User blog comment:GoejoeDenzo/Sky, the Guardian of the Seas/@comment-3391671-20161015175421

Hmm... this is a very concerning kit, and not in hte good way.

In comparison to your last champion, Jessa, the quality and balance of this kit is off the charts, or at least unacceptable. Her kit provides strong slows here and there, zone control over the entire river, and an ult that is grants invulnerability for. On top of that, as I mentioned, the quality (as in, the formatting) of the blog needs a clean up, since some of the descriptions such as the W are not very clear in what they do.

I do not mean ill with my following words, but blogs such as these push me to create a "how to make a custom champion blog" so that the general quality of blogs aren't an issue, especially with users like yourself who have tried making these before. If you were a newcomer, then it's forgiven, but you've taken a try at creating these blogs. Try reaching out to those who have given criticism to your blogs (such as Willbachbakal and Poisonshark) and improve upon these so that your ideas will be received better.