User blog comment:Poisonshark/Custom Champion: Chiharu, the Green Channeler/@comment-1330314-20161024024711/@comment-1330314-20161024183929

I feel crit as a marksman/light fighter stat makes sense, since it's an autoattack-based stat that multiplies your AD, and gets triggered more often as you build attack speed. At the very least, it is something you want on an AD champion, not an AP champion. It looks like you might want Chiharu to be a hybrid champion, but champions that use both AD and AP to scale on the same things, i.e. damage, only very rarely stay "true" hybrids.
 * If Chiharu's thematic stat is health regen, then make her Primrose scale with health regen, not health. One of my personal peeves is how most of League's big-ticket health regeneration effects completely sidestep health regen in favor of maximum health, and this is no exception. I also fail to see why health regen should be a "thematic stat" for an assassin, or why it's important enough to preserve on her kit in spite of it not fitting with her playstyle and itemization.
 * It is possible and common for kits to provide more than one source of vision. In fact, if you were to have bushes provide vision, Daisy herself would not need to provide vision.
 * I feel an always-on reveal would be kind of self-defeating for a champion who uses stealth. If you want Chiharu to telegraph her attacks, why not make her ult give her Camouflage? Daisy revealing herself through brush makes Chiharu one of the least stealthy champions around, which looks like the opposite of what you're trying to achieve.
 * A better solution would be to simply reduce Scan's on-hit damage if it's too easy to apply, and perhaps increase Scouting Gazer's cooldown. I understand you want Scan to empower Chiharu's ability damage, but I don't think it's really a good idea to make your champion kill targets in a single ability rotation when so much of their damage is on-hit. Flat bonus ability damage is also generally not the best way to implement additional burst, and if you really want Chiharu to be bursty, I'd recommend some sort of delayed burst, a la (the new version).
 * If the key point of one ability is to synergize with a secondary effect of another, that's all the more reason to change it, as it will not be interesting outside of that particular synergy. There are plenty of ways to implement a song-type ability that do not involve turning your champion part-mage. 's channeled spell shield is one example.

I realize that you think Chiharu isn't meant to be ranged, but the way you designed her means she would function a lot more smoothly if she were. It's not just that Scan provides guaranteed crits, it's that Scouting Gazer is a long-ranged ability that can be used to Scan enemies from a distance. If Chiharu can only attack them from melee range, why let her Scan enemies from so far away?