Talk:Diana/Background/@comment-112.198.64.83-20120729074957/@comment-121.96.108.211-20120730025317

The first paragraph was okay but the second paragraph destroyed its meaning. It should be that when they found the secret relics the relics consumed the wielder then turned her into a moon disciple. It also doesn't explain the hate of diana to the sun worshippers. Lastly, your last sentence shows that Leona and Diana were partners in joining the league but your quote shows otherwise, "The sun does not reveal everything, the innocent moonlight shows what isn't revealed." it clearly shows that you are opposing the sun and the moon which is not the case in your last sentence. And your quote sucks no offense, it doesn't not portray vigilance and revenge, nor it doesn't express awe and wonder to the reader.