Thread:Poisonshark/@comment-3391671-20160813181710/@comment-25235491-20160814164029

I want to answer that I'm kind of a maniac. We're talking about a Japanese wannabe character in a fighting game in case you need context. And since he's based on me, it's normal he butchers the language, but I'd rather not. The chuuni mention is pretty funny seeing as the second-to-last anime I went into was basically about that. I think I can be considered to be a chuuni trying to impress the world at this point. As for the style, well... I didn't even bother, mainly due to that lacking proper knowledge thing. But I know sometimes being shorter can sound cooler, but the fact is that the character is trying to sound flowery. Thanks for taking time with me about all of that. Now if you'll excuse me, I have a really deep pile of crap (with a little chantilly on it to mask the fact that it is crap but it's still crap lol) to clean up. See ya, and thank you again. - PS
 * I didn't think English would sound vague of all things. But personally my main language is not English, even though I do try to get what I mean in French, but
 * The "Stolen Sword" is actually referring to a copied sword technique (he just says "sword" as some sort of metaphoric poetry), but it's not meant as "Sword of the Stolen". I supposed it would be a  - ta ken (he means really "sword", not just "blade"). Of course, I'm not really aiming for you to teach me everything, I was mainly wondering how about to do similar things, like " ed ". Participle past, basically.
 * I'm not asking for long lessons, especially not this much of your time. Besides, it's not exactly meant to sound awesome, just flowery.
 * Seems that the terms I used for this very long name were not very aimless, since you just swapped even the few things I ripped straight from Japanese stuff in it. Why swap spirit for heart tho? I'd aim to stay grammatically correct, because it's meant to be more poetic than terse.
 * It's not exactly inverted, right? /nitpick
 * No such thing as ghouls, I'm afraid. It's more complicated. The character is a deceased human's ghost, but that's it. The floating thing is mostly about how it's basically floating with reduced gravity, but eh.
 * As for the Floating Stance, seems the first one is what I was going for. But overall, from the looks of it, many of the Japanese game manuals and guides and extras I read on the Net are horribly mistranslated or something, given that you always give me completely different stuffs...
 * Okay, so basically I need a table wipe about that and go back from scratch? I think I forgot to mention that this part was mostly about people names rather than move/attack names, unlike the cases above. So I'll take it that I need to entirely rework the thing, because all the character names are incorrect. Right? I would show you the extent of my butchering, but you've made me afraid that Enma's gonna rip my tongue off and bury me under all the butchering of the Japanese language I've done in my entire life (and that's a LOT, seeing as it's been 10 years since I've been this weabboo you're seeing, it's only been few years since I've tried being real, so to say, so I'm basically still a weabboo).
 * Even as a guy's name, it should be pronounced like that? Rework it's gonna be, though it kinda kills the point about how "Yoi" and "Nii" are obviously related because they share the last kanji in their names (yeah, I stick to theme naming). But hey, it's that or Enma rips out my tongue and makes me eat it so the choice is obvious. :)
 * I have a JAP-FRA dictionary (my main language is French, remember). I just need to find it again, even though it's complicated since I learn Japanese by way of English<->Japanese, which creates a bit more difficulty since my English, despite being quite good I think, has some imperfections that can cause me problems.