User blog comment:Vynellin/Veldrin The Cursed Dragon Knight./@comment-1876049-20151205104634/@comment-7709681-20151205154815

Agh, is his/her first concept, there have being far worse first tries. Better be UP than OP, like that you can see the flaws and, not only correct them, but right them.

However, nothing can be corrected unless the kit has an identity to pursue, which disgracefully this concept has.