User blog comment:BeyondSacrifice/Spirius, Wielder of Guardians/@comment-3391671-20170720211006

Hmmm... this is not that bad of a champion, but if I had to say, the champion is lacking in intrigue. Let me slip this review into two so as to not mar between them.

Concept/theme: There is surely a well established relation between Vasul and Emrin. While they have the obvious "gentle vs rough" duo compatibility, it's not that bad. However, the issue I find with Spirius’ theme is from there on. Beyond the two spirits, Spirius is just a babying "Yordle"... which is already taken by. To top it off, the art used for Spirius is more Vastayan in touch, due to how the body is proportioned: it's proper to more of an animal, while Yordles seem to be a little more shrunken/lanky, with a large head. I do recall some "guardians" being little children, but this takes it in a way I can't entirely appreciate. The reason is because there isn't a reason for Spirius to be commanding these spirits, as he's a simple fuzzball of cuteness. When putting more than one character into a concept... just know that you also risk losing depth with each character, and here, you essentially cut a third out of the concept by having Spirius be shallow in the first place. While duo champions like have been done, I find it that this concept would have benefited if Vasul and Emrin were the only minds here, with Spirius removed.

Kit: I may not be the best person to ask what is a good kit, but what I will say is that the kit is split. In some ways, it's intriguing, such as the E which could work if given some tweaks. But all the other effects are either causing trouble for power budget in the kit (the innate's splitting effect of the abilities) or is not something to be seen in this game (Q's ability to heal and damage at the same time). I would like to give more insight into this kit, but would like to baton pass that to someone else. All I will say is that you should consider if this champion is fit for League's standards of what should be in a kit, along with a clear goal of what they should do. For now, I do not see such a clear goal with this kit, which offers little too much of everything, even if they are supposed to be a support (that passive is not support friendly imo).

Lastly, while the images used are nice, I recommend placing links at least to where the main art is from. While no copyright police will come to put you in fluffy cuffs, it's not a good mark on your record if you take good looking art without sourcing them. You may not have stolen the actual good, but you take credit away from the original artist by not naming its source (in this case Flicker from Vainglory).

Also, join to the Discord. Come by and chat with us there, since it's easier to have conversations there than on the wiki.