User blog comment:Blithesomeness/Edith, the Favored Warrior/@comment-3391671-20151216054242/@comment-3391671-20151217234705

Stupidity or not, you had your reasons. Just wished topoint out the controversies.

For now, I believe her kit is what makes her conflicting too. As some have mentioned above, her kit doesn't identify her role in the game. Her innate, W and E are more oriented into a mage/marksman build as they focus more on the damage/multi-hit aspect of champions. Her ult is a support ability while Q is a mix, although it's support aspect is more core IMO.

If you need help with grammar or wording with your tooltips and abilities, ask someone on the wiki who has done accomplished works, such as some of the custom champion regulars. By doing so, they can help build your champion better. For example, if you want Edith to really be "the Immaculate", there would be some advice I can offer (such as redefining her role into possible a support/mage rather than the opposite).

Seeing that you are updating your lore, I won't comment on the new ally/rivals you've put up. Those can wait when your lore is put up.