User blog comment:Asfidyll/Artemis, the Lunari's Salvation/@comment-10764129-20140121111803/@comment-10764129-20140125073258

hi, sorry for taking so long, i really liked ur lore but something wasnt right and i was trying to figure out whats missing, so its time frame, the temple diana found is supposed to be old, for long untouched, and there are no signs of lunari existance in mount targon, which means they are long forgoten, and artemis seems to be as old as diana, her age is mentioned on her lore, so both lores doesnt match, a decade is not enough for the solari to erase any memory or document about the lunari, see lissandra? she needed a LOT of time to erase the watchers from people's memories, so u should change time and stuff, and some quotes like her taunt for diana, its sounds stupid, not meant to be rude tho, something likesolari scum, how dare you pretend to be one of us or you will paid for what u stole, do some changes to the choosen of the moon, that firstborn thing is kind weird, maybe something like the marai(nami's people) once a century someone shows sings of  being the choose blah blah blah(but if u gonna change the time her backgrounds happened then the firstborn gifted with longevity fits well)