User blog comment:Commander Marko/Photor, The War Machine/@comment-5791947-20130212071150

Your concept this time is rather disappointing compared to your older works.

Passive cooldown is just too long to be of any actual use.

Don't scale Q with total AD, and increase the damage for early levels.

W is just...., anon's right.

E is pretty much a very powerful utility spell, I definitely wouldn't delay and maximize the damage, but for the CC instead.

Unless you know what you're doing, don't ever scale true damage, I'm talking about your R. I wouldn't even feel like leveling up either, the mana cost is Anivia levels of high.

The entire kit lacks synergy, sadly. I can't even see a clear ability pattern other than being an with E then Q.