Thread:Nuclrdmntr/@comment-5819405-20130121064356/@comment-5819405-20130122011440

Haha, alright. I haven't written up a proper page for it yet, but I have the ideas down. Most of her abilites seem really weird to me, now that I think about it. Her AS steroids are a bit much for me and, to be honest, it makes me feel like she'd be an overpowered Teemo. xD

Therefore, I think we should change her innate passive to something movement speed related, along the lines of Miss Fortune's or Vayne's. Since I'd rather get rid of most of the AS steroids, I think that her R should be changed. Instead of giving her different additions to her basic attacks for her ultimate, she should just get a higher base attack damage or addition bonus attack damage, passively. Also, an active version of her R would be something along the lines of gaining additional AD/AS or movement speed when activated.

Rappel seems weird in her kit. I think that it should solely be Erika being moved. She could target an ally minion, champion or terrain and get pulled toward it and the same goes for enemies. When she hits an enemy with her Rappel, she damages them, but minimal damage, since it's more of a movement ability rather than something that deals damage.

Righteous Shot... I'd rather have that be a pure slow that lasts longer and get rid of the blind.

Recklessness, I'm not sure. Maybe she could passively gain AS by a certain percentage and its active adds an additional attack.

This is what I currently have for her Lore:

Though innocent to the evil and corruption lurking in the air, Erika was a headstrong and courageous young girl, under the belief that she was ready to take on the world. She soon found this notion to be false: the outside world was dangerous and held nothing but pain and suffering for her and her loved ones. Living at an Ionian village with her older brother and his family gave her a quiet and peaceful life until the traumatizing experience of being attacked by what seemed like a humanoid tiger in the nearby forests. This compelled her to urge her brother to teach her archery – he sternly refused to do so, until Erika suggested the use of a slingshot, one of her brother’s first weapons. Within months, her aim was perfected, and she soon felt unstoppable… Until her brother, the current guardian of the Pits of Pallas, left for his duties and left her stumbling in darkness.

Erika vowed to protect the loved ones Varus left behind, including his son Theshan, his lover Anthea and their foster parent, Theseus. Daily life slowly shifted back to its seemingly endless times of peace and prosperity.

It's a lot more concise so far and doesn't name much, since most Lore are mysterious/unspecific. The Lore, like the previous one, is going to end with the Noxian invasion of their hometown. The only big change I've made is that Erika is going to be like... 15-16 instead of 14, since I'm actually writing a fanfiction that needs her to be 11 if I want to have Erika make innuendoes toward Varus and her lover... because that's Erika's personality.

Tell me if you have any questions.

You can also see the work-in-progress splash art on my profile. :) It's actually my avatar picture.

