Thread:Toymakers Creation/@comment-7709681-20150717183236/@comment-7709681-20150718154126

My soul and its spirit is always willing, but the university is a envious mistress. If I have the time to help you format I'll do so, but let me help you with some advice:


 * Don't presure yourself to publish for the sake of it, for no-one is waiting for your work, just be patient, and when time comes right, publish!
 * There's no shame in searching for help, there's always a helping hand, there's plenty of people in the Wikia's community that are willing to help, for instance I could help you formatting your concept, but there's also Willbachbakal, who could help you with balance, or even gameplay improvement.
 * Make it confortable to read (A.K.A.: Ryt0's CLARITY... I just used that as an example, please God kill me ), your original iteration was tedious to read, not uncomprehendable, just tedious, as some paragraphs where convoluted with both flavor text and numbers, the idea is to draw people's attention into reading by making the explanatory text confortable, consistent, and organized, and you have up to 4 paragraphs per ability to do so, which brings me to two points I saw that caused problems to you.
 * Measure yourself on when to add flavor text, if your ability's description is too large due to extensive and well justified explanation through paragraphs, adding unnecesary text that only exists to make it fancy will be of no help, rather use it on medium or small descriptions, the other option is to add at the last paragraph one of the character's quotes.
 * Do not put scaling numbers within descriptions, there's a reason for the Leveling section to exists, the only numbers you should put in descriptions are single values, values that scale per champion level and single values that scale with other ability's ranks (For instance, your current has now a passive resistances' bonus, but the values are within the paragraph, and the AS and On-Hit bonus of the ability is in Leveling 1, when it should be with Leveling 2, to match the respective paragraph of the values).