User blog:OromisMasta/Custom Champion - Khreox, The Banished Shaman

Hi!

This is my first post, and my first custom champion project that i decided to publish, i would love to hear your opinions about it (both positive and negative, just tell me what i should work on :)

So, i thought of this guy, i tentatively named him Khreox (TBH i've never given any thought on his name, i came up with this one just now) and i created some interesting (IMO) mechanics for him.

First, Khreox is a mage, who would rely on spamming spells and having some nice sustain (something kinda like Swain, but not exactly)

His skills would be something like this (ofc all names and numbers, even the whole effects might be subject to changes, if you have some good ideas for replacing some of them that would fit his theme, just write it in comments):

Passive: Ritual of Blood

After casting 3 spells within 10s (counting from the time of 1st cast) Khreox enters entranced state for 7s, making his next spell cost health (% of his current) instead of mana, but having also additional effects.

Q: Sacrifice 

[Simple spell, minor single target magic damage, low-medium range, low CD (~3-5s)]

Khreox deals magic dmg to single target, if he kills it, 100/105/110/115/120% of spell's cost is refunded (whether it's HP or mana)

Ritual effect (5% of current HP): Additional dmg based on target's missing HP, if target is killed, nearby enemies receive 30/35/40/45/50% of original target's damage (also refund cost when killed, with same scaling, so on rank 5 first target refunds 120% of the cost, and secondary ones 60%)

W: Tribal totem

[AoE DPS + additional detonation with some cc]

Khreox places a totem which reveals area around itself and deals magic dmg per second for 3s in this area, also applies a minor slow (10% ?), at the end of the effect, the totem explodes, dealing additional dmg and rooting brielfy (~0.75s) all enemies in the AoE

Ritual effect (10% of current HP): Bigger AoE, final explosion stuns instead of rooting and heals Khreox for a flat amount (scaled with AP) for every enemy unit affected by it (very little for minions/monsters but more for champions)

E: Cursed Mark

[Single target focusing spell, high CD (~20-25s)]

Khreox marks an enemy champion for 4s, dealing to him 6/8/10/12/14%(+0.5%/100AP) of all damage he takes (before resistances/dmg reductions, all converted to magic dmg)

Ritual effect (10% of current HP): Khreox also heals for 6/8/10/12/14%(+0.5%/100AP) of all dmg the marked champion receives (excluding the dmg dealt by the main effect of this skill). Also, if one of them dies during the mark's duration, the other one gets another effect: Khreox heals himself for a % of his missing HP, enemy receives magic dmg equal to % of his max HP)

R: Zealous Trance

[Toggled ability, with CD similiar to Swain's, it doesn't count towards the passive's spell counter and resets it after toggling off]

Khreox burns 7(?)% of his current HP every second, but all his spells get Ritual Effects without additional costs. Also, in this state his spells deal 1% more dmg for every 3/2.5/2% of his HP missing.

I created him as a little tanky/high sustain mage, so he would benefit from items like RoA or Rylais, and WotA as well.

His playstyle would be focused around taking down single crucial target with E and Q, E would also introduce some complicated decision making for enemies (if you mark their ADC or other squishy target, they would have to think twice about focusing you because they could just accidentally kill their own teammate)

Also, his enhanced spells all cost HP, but they have means to return their cost if used properly, so it would be crucial to ue all of them efficiently, what again wouldn't be so hard as there are no skillshots among them.

Would he be OP/UP or maybe just pure bullshit/not fitting the current meta (as he has 0 mobility)?

I couldn't adjust the precise numbers, i just thought of this overall image, what do you think?

And last, sorry for my english, it's not my native language, if you spot some errors/incomprehensible parts, just tell me, i'll do my best to correct them ;P