User blog comment:Scild/Caspid and Robe “The Cursed Blades” Champion Concept/@comment-4499980-20120525203644

It seems like a fun concept. I have two "main" suggestions though, and they relate more to your wording/formatting rather than the concept itself.

First, consider using a different format for your post, namely wherever there are bulleted points. I don't know if it's just me, but all your bullets are off to the left side (outside the normal text space).

My second suggestion would be to maybe use the CAD template for your abilities. You don't need to have ability icons, so don't worry about that. Also, the CAD template can help you put both your ability descriptions as well as your mechanics in an organised manner. If you don't know which template I'm talking about, I mean the one used on ability details pages like this one Varus the Arrow of Retribution/Ability Details.

If you decide to follow my advice and need help with it, contact me on my talk page or send me an email (my email adress is on my profile).