User blog comment:Rampao/Shiraia, the Lightspeed Goddess/@comment-4834593-20120717144546

It looks nice. A few comments however:

1. Is she mana based, energy based, or otherwise?

2. What are the costs?

3. What are her base stats (attack damage, attack speed, armor, etc)?

4. Is she ranged or melee? If she's melee, her Q would be close to useless, I think.

5. For an Assasin, I don't think she has enough damage to finish targets off. If targets have a lot of health, she deals a lot of damage, but, seeing as how her E is her (only) damage skill, they will be hard to kill, because your damage scales of their current health. She gets weakers as her enemies get closer to death.

6. The attack speed on her Q would be a little bit too small, I think. Movement speed is nice like this, maybe even a bit on the strong side.

7. Her W has a very weak slow at the moment. Sejuani, for example, has a 10% slow on basic attacks, I have walked away from that without any abilities. It's just not noticable. You can also try Ashe with a level one Q, with which she has 15% slow. If you have the same movement speed, you can't land a next shot in time to refresh the slow.

8. As already mentioned, her E deals a lot of damage if her enemy has a lot of life, however, she can hardly finish targets off, because, when they have only 200 health, her E active will deal just 90 damage, while that's 900 damage when they have 2000 health. Seeing how she is AP too (not enough AD ratios to be AD), she'd not be capable to finish enemies off without a lot of trouble. And Assasins are meant to kill someone in 1 second, then be useless until their cooldowns are reset.

9. I think her ult might be a bit on the strong side, but of course, Kassadin isn't OP either, despite that ult. (no he is NOT OP. He either initiates with his ult, or flees with his ult. He can't do both. If he initiates, he is a free kill. At least, if you're not that weak that he can instakill you)