User blog comment:DingyuChowMein/Pestis, the Swordsman of Zaun/@comment-17573431-20140103090953

the passive needs a cd like jarvan has. his does 4% health and has a 10 cd before used on same enemy. maybe you could run with that. JHis cleaveis decent but cleave usually is 360 degrees. his throwing knife is a thrust fo a dagger? cant see that go too far unless you are throwing it and not shiving someone. the shadow shif i can see is kind of like jax's. maybe include ally unit veersus enemy unit. debilitate is pretty cool b ut dont make it op. i hope the active is like rivens ult and that he cant activate it more than once during his ult.

find out what kind of champ your guy is. seems to me like he is mixed in a bunch. you have ap, ad, and health bonuses. just seems like too much for one champ. you should make your champ focus on one maybe 2 so that the players can concintrate on that. ex. malph with his armor,  galio with his mr, ryze with his mana. etc

just some suggestions to help you out. if youwant anything else or any questions hit me up.