User blog comment:Elorion2/Alder, The Sinner/@comment-3391671-20160330150937

Missing the following:
 * Scaling on base stats (of course aside from Movement Speed, Magic Resistance and Attack Range).
 * Roles are missing; although likely a Marksman, it is not defined.

Now, small nitpicks of the kit:
 * The title does not correlate with his kit. A title that makes sense will not only be better accepted but also would make the kit+title more compelling.
 * Innate's duration and the method of stacking Paralysis is missing. From what it seems, it is no more than old Static Shiv.
 * Q is basic, but lacks any gameplay synergy. It introduces a point-click damage tool and nothing else.
 * W: Unstoppable Bullet would better be a pass-through skillshot that deals damage to all enemies in a line (based on the name). It's currently a steroid for the Innate.
 * E: NO RANDOM TELEPORTING. Not only does it cause issues, mostly in the case of being unpredictable (one of Riot's bigger no-nos), it has no reason to exist as a tool than popping enemies away (or who knows, it send them right in front of a fleeing ally who is already at 1% health).
 * R: As much as it is a global ult, the ability is rather weak. I also ask why there is a man refund on hitting the enemy; in the kit, it feels off. Lastly, mana cost is not formatted correctly.