User blog comment:AoSspartan/Amon the Bounty Hunter/@comment-222.240.223.195-20121001091442

Well... First of all, ranged AD carries aren't assassins in the current Meta. As ADCs are reliant on auto-attacks and steroid abilities. The champion name, Amon, the Bounty Hunter needs to be changed... Sounds like Mf.

His passive needs to be less like a Twisted Fate passive as you would like something unique for a new champion...

His Q sounds way to much like Caitlyn's Ultimate. 350 damage at level 9 with a .8 AD scale is too much. In Mid-Game team fights, get two of these off in a clustered team fight and half the enemy team is dead. Even though you have a high mana cost, a Manamune could become a Late-Game snowball.

His W, why don't you just call it "SmokeScreen" ? Eh? The real problem with this is that it's just like an Akali stealth, but for your whole team. But this could be real OP for a Rengar. Maybe you could make the duration increase with the ranks.

His E, is just like Talon's "Cut throat" without the blink. The 6 second Cooldown off a 5 second 29% damage amp. is just too OP. With this and your ultimate, you could easily 1 shot the enemy ADC.

His R is just like a spammable Darius Ultimate. At Rank 1 and 2 it's much more plausible, but at Rank 3, it's ridiculous. 15 second Cooldown which could be reduced by 10 seconds if it DOESN'T kill them is just... It would just wreck off-tank bruisers like Jayce, Riven, Lee Sin... ect.

The problem with this champion is that you're taking skills from other champions and re-modifying them into this champion. You have a good mind for creating champions but try to be more unique, original and creative.