User blog comment:Chase999/Netzach, The Progeny of Destruction/@comment-26815373-20170318190917

I normally don't harp on a kit's numbers or ratios, but I immediately see a problem. Netzach has more range than and his ranged basic attacks deal bonus % health damage on top of their normal damage. Then, and this is the problem, his Q gives him two more ranged auto-attacks with even more damage on top of them.

So his gameplay pattern seems to be: right-click twice, press Q, right-click twice again, press W. Tons of damage and due to his extreme range, very little fear of retaliation, very little time to react. He can even press E just to get some bonus crit chance to chunk down his enemy with even more reliability and efficiency. And his ultimate is a steroid that also CC's the target he's attacking. It's not very exciting.

Now, I said I normally don't harp on numbers or ratios because I'm more concerned with a champion's theme and narrative. As it stands, he seems to get into 's design space (her being 'arsenal girl') and I'm not sure what he adds to League that doesn't already exist. He has tons of damage but he doesn't do anything new.

When I try to design a champion, I imagine I'm pitching the champion to a notable Rioter. What would you say about Netzach that would impress them? How would you convince them that he's what League needs. If you're just out to design champions as practice for making your own MOBA one day, feel free to carry on, but if you're like me and you hope that a Rioter will see your champ and get inspired, then you need to reconsider Netzach niche, theme, flavor, etc. etc.