User blog comment:BoltOfSpades/Khadamn, the Warden of the Sands/@comment-22636720-20160207100224

Okay, this is nice a new Shurima Custom Champion :D if you don't know there are a lot of people who've made Shurima champions and all of them connect to each other its kinda nice but anyway on with the comments.

I  agree with GreenMoriyama, the passive is very limiting.

Reason 1: 10 seconds... the 10 second appearance is very disrupting if he doesnt gain it automatically. Remember 1000 units, thats Illaoi's Spirit Snatching Ability +100 units, is pretty big. From the bottom lane if he was in a bush. he would potentially have to cross the entire lane to get it, he might even need to leave his ADC to get it. you know just how dangerous it is to do so?

Reason 2: He doesn't get to use his abilities when needed in pre-level 6, remember 2 seconds is all it takes for a blitzcrank-vayne combo, thresh-varus combo, heck even Alistar-ashe combo to kill your ADC. fine, you have an area 2-second root. (FYI, OP ability for a basic skill) in late game sure it will help you. but that 2-second root doesnt stop them from using abilities or attacking. not only that there is no guarantee that he will even be able to use his abilities.10 seconds before gaining a resource is quite hindering. i would personally prefer a bigger larger area with a shorter cooltime than a large-medium area with a long cooltime

The Q is has no range... i can't fully evaluate this ability without the range since this is a toss ability right? which means the same mechanic as Maokai's toss sapling... which confuses me even more with your description. Please correct this. if its toss or push or whatever please just correct this.

a 2-second area root every 12 seconds... again, no range... This is an OP basic ability, you potentially made a Morgana area Q, depending on range. I would personally use a CDR build just to abuse this skill i would literally save up Chunks and not use any other ability but this one just to spam it. that's how powerful this is.

E is lacking, i would personally never use this skill unless i need to escape, and  with my rare resource of chunks i wouldnt ever want to use this skill unless absolutely necessary because its useless until you get 3-4 stacks this is useless. I would rather use my W to escape rather than wasting 3-4 chunks i would be wasting one to help me and my ADC to escape yes that is what i would do.

R i cant really comment on this one you should really think it thoroughly.

Anyway thats all i have so far. im not insulting you if you think i am. i most certainly am not. im just giving constructive critisizm if you have a problem with the way i said things please do comment on this comment