User blog comment:Rakanishu2199/Need reviewers for my games/@comment-5907289-20130529221554

Can you record it in spectator mode next time? I can't jump around the timeline, which makes analyzing stuff kinda hard, since I have to see it all in one go. Also since I was following you constantly I was surprised Nidalee was that fed from a DCd Ryze, had I been able to jump back I could see what happened.

About the Nasus game. Nidalee is a prick.

I didn't see much that you could've done better. I noticed they got lucky with turret aggro. I saw Rammus, Akali and Nidalee escaping with a sliver of health, tough luck on your part.

One thing that was blatantly obvious was that Blitz never got a great hook. The only two hooks I saw were a Lulu in last mid turret (she ults herself tanks turret, they dive) and a point blank on Akali. So he was a useless feedbot and meatshield.

Ryze DCd, which turned it into a 3v5. Morde has no CC so you were the only one peeling Rammus, Akali, you know what the whole team. You stood no chance in a teamfight and they made those happen. The only other you could do was back off, which would result in a loss too.

This match just wasn't your match.

The first gank top was a succes, but you barely made it out alive. I think if you had left the brush sooner you'd have taken less turret hits and could continue jungling and maybe gank mid (you had pots). But this is in hindsight, and it is only speculation.

6 minutes in you save Morde top, kill Akali; but I think you could've killed Rammus as well. You spent time looping around to block his path but that didn't really work out. Again, this is also a "Perhaps if ... " situation.

When blue spawns, you go ahead and take it with Ryze; and he makes a play and tries to burst Nidalee. You didn't notice it and I think wouldn't have either. No big deal. Rammus shows up and you go to save Ryze. Ryze makes the mistake of turning around too soon, and he wasn't chugging a potion. If he turned around a second later, Nidalee couldn't run past you, and it would be a 1 for 1, a 1 for 2 or even a 0 for 2. Ryze made a mistake here.

The fight at Dragon was unlucky for you. You had to wait for Ryze to show up, so you took free poke from Nidalee. You saved Dragon, with a 2 for 1 that's OK for the situation. Vayne did something really dumb there though; ulting and trying to fight; she got chunked and went to lane.

Next moment, you tried to countergank mid but Ryze blew up. You got kited by Rammus and Nidalee (your Ghost ran out) and got chunked. You should have backed off, but I would try and kill too. Captain Hindsight is a bitch.

You and Morde try to kill Nidalee afterwards, but you went in too soon and got bursted before Morde even could Ghost there. It was an AP Nidalee so she had the damage to burst you down, but she could've ran away if you waited a little longer. A lot of ifs, but you died in the end. Waiting would yield 1 for 1, 1 for 0 or 0 for 0.

Then, Ryze DCs. Their mid can push and roam excellent, so that's bad luck. Everything went downhill here, since you were forced in the defensive and Blitz and Vayne got caught twice which accelerated the process. Also, those two didn't want to win anymore.

Anyway, I overanalyzed a lot I think, but that's because I didn't see any mistakes overall. Perhaps next match could be a 5v5, this would perhaps be more productive.

I hope you found my commentary somewhat usefull :)

TL;DR Nidalee is a prick, Ryze DCs, Blitz is a bad fisherman.