User blog comment:GreenMoriyama/Izo, the Blizzard Prince/@comment-4091261-20160617041243/@comment-3391671-20160623003247

I too apologize for my claims. I just wished to let you know that I had been somewhat annoyed, and did not wish to keep it bottled in. I'm glad that you've been blunt since it does grant me a solid view of my work in the case if I really did do something incorrect or poorly .I'll keep brushing up on my diction and all for that reason. Also, at times, those who don't take items seriously are the ones I appreciate much less.

The title for sure was one thing I should have changed a long time ago, when I had changed the course of the story. As I mentioned before, it used to be about the unnamed merchant being rescued by Izo, but I wanted to technically avoid the cliche of "having the narrator be saved by the focus character" as the first story I would write for Izo. I apologize if I had made it seem that it would go in that direction.

The title you offer is for sure a good one. "A Passing Breeze"... nice and simple, and somewhat represents what is occuring with the unnamed merchant. I still plan on writing the fight scene, since I do wish for it to be elaborated to show how Izo fights (presumbly, I want this event to occur at least a good year after the events of "The Past of Izo" to who how much more Izo has brushed up on his capability to fight with ice and blade). This may end up changing a few things in the current "A Merchant's Rescue" but for sure it'll be for the better.

To me, it is better to say, "The greatest of minds know what good can come out of anime, even if they are about a Samurai going about his boring life." Japanese animation/films have done some good deeds in film directions that makes me feel that some Western film makers should take note on. One example of someone showing this is the YouTuber Mother's Basement and his series of "What's in a XXX"; I recommend anyone to check his videos out.