User blog comment:LegoCS/Nezumy, the Clever Mouse/@comment-4636093-20131226110922

Stats need seriously tweaking.

"*MAXIMUM DAMAGE:  600 / 1050 / 1500(+ 150% AP) " Uhhhhhh....

And also work on clarity: The ult has health gain? From where? It doesn't say anything about gaining health in the description.

How long do the effects of the skills last? The stun duration on Q, the snare on R, the shield on E, etc.

And also it needs completeing and moved to champion concepts.

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Also as a final note, it's better to not include random elements in a design. Instead of having a 50% chance to gain gold, have a 100% chance to gain half as much gold, etc.