Thread:Lesdin/@comment-22636720-20161017040111/@comment-27802145-20161020000842

Firstly, allow me to apologize for the delay in my response. I can't say that I've been the busiest person to have ever existed most recently, but it has been rough, if anything.

Regarding Erebus' monologue, I'd just like to say that I've already seen it on an earlier date on Green's message wall. Though Green may have revamped the writing, I'm sure he had merely bolstered the content of which you were meaning to present, and by all means, the end result is genuinely promising. It sort of reminds me of Hakumen's iconic monologue from BlazBlue, which also adds to the effect for me personally.

As for the kit, I'm liking the general thematic in which you've managed to establish for Erebus' gameplay, but I think it would be best if I saved the entire criticism for when you've finished it in its entirety, including the numbers. Just serves to avoid redundancy, and saves time.

When you've finished a full iteration of Erebus' kit, be sure to notify me, and I'll get back to you ASAP.