User blog comment:Endless Exceptions/Ritz, The Discordant of Sound/@comment-195.225.94.174-20120401112625

Well you did a nice job with the design and over all practicly a full champion set with icones, their speach text ect.

The idea of this champ (exept lore) is very good and looks cool.

Good Job

But i still have some worries, and things that i think make her a little overpacked in design.

1st - her W is OP, the Ability power and % MR pen and CD reduciotn, are just to much for her ability power ratios, and her current CD...

Since her CD's on rest of her spells seem's ok, you either you will have to get rid of it from this spell or just give bigger CD's to the rest of them.

Her ability power ratios are ok, so why give her 30%mr pen for free for 10sec?! it like you gave her almost a free void staff. I would understand when her ap ratios were like 0,3-4 ect, but... you have huge AoE ulti, short CD Q with big ap ratio, and you gave her a spell that is like 2 times more powerfull then Xertath verion of it (and his extreemly bursty with it).

2nd - The distance on knockback of her E is WAY TO HUGE, with this spell you cant be captured even with flash stun combo. This makes you impossible to kill 2 vs 1.

You write there that knockback is 800 units - almost every champion has range max 600...

When you look at the rest of the spell you see that its got range of 400 (that's the range of the knockback on enemy champion - that means her real knockback from the enemy on lane is 1200 UNITS !! it more then ridiculous...

Do you get it now? how can you have a knockback of 1200 UNITS in a champion?

her max knockback should be like on enemy should be like 250-300units, and knockback on Ritz max 150-100, 400 units is already a huge gap.

Also this knockaback CD should be big, since it give's you practicly a safe lane on 1vs1 and almost 100% free gank lane, since 400 units dash (knockback) will always allow you to hide under tower.

3rd - The amount of CC... She has:

slow

stun

knockback

Silence

THAT IS WAY TO MUCH, you gave her all the best CC in game there are, gived her huge range and low CD's... YOU maked her a designe like RIOT does, overpacked with all like Irelia or the new RIOT champs.

Just delete 2 of them (i would say slow and stun from Q) of give like 20% slow on lvl 5 as only thing to it...

Like i said, a good design but overpacked with CC, and overbuffed.