Thread:GreenMoriyama/@comment-32940312-20170825040231/@comment-3391671-20170825050153

Some of the "wordy" bits you explain about are at times added into the ability details instead of their description. It may be helpful to have every detailed laid out within the description alone, but as you may know, it can cause a bloat where readers may not care as much (such as some of the small delays).

The idea of "no good reason to be different from in-game wording" is up for discussion. However, I do not believe every in-game description is perfect, neither will I say the same for the descriptions here on the wiki. There was a reason for the wordings to be changed, so please do not stake it up as "no good reason."

The description may be "florid," but as I mentioned, that is what the wikia deems as "flavour text." While it can make reading descriptions easier to read for those who love to imagine what the abilities do, the descriptions are meant to describe the mechanics over the visuals. I personally follow the "first sentence or two, or at most a third, may have flavour text" policy, while what others follow will vary a bit.

Even if an ability has larger values than most other abilities, adjectives like "massive" or "great" are within the lines of flavour text. Let the numbers talk.

I thank you for your prompt reply.