Thread:GreenMoriyama/@comment-22636720-20150811105945/@comment-3391671-20150814044456

Well, seems like you have found someone who is interested (me).

At the moment, it may also help you in later champions if I gave little "lessons" on how to build up champions (and also in general characters in a story setting). That is what many new champion builders seem to lack, as it causes champions to seem unique, but in actuality is plain or odd at the bare bones; TK_Hann needed my help with that too at the start (I only gotten interested in League recently; TK_Hann had made all those custom champions but has dropped his project, asking if I can continue for him).

Now, as for the lore, the main issue is that it introduces Alleron...but only that. Any champion will have that and it will not likely interest players. "Oh, he's the usual chosen one of the circus...boring" will be what some players will say, while others will just mention that you might need to make it more unique. If you don't mind, I'll make it unique for you ;3

The best way to work together is either through a chat channel (skype, for example) or through email. Chatting through the wikia will not be the most beneficial place, due to lack of privacy and the fact that messages aren't instant.

Anyways, enough talk about that, first lesson (if you don't mind; this can be read later, so pay attention to the above details first before learning from this lesson): With how Riot is trying to introduce unique champions and reinvent old champions into intriguing characters, aside from creating a base idea for your custom champion, you also need to make sure you build on that. The same goes to the role you wish to assign them: if you want to build them towards one way, make sure you build towards it in the whole kit, not with each ability one by one. Yes, this will mean that a few abilities will not go with the original plan, but a custom champion builds character with every connecting dot. If you want to raise such a champion, sacrifices will be made.