User blog comment:Glop48/Champion Concept : Khasir, The Nomad of Shurima/@comment-8003359-20130620172342

Hmm interesting. Got some comments and questions.

Pass: maybe up it to 20% attack speed, and up the enemy's % max health requirement to 50%. 10% for both stats is small, cause that is barely any attack speed and if the enemy is at 10% then he's dead anyways.

---> I think actually this part of the passive would work really well as a passive on the Q. Since, the player will most likely level up W or E for max burst damage when dueling, and Q is more or an initiate ability. So adding the passive boost to that ability will equal out the choices.

--> as for the shifting sands, I think you can do some pretty cool things here. My suggestion would be to, instead of damage reduction, grant him a % dodge for auto attacks AND non-ultimate abilities. It would fit more with the theme of "shifting sands". Like you could give him 20% dodge for AA's and 10% dodge for abilities, or something like that.

Q: I like it. Probably reduce the armor pen at all levels by 10. And up the bleed amount. I think you could add some awesome mechanics here to spice things up.

--> for example: it seems from the ability description that the sandstorm can be seen by people. What could be cool is when Khasir uses Mirage, any instances of Sandstorm as long as the Mirage is still there will make the storm go invisible. So you could toss out a mirage at someone, hit Q and sneak up on them. Or if mirage is on cooldown, you can hit Q and invis to avoid damage and juke with the cost of the storm being seen. I guess youd add a nice large AOE around the mirage where Q would be able to be stleathed entirely.

W: I think you should make it true damage. And remove the gold thing

E: You could also do some awesome stuff with mirage. As explained earlier, you could have synergy with his Q.

--> Also, you could take away the "explosion" part and make it more like Zed's shadow. Instead mirage would FOLLOW/MIRROR Khasir's movements. The ability would have a indicator just like Rumble's ult where you target the start point and drag in the direction you want it to go. For the E, you would place the mirage and drag in the direction you want the mirage to go. So if you drag forward, then when you move forward, so will the mirage. However, IF you drag BACKWARD, if Khasir moves forward, then the Mirage moves backward. This will allow for super awesome jukes and set ups. Imagine sitting in the brush, setting up a mirage to go backwards, they chase the mirage while you juke in behind them and rip em to shreds.

R: I don't think the true sight is necessary. Or even the mark jumping. Just give him the buffs, up the bonus damage, and maybe grant him splash damage during the duration.

These are just suggestions. You obviously don't have to use em.

Good idea. Cheers,

Simon