User blog:Nuclrdmntr/Ulciscor, Vengeance's Embodiment

Just a new champion concept I came up with a couple days ago. Any suggestions for improvements will be highly appreciated. His name,, is just a filler until I find something better to use.

Anyways, I based this champion on having a whip for a limb (like Drake from the Gone series, hence his name Drakir) and somewhat basing his abilities around that. I thought it would be unique to have a range longer than a melee but shorter than a typical ranged champion and an ability that can change that (I was not influenced by the buff to Wukong's Q).

Stats:
 * Health: 487 (+89)
 * Attack Damage: 52.3 (+3.6)
 * Health Regen: 6 (+0.9)
 * Attack Speed: 0.690 (+3.5%)
 * Mana: 240 (+50)
 * Armor: 16 (+4)
 * Mana Regen: 7 (+0.6)
 * Magic Resist: 30
 * Range: 350
 * Movement Speed: 315

Passive: Scars of Punishment

Drakir's autoattacks slow for 1, 2, 3, 4% and deal 0.5%, 1%, 1.5%, 2% + 1%/100 bonus AD of his target's maximum health over 3 seconds. Stacks up to 5 times

Q: Fiery Torment

Drakir's next autoattack gains 350 range, slows for 15%, 20%, 25%, 30%, 35% for 2 seconds and deals 30, 60, 90, 120, 150 + 1.8 Total AD.
 * Cooldown: 10, 9, 8, 7, 6
 * Cost: 30 Mana

W: Vengence's Wrath

Drakir digs his whip into a target and dashes to it. If the target is an enemy, it deals 50, 85, 120, 155, 190 + 0.8 Bonus AD
 * Cooldown: 21, 19, 17, 15, 13
 * Cost: 40, 45, 50, 55, 60 Mana
 * Range: 800

E: Scorched Fury

Drakir lashes out with his whip and damages all enemies in range. It grants 5%, 10%, 15%, 20%, 25% Attack Speed for each champion hit, 33% of the buff for any other units hit. Stacks up to 5 times and lasts 5 seconds.
 * Cooldown: 10
 * Cost: 50 Mana
 * Range: 450

R: Retribution

Drakir summons his cursed power and grabs an enemy champion. In the next 2 seconds he can chose activate this ability again to drag it in a chosen direction, for a distance depending on rank and Scars of Punishment stacks. The second activation gains 10, 20, 30 bonus range for each stack of Scars of Punishment on the target. Deals 200, 325, 450 + 1.5 Bonus AD in physical damage, half at the start, half at the end. Drakir can move, autoattack and cast abilities normally in the duration.
 * Cooldown: 120, 110, 100
 * Cost: 75, 100, 125 Mana
 * Range:
 * (initial) 450, 625, 800
 * (2nd activation base) 350, 475, 600
 * (2nd activation max) 400, 575, 750