User blog comment:Baristar/Reworked Champion, Seerose the Millennium Storian/@comment-27802145-20170227111656


 * Base stats are all over the place.
 * Q is missing its cost type.
 * R's mana cost is unique for really no reason.

"Wow" was the first reaction that came to me when I first saw this. Seerose has a lot of interesting things going in her kit, though their levels of complexity do seem unnecessarily high in general. In addition to this, some of the numbers seem overly erratic, hence I feel the need to point out that substituting creative mechanics for outrageous numbers is one of the worst things you could do when creating a custom champion (I myself am guilty of this).

Furthermore, some of Seerose's abilities seem to have unnecessary functionalities (often gated by certain conditions or abysmal numbers) which only serves to bloat her kit, rather than adding depth to her gameplay. You should try to trim down her abilities, as to grant the core of the abilities more strength, in addition to emphasizing them over the miscellaneous components that you have now.

Here is an example of how you could change Seerose for the better: