User blog comment:Shinen-san/Shard, the Broken Reflection (anti-magic support champion concept)/@comment-7709681-20150520021345

Welp, you finally ended your rework, congratulations!

Now, about the concept's kit (Because this can't be considered a champion concept if it doesn't have both Character and In-Game avatar in mind, and only has the second, and from the second only has an Ability kit. But I didn't came to critisice that, so lets go on. :V), I feel it rather too simplistic, but, as said above, has more thought put into it than the recent concepts (Hell, is even complete if compared to othe concepts).

I have ambivalent feelings for the Innate, rewards maintaining at your foe's vicinity, but nonetheless free sustain, I don't mind the mechanic, what irks me is the effects. Also, even with what I think of, this is far better than the original ability.

Q feels too similar to Lissandra's Q, but rather focused into utility, be zone-denial.

W is seems iffy, passive on-hit damage / heal which can be actively granted to an ally, this could be a problem due to the heal thanks to the Innate.

E is lovely sincerely, you gave actual gameplay to something that only two other champions have and do almost nothing upon enemy interaction with the ability.

R seems actually forced into the kit, does not do nothing new for gameplay, and makes even harder for the opponent to read which unit is which between the ally champion and the clone (Not to say that seems you took Yorick's R and stuck it into the kit).

Overall, I'll argue that the kit seems sort of lackluster and simplistic, but is definitively functional and actually cohesive compared to other works published, and if you were to change something, please leave the E untouched.