hint of "X champion should only go to Y lane and should never be doing Z"
 * Just adding the relevant section to all champions that ever get played consistently in Y lane might be fine.
 * Teamfights
 * Pretty good - perhaps separate it more clearly? A formalized style would be useful.
 * This makes me think of why the old style is the way it is - each ability has a series of bullets because before, each ability was looked at more independently, whereas now kits are very clearly designed as a whole.
 * Tips - probably move this above the recommended items

Other thing - I was confused about all of the other sections on the /Sandbox page. You could utilize a new page for each champion, or feature your current example on /Sandbox and store the rest of /Sandbox2 (or anywhere else you like). 