User blog comment:VerySheepy/New to wiki, OP custom champion/@comment-10958553-20150310155907

I like the concept but there are a few mechanics you could add to smooth out gameplay.

Q is a good ability but it needs a little help. This guy lacks CC and this is the best place to put it. I would say that a destoyed tower could simply knock back all damaged enemies a short distance. You could also up the explosion radius to 300. Just a thought. Also i am pretty sure you wanted to state that he (or she) leaps to spires with Q? It would make sense as it is called "Helm Charge" If it leaps I would suggest just making it leap to any crystal without needing the ultimate. Just some thoughts.

For E you could impliment an ammo mechanic similar to Zyra's Rampant Growth. This would allow you to have several spires up at once. Also you could probable set their duration to 15 seconds at all ranks. I think these quality of life buffs would help significantly. Also I would clarify whether or not this guy can benefit from attacking his own spires (Infinite mana is frowned upon now adays.) Also does this grant mana based on health? I don't think it should.... anyway...

W feels like an odd ability. It has abysmal range and steals from the uniqueness of E. Instead it should have awesom range and add to the uniquness of E! Maybe some mechanic where you knock spires to other locations similar to Syndras Scatter the weak? maybe single targeted? Im thinking something along the lines of "Corun pushes target spire to 800 units away from him, dealing magic damage to all enemies hit." This new ability has better uses, moving spires to more advantageous positions, and would synergize well with Q if Q was intended to leap to spires.

a new passive for the ult  could be "Helm charge refreshes 80% of its cooldown upon destroying a Spire." This could also be added into the W with the % going up as you rank it up.

Your champ isn't actually overpower he is actually a bit under powered.....

These are just some thoughts on your concept. I really enjoy the theme it just needs a little fine tuning in my oppinion.