Thread:Witchking99/@comment-22636720-20170120165228/@comment-3391671-20170331065611

Hmm... the kit doesn't feel as tightly knit, in comparison to how you tried to set him up with the initial quote. I really like the quote, since none of the current champions offer that direct image of terror. Some will give the idea that you will face a gory death, but here, Netzach is offering something simple yet straightforward: "Anyone who every meets me will never see the light of day." Yet, the kit, and the abilities, do not give that feeling. Of course, a game cannot reproduce it 100%, neither can we test it out at the moment as there is no demo for it, but nonetheless, the fantasy behind it is not at play...

For example, the Sign of the Reaper, the innate to Netzach's kit, is something that is self-supportive, but is also for allies. It detracts from Netzach's theme of being this reaper, in my opinion.

On the mechanical side of the kit, there is a mark, a stack, and charges all in one kit. This is not necessarily bad, but to think of how Netzach relies on having these supposed limiters is rather unappealing. There is also the fact that you insert unique abilities, W and E, but they do not feel as intriguing. I would say it's likely because, while they fit to the shadow theme, they are common examples of what other players have tried to add to a custom kit. More flare needs to be added to them, both in how impressive they are in their use and also in thematics.