Thread:GreenMoriyama/@comment-22636720-20160906042435/@comment-3391671-20160909053708

I said "intriguing," meaning "interesting good". If you want an additional compliment, it was such a lovely backstory that I want a recorded voiceover of it ;3

I will say for now that kit-building is not my strongest suit. I've made some decent kits, but they've always have been bombarded by the other critiques. I'm also more used to streamlining a kit than reworking it, just as I did with Wyre Nilo.

I can understand for sure what your aim is, and it would definitely define him if he had the split personality based on whether an enemy is in his "territory" or not. But that would then mean you would have to create a unique mechanic for what defines his territory. If you simply make it a "600 radius boundary" around him, that would be rather dissatisfying. He should have a little more control where his territory, although he would obviously have a limit to how much territory he can create. In the first place, as much as he is trying to let others know the greatness of the Darkness, he doesn't want to force people into being part of his domain, right?

One thing I could recommend is that one ability (possibly his core ability) erects that determine his "territory" in a radius around the Obelisk. Minions would directly benefit from them, but allies need to them to receive the benefit, which will surely be rewarding enough. He cannot just erect these Obelisks where he pleases too, since summoning them under his enemies' feet is not likely something he would do; it would also create balance in that he cannot raise Obelisks to initiate into a fight. Imagine the irony:
 * *summons obelisk under enemy champion's foot* "How dare you... enter in my domain, ."
 * "Uuh... but you were the one who made the territory under my feet. I was just here, double-flashing for days."
 * "Oh... that's not like me to be so insistent... I'm sorry."