User blog comment:EloHell/Champion Concept - Elizar ,the Elf Overling/@comment-5432924-20120821213822/@comment-5432924-20120821223249

Storm Barrage, R (Active, Ultimate) 

This ability definitely needs more clarity.

Clarify what you mean by "Additional Arrow damage: Additional 2% damage of total damage taken from Storm Barrage per second over 4 seconds (Duration refreshes if contact with the storm is made)" Do you mean if they were in the AoE at the end of the duration?

Clarify Over the next 5 seconds Elizar can reactivate the ability to jump into attack range of an enemy target.'What happens if you activate it on a melee units? What happens when you activate it on a range unit?

Jump range requirement: 900

Jump range: 450 

What's the difference? Why is the requirement longer than the range?

Movement speed reduction: 10 / 15 / 20 % (remains for 1 second out of the storm) 

Do you mean remains for 1 second after leaving the storm?

How about spliting it into two parts.

Initial Effect:

Range / Aoe / Damage / Effects

Secondary Effect (Conditions):

In AoE at the end of X seconds/Re-enters/???

Secondary Active Effect:

Range of Jump? (why do you need range requirement and range? clarfiy)

Where do you end up? On the target? In range? What is the difference if you activate it on a range or a melee?