User blog comment:MickB/Khrax, the Archaic Overlord/@comment-6860002-20131026165218

It's a great concept, but, there are some things that i would change ( if in you )

Passive = It's the old Karma's passive, i would like if the passive was like " Khrax next ability deals 3%/6%/9% of maximum health"

Q = It's totally ok, except for the thing that when hit an enemy champion it will reduce other cooldown by 25%. It would be alot better if it reduces cooldowns by 1second.

The other skills are ok except for the Ratio/Basic damage

Q=90|140|180|230|280 (70% AP) 

''Remember, when you are creating a champ, the ratio if it's higher then the base damage it's better. For me it should be like this''

Q=65|110|155|200|245 (90% AP or 80% AP)

It will sound like a more late game champ.

W=60|90|120|150|180 (50% AP)

''It's a bit low ratio, but i understood how you wanted to use this skill, just for a consecutive slow in a team fight, it's good anyway, 50% AP ratio for a midlaner is low, it's like a nami's skill. For me it would be like this.''

W=30|70|110|150|190 (65% AP)

Like this it would be a late skill, but not with high damage as Q

E= It's ok :D

R=200|260|320 (80% AP)

Look at this :D

R=150|225|300 (90|100|110% AP or 100% AP)

I hope this comment helps you ^^ See ya!