User blog comment:Nhan-Fiction/(Custom, Fan-Made Champion) Kiya, the Fervor of the Sands/@comment-60764-20121219063518/@comment-60764-20121225082118

Tis fine. But you can't substitute puns for humor (as you can't substitute memes for cleverness *cough[User_blog:Typhron/Tess,_Inciter_of_the_Sands Tess]cough*). One every so often isn't a bad thing, but too many can be a bit grating.

On a character like Lux (who spouts a reference with every other line) she's quite alright flavor-wise as those otherworldly things about her fit into her character ("I love it when a plan comes together" being a famous line from the A-Team, but also indicates her combat expertise and personal emphasis on planning). It may just be me thinking too much, but you know.