User blog comment:ClayHuang158/Furior/@comment-3391671-20160307193049

A champion based around being a representation of hate itself... interesting. As much as other champions have placed some kind of malice, there hasn't been a wildebeest of this kind. I'll be pointing out some of the concept continuation flaws, but otherwise, the champion needs a couple flavor-of-life tweaks.
 * The innate is for sure full of hate. But as I was thinking about it, I had thought of an alternative way of triggering the marks, the damage and the heal:
 * Whenever an enemy champion strikes Furior, the enemy will be marked with a stack of "hate", up to five times. If Furior attacks the enemy, all marks will be consumed, dealing an additional (+ 17.5% bonus AD) (+7.5% bonus AD per Hate stack before consumption) bonus physical damage. Consuming stacks also heals Furior for  (+ 5% missing health) health, double on champions and large minions/monsters. 6 second static cooldown.
 * The way Rage Strike seems more like a tool of magic (as in, one with added effects) rather than an actual strike of anger. I would propose removing sustain on either this Q or his E as he has quite some sustain, even if he trades mobility for it (while his W is a mobility tool, it's a single "dash"). Actually, I would expect a hateful champion to have a MS/AS steroid in their build.
 * "Scarring Strike": Furior's next basic attack will deal bonus physical damage, increased by 1% per 1% of Furior's missing health, while also inflicting damage over time based on the target's missing health. The target is also revealed and slowed by 35% for the duration.
 * The damage of Inescapable Vengeance goes rocket high, in both raw stats and the AP scaling. Best to scale those a bit down, even with the long cooldown. The shield also faces the same issue as it offers much protection. Otherwise, it would seem a little more balanced if the ability granted a dash than a flash (along with a duration the dash has to be reactivated in, such as 6 seconds). I would like to comment on where the orb comes from, but it's better to perceive that as Furior's ball of fury... oh yes, "hero" is the incorrect term (I presume by your friend?).
 * More to be added...