User blog comment:Commander Marko/Castell, the Manifest of Chaos/@comment-7709681-20140606031851

First off, I think you did wrong the leveling from the innate passive; first goes a single digit that represents the number of levels from the ability, then the series of text to display and finally the respective level scalings.

For example: The number 4 for this example, then the four percentages to be shown and finally the four respective values of each level scale -. In your case would be

Now, about the concept... well... too much free power (literally free, only cooldown dependant abilities); and that good forsaken ultimate, it would be acceptable if at least was a three seconds channeling ability, but you just need to press a button and everyone within range is disabled without chance of decreasing the duration or cleansing it.

If you want to either guarantee yourself from using it or escape afterwards then you have W and E, if you want to amplify the damage deal you have the Innate and Q.