User blog comment:RocanHsing/Zelos, The Energy Blades/@comment-5418658-20121011131217

I understand that this is your first attemp,well good shot

OP ult btw,you can't just make it 15 seconds,try maybe somethin like 5 seconds of pure true damage and lower the bonus or you may keep the ult that way but at least change his first 4 skills

The problem i se with the passive is it relies on crit and the higher the crit chance the better which would be OP as he would be triggering the passive always (give the items like IE,PD,Trinity Force etc.)

His Q ability could work but just a the price of no damage because he is already the type of champion that damages heavily (basing my facts on his skill kit) he is nearly an a assasin and i mean a very painful-dps assasin,this will make him a threat to some ad carries

His W ability just need distance reduction,its too unfair that it has 1200 range,ahri's charm may look long but,its range is actually 975

The E ability is quite OP for me as it can turn the tides of a fight,much like his sister Irelia but,Zelos is equied to it with true damage and Irelia only has the active part of it and it should be balanced where the enemy should have higher HP % than her in order to stun

Another thing,Zelos is not the baby brother,He is the older one. Irelia was 15 when Noxus invaded Ionia and Irelia was left at the placidium to stand and fight until Zelos returned.

Good try though keep it up