Thread:Willbachbakal/@comment-1876049-20150728142137/@comment-1330314-20150729010841

There is a difference between describing how a champion works and just listing off their abilities, a distinction you aren't making in most of your descriptions ( is the worst offender). Saying Twitch picks his fights wisely, whittles his opponents down and shreds multiple enemies at a time describes him, saying he has a poison that converts to burst, a stealth ability with an attack speed steroid and an AD steroid that lets him attack multiple targets describes his abilities. I feel the idea here is that whichever description you provide for a champion should emerge from that kit and offer something unique, which the reader wouldn't be able to see immediately by just looking at the ability boxes.