User blog comment:EloHell/Champion Concept - Elizar ,the Elf Overling/@comment-220.255.2.50-20120822170432

For the Q, you may want to reduce the dmg by at least half(it has a very short cd so...) In return, increase the range. This champions AA is 550 range and ur Q is gonna be 100 range shorter is weird. Putting it at least 700 or a 800 range skillshot should be fine.

The W is if i hit the enemy 5 times, he takes 12.5% increased dmg? I think its fine, might nid change it a little but i do not know whats missing.

E, for its cd and mana cost, you may want to increase its AS and MS and probably duration(example, draven). Tis is probably its MS AS steroid so i think u can increase it by a bit.

Oh yes, passive. You may want to run a nerf on the ms... Having about 14.4% free ms boost is rly too much... Maybe 0.5 or 0.4(or even 0.3) will do. Change the AS boost to 1% as a trade off.

R May or may not want to rework this. Its a very situational skill, if the enemy is cc to death and u shoot this out, u can maximise its dmg. however, if they are not cc at all, its easy for them to escape from this spell. You may want to increase its range... or not.