User blog comment:Toymakers Creation/The Shattered Crown/@comment-1920550-20150713220102

I did like the introduction, but not the inclusion of Evelynn in it. Also you neglected other key players like Maokai, who holds the core essence of the Isles and is hunted by the Shadows for it. In mentioning the king's mages and the cavalry men who suggested the ritual you could have included Karthus and Hecarim in those parts of story. Besides i would find it poetic irony if by Mordekaiser's deception, the Ruined King would rise and force him under his command.