Thread:LivesByProxy/@comment-27802145-20160712110245

Hello LBP.

For my next, I was planning on doing the presentation a bit differently, as to combine both the abilities and narrative into one structure, as can be seen here.

I thought it would be very useful to get some outside opinions before I go any further (ie. finish typing the concept), as to avoid an excessive amount of backtracking and reworking if the need to occurs. Furthermore, I, as well as many others of this Wikia (or at least I think), know that you're real big on the flavour/presentation department, as most recently made evident by your infographic on LoL's gameplay elements regarding sight, and hence, I found it most reasonable to request a critique on the presentation from you.

Please try to be honest, and if need be, critical.

Hope to hear from you soon. 