User blog comment:Asfidyll/Raiju, the Grandmaster's Make/@comment-3391671-20170103160915/@comment-3391671-20170104011127

As Poisonshark pointed out below, I thank you very much for a proper reply. Not to many newcomers respond in full.

A story rewriting will for sure be necessary, since the current one doesn't everything so smoothly. The one written would have been better written after you write a basic lore, which goes "Once upon a time, there was..." Some lore works better with revealing a more specific lore first, but the one above happens to be too vague for its own good.

This is simply me reacting strongly due to being of Japanese blood, but as I said before, why is his name Japanese? If his name is supposed to be different to every culture, in the same way as, then why not use his "most common name"? I wouldn't believe his Ionian name would be the candidate to it. Is there a meaning behind Raiju in which you selected it for him, or was it simply out of personal preference?