User blog comment:C9 Teemur/Tsel, the Elven Huntress/@comment-25228021-20170304225839/@comment-3391671-20170305052258

@Teemur:
 * "I'm not willing to completely remove anything but the E [...] "

While it is nice to see that you are attached to the workings of this champion, with all due respect, this is the kind of stubbornness I find as a flaw when creating a kit. What happens if the abilities you do not wish to remove are the very root of the kit's issues? If you are not willing to remove them, you only find yourself in a bind as the kit does not improve. On top of that, it shows a nature of non-compliance of mending a CC in a direction that may better represent the champion. As some have already mentioned, there is a lot lacking, possibly due to your single-minded approach of fulfilling one theme and nothing beyond that.

Otherwise, some of what you have mentioned as to what you were planning to change do not address what issues others have found in the ability. You are not incorporating into mind what needs to be fixed, even though you claim you are below. I would recommend brainstorming a bit more.

I'm not fond of the selective nature of your response, as you had skipped over most others' comments, and to Numinous, you respond, but they are not I would call discussion. If you have questions, then ask them instead of stating only your intentions as if that is the only thing you will do. If you do not want people to tell you if your designs are subpar or not, then I recommend asking another content creator (those who have engaged enough in creating custom champions) for a review before posting these unpolished idea. You may believe your ideas are all good, which is alright, but if you are not attempting to fully assimilate what criticism you are given, I will call out on you for possibly being a "selective" (for the lack of better terms).