User blog comment:Spiritweaver123/Espiritu - The Gentle WInd/@comment-26815373-20160225081515

I think there is a lot of potential here. You have this idea of two units in one (we've seen this kind of thing with and, though I don't think he counts, ) except this time the 'duality' in question seems to be Science vs Sorcery, or Technology vs Nature. (It's also got this secondary / minor theme of a male / female, father / daughter thing.) That's not a theme we've seen Riot put into champion form yet which is why I think you've hit on something important...

Going to get this out of the way - your kit functions but it's flavorless. It is an easy fix though, but you should think this:

Neth and Rhea are from Zaun, just like, , and all of these champs usually derive their power from some hex-tech or mecha-magic apparel that's kinda exclusive / uniquely Zaun in appearance. Can you imagine (really visualize) how your characters could appear distinct or unique compared to other League champions? Or are Neth and Rhea just ordinary people for the most part, in their ordinary clothes and ordinary thoughts. That's what they feel like, IMO, based on your lore and even the abilities. They don't feel grounded in League's world, despite you saying they come from Zaun (maybe Rhea originates somewhere else?). Which is to say, they don't feel like Legends.

What does their clothes, the way they carry themselves (or he carries her), or their gear say about them? Does Neth make use of special gadgets or gizmos? No, daggers he bought from the shop dealer don't count. What about their silhouette (both individually and together) mark them as unique or recognizable on the map? Do they utilize a unique color scheme / palette? What about the particle effects on their abilities?

I'm asking you all this because you do have an interesting idea here. I think you should think on it some more. I will be. Nurture it and watch it grow.

Again, all IMO (for what that's worth...)