User blog comment:Riuzak/Teresa , The Faint Smile/@comment-8662171-20130711013847

Holy grammar batman, fix that stuff up.

The kit's good, and I believe that it would work correctly. However, I would make the kit favor more of a bursty type style that is somewhat like an assassin, seeing as that her passive debuffs once the fight itself gets on too long, even with something that that would reduce the 'timer' on the battle would probably help a bit less with duels, ganks, and teamfights. That's my two cents on the crunch, but...

The character storyline. What? We just had a major canonical event that pointed out that no one within Freljord would be able to come to a straight consensus to who would be the true leader of every tribe within those frozen wastes. No way in hell would Ashe nor Sej simply decide to join forces and announce a Noxian as queen just because she has a unique eye colour. Sorry, but that is just not cutting it. I'd reccomend rewriting the whole damn thing because that's just way too much of a special snowflake character for me to even consider being RIOT worthy. I know that their lore has been lacking in a few aspects nowadays but still, this is more like someone's wet dream about everything that they would want for their own lives, in superman's spandex pants. It's not a good character simply because of that. No one wants to hear about someone who was destined for great glory, and simply drank tea to gain the powers. They want to hear about training, strife, mistakes, and consequences from those mistakes. That's what makes a character badass, relatable, and most important of all, something that seems to have the same characteristics as us. Fiddlesticks might just be a scarecrow, but he's a scarecrow created of someone's folly. It makes sense, other than someone just posting that a scarecrow became sentient for no reason and joined the League for, arguably, the same no reason that gave it sentience in the first place.

Second note; it's rather ironic that she left Noxian lands in order to become peaceful, yet she joins the League, which is, basically, a life of neverending war with other superpowered beings that last in bouts that can go up to and above an hour.

As another note, you posted this in the blog section. I feel sorry for all the people that have to yell at you posters to put it in the custom champions sections, mainly because they probably cause small cute kittens to cry distilled tears of sorrow whenever they need to do it.