User blog comment:BestFluttershyNA/Ruby Rose/@comment-11188061-20131017110433

I'm from the RWBY wikia, and here to point out the few mistakes you've made.

First, the minor one. Please decide whether you want to name your skill 'Scarlet Trigger' or 'Crimson Trigger', because they're confusing.

Some of the more serious ones:

1) As mentioned before, your E skill still does not give the Rifle (Compact) Form any sort of abilities. Both are skills for Scythe Form. Switching to Rifle Form would in fact put me in a severe disadvantage because I would lack an E skill literally.

In fact, except for Q's Scattering Shot, every other spells literally does not require Rifle Form to trigger. This is an incredible oversight in skill design overall - you might as well remove Rifle Form completely - and definitely needs to be fixed.

But otherwise, I do like the concept of both E skills.

2) I forgot the stats Jayce/Elise's Ultimate (R) works, but until you fix the problem stated above, I remain that the transformation should be made into a Common (Q/W/E) Skill, or removed completely.

3) W Skill is incredibly confusing (For an RWBY fan). Both skills are supposed to be triggered in Scythe Form, make no mistake, so should I assume that both spells cannot be used in Rifle Form (see what I mean that the transformation is rather useless?)?

All in all, your spells are too geared towards the Scythe Form while completely lacking in Rifle Form. The only skill Rifle Form could use is Q, Scattering Shot, and that is very bad. There is no motivation at all for people to switch to Rifle Form unless they want to play Ruby as a Marksman (using Jayce's attack range as reference), and even then it's just plain lackluster and almost useless. Either remove Rifle Form completely, or redesign some of the skillsets altogether so that Rifle Form would actually be useful.

I'd help come up with the proper skillset but right now, I really need to take a bath. So unless you've come up with a solution yourself, or wait a few hours for me to get ready and think properly.