User blog comment:Omnicious/Lost, Forgotten but never Gone/@comment-26815373-20160415024530

IDK where you're going with this but... if my hypothetical champ Imoen made an appearance I would LOL.

Your writing isn't bad, but you've got spelling and grammatical mistakes here and there. Also, this was too short - probably less than a page in MS Word - and it didn't really 'hook' me, despite the cliffhanger ending.

Don't be discouraged though. There are a lot of possibilities for the lore, and I like that you're trying to them.