User blog comment:Warmk/Champion concept: Harold the hitman/@comment-3391671-20161204234008

Will need some streamlining, and you may need a lesson on how to construct a well written ability box tempalte (not that there is an explicit enough guide ATM; am in the process of writing it). Nonethless, my main point of criticism for now is that the concept itself is a bit weak, due to the idea being driven on the simple idea of "hitman." Your concept isn't bad, but doesn't pique my interest and could be improved. To top it off... there are a lot of champions who are in some form of way an assassin or hitman, so it is best to distinguish Harold from those characters.

I'll respond more later, but for now, let's make Harold more interest.