User blog comment:Hamengeri/How to make this kit feel good?/@comment-24862418-20140823061846

1. What main role do you want this champ aim to? That will help a lot. This comment will reply as if he is an utility champion (for the fact that he can damage reduction and the ultimate).

2. It's pretty interesting to see a Portal champion. You can view my Porte for some ideas, although the main idea is not very similar to yours.

3. Passive: Chose one passive name only. % damage or 100% damage. A free spell shield is interesting.

4. What do you aim this champ to? What I can see: a very safe mage (she can heal from magic damage, she can reduce damage and also can be untargetable). When I look at the picture and the story, I'm thinking a trickster champ (that's what Pix do, right). And you should do something about movement as it's a reindeer anyway. The kit should also describe the lore (not the Gnar's kind). Like how Vel'Koz explore champ bodies with his ultimate, Ashe is a peaceful queen). She is somewhat a runaway champ (from the Void), so a 3-dash spell like Ahri's would be interesting.

5. The ultimate is interesing, though I don't know if other champs enjoy it. It's not that kind of Yasuo's wall anoying. You can read the Toymaker comment for details. And I wonder why she has it since she doesn't has any direction spell. Curently, I'm working on a Mirror champ, so I've stumble the same problem. I will share anyidea if I have one.