User blog comment:Zeagoth/Nautilus/@comment-4638923-20120602115941

That's art. ^^ It catches the scary sea theme very well imo. Took some time till I understood that it is written from a sailor's (or w/eva) perpective. The encounter is really nicely written.

However I like to bring things on a bit more realistic base. - Why does the "sailor" know Nautilus' name and that he wants vengeance ? I mean, yes, there is this art-thingy where some people can just feel other people's sorrow, however a very small exchange of sentences would be cool. Additionally from the "sailor's" perspective I would be shit-scared, if I would firstly encounter Nautilus' scary-sea-titan appearance ^^ : "He turns to me, the blood red eyes that shine with contempt." The sailor's emotions are a bit left out at the end imo.

Just my train of thoughts, overall I really like the short story. :)