User blog comment:Grrrbear26/CCC4 Haux, The Precourser of Machines/@comment-6006137-20140710201252

Hi there! As I promised I'll give you my ups and downs on Haux, reply if you agree or disagree.

- First off, your wording needs slight polish. some stuff is vague or could simply be put in  a more technical sense. There is no problem with giving people the exact brief explanation on the ability and I suggest you read a few of the champions and how their spells are formatted, it really helped me out.

- I like the Q, no lie. and depending on the width/speed of the missle, I even recommand increasing the AP ratio just a litte bit. If I read the skill correctly, the skill technically becomes suspended and then continues when it goes out? Maybe you can make it so that it just flies in the Magnetisphere? This would allow you to buff the normal range quite a bit and making it just a tad less reliant on the Sphere, but I will adress that later.

- The W passive is good, maybe make it scale slightly with rank. The idea of the Shield is also nice, not really much to say about it.

- Your E's counterinteraction is something I really like. It's readable to your enemies as well as for yourself. If you pull it off well, you might even get a mini-Orianna ult on command, that's nasty. But if the range is the distance pulled/pushed, what is the Radius of which you can activate the ability? This is something that's missing and must be adressed if you want a shot at the crown.

- The Magnitisphere is cool, not gonna lie, but there are a few problems with it which makes Haux too unreliable to really work in the League. Why? SImple