User blog comment:Tylobic/Gardylan, the Dark Warlock/@comment-4290320-20150901101457

His interaction with Rek'Sai seems unlikely. I find this unusual due to several reasons:


 * Stated by Riot, she's an animal-like Voidborn in the sense that she would even attack other Voidborns (excluding her own kind). The only thing on her mind is survival through sating her hunger.


 * Her incapability to talk. I feel like having her visit Gardylan and taunt him via verbal speech is just... weird. She doesn't seem capable of holding grudges, and considering the fact that she's as big as a house and incredibly savage, she is fully capable of taking down most of the League's champions (lore wise).


 * The time frame of the story seems irrelevant. Rek'Sai has been in Shurima for several decades (let's say 70 years). Unless Gardylan is over 100 years old, the latter part of the story wouldn't make much sense.

The theme you're going for seems unaware. Do you want him to be a warlock or a 'puppetmaster' of the void? Either way, I'd suggest choosing one and focus on making his kit and lore fit that theme.

Hopefully this feedback can help you adjust and improve your concept.