User blog comment:Nhan-Fiction/(Custom, Fan-Made Champion) Kiya, the Fervor of the Sands/@comment-5895753-20121221050531

A character I'd love to play. Some random comments... ^_^

1. Her backstory needs some work in the sense that it seems like she has lost her way, but doesn't understand what it is that she is missing. I'd add a statement along those line, or edit the final section so it shows her understanding that she has failed for a reason.

2. Having three phases to her weapon can be a bit tricky, especially considering the relative simplicity Riot favors. I love the idea of a unique item though, but if it was done, I imagine it woudl become her passive skill as opposed to an item.

3. Her pictures are amusingly varried. In some, she is a slightly sultry sphinx, and in others a completely innocent mau.