User blog comment:BIA-Kaboose/The Piltover Struggle/@comment-5266525-20130522083829/@comment-8267817-20130524152008

Actually we are both native English speakers, he is just bad at selling I went back and fixed what I could, and I know it didn't make much sense for some of the characters to work together, but it is kind of free reign as far as fan fiction goes, for example I argued the point about not changing Zac with him for a few hours at least before we finally agreed that we would leave it as is. We also had a strong sense of irony in forcing TF and Graves to team up since they hate each other, and it made the story kind of tragic by adding in all the back story and making it seem as though TF regretted his past decisions and was trying to make it up to him despite Graves not really caring about TF trying to be nice to him, it was just an interesting situation that we were trying to create, also Jayce and Viktor aren't working together because they like each other, they were getting their orders from the same place, and while Jayce would rather just beat Viktor senseless with his hammer, he figured his home and his friends were more imortant than a grudge, for now.