User blog comment:TMek7/Kaizeron, The Undying One./@comment-24346528-20131230103154

OK my opinions :

-the undying one, Never heard of trynda

-PASSIVE:at start free doran ring passive in late game to OP nerf it a bit: 4.5 / 9 / 13.5 / 18 /22.5/ 27 this will be nice.

-Q: very good one, but its not called "ARC" its called "CONE" in lol

-W:good, but nerf it first of all reduce range by 50 (to 600), also u say it slow enemy for 30%, but for what period of time??? ( i recomend 1 sec) also increase mana cost at later lvls and reduce at start 70 / 75 / 80 / 85 / 90. Its good that this is not damageing ability.

-E: good one, but i cant uderstand how this can fit in champion kit???

-R: usless ability- good for supports but come on your champ is fighter

also add lore pls