User blog comment:Commander Marko/Aur'Rax, The Apex Predator (Final Concept!)/@comment-91.82.84.187-20130104022212

1. The Hunger-mechanic is nice, but the restore health/lose health part is very un-fun: the health regained upon minion kills is too high (%s scale way too well into mid game - I guess a Spike Barrage/Tail Whip combo would be the same as pre-nerf Rengar W if a whole wave is cleared) and the health loss is too high - it start to chew away at the health of the champion before minions even reached the lane. But the "reverse-fury" (bonuses when it's low and some kind of penalty when it's 0) is very nice. Something that requires some balancing would probably work even better - like reduced movements speed but increased damage and health regen for high-Hunger values, and the opposite for low-Hunger values.

2. Mana-less. This is one of the worst design ideas Riot has made. Basically, look at the kit you have designed: average base cooldowns, and no opportunity cost. Void creatures worked on mana this far, and it fits their theme, because they sort of manipulate the energies of the Void. Better stick to this. Extremely sustained champions that does not need to recharge themself is what Riot is trying to abolish currently.

3. You forgot to add the base damage for Tail Whip. Also, a 6 seconds cooldown on a dash-skill is broken (think about Riven - she has a bit longer base cooldown on all of her dashes)

4. Relentless Predator: That is a very cool idea for an ultimate (to synergize with his passive). The duration is probably a bit too long, though.

5. Spike Barrage feels way too much what Kha'Zix' Void Spike. It is also pretty broken - with less than 10 Hunger and 40% CDR it has a 3,6 seconds cooldown with no cost, and applies an area of effect stun. That stuff is better than many ultimates in the game. With his ultimate on, he can stun-lock multiple people by himself fairly effectively. (And it also has a very long range.)

6. Try to work out a theme other than "The ultimate hunter": That's Kha'Zix/Rengar.

Pretty good, overall, but needs some tweaking and a rework on E. God job! :)