User blog comment:Lyndongwapo/Jack Frost, the Winter Guardian/@comment-3391671-20170909231441/@comment-3391671-20170913123858


 * It is somewhat of an improvement to remove that global on top of attempting to make the Snowballs more interactive in kit... but you need to understand tht "empowered basic spells" have been done much too often, especially in some of your champs if I am not mistaken.
 * I also see that the Snowball doesn't last long, making those extra effect, yes, significant if triggered... but all but an annoyance still. Personally, I don't find it fun when I am forced to assemble a snowball and throw at people for an ally Jack Frost, especially if I am a Mage with spells that can do more overall damage with my own spells.
 * Being able to increase snowball damage overtime is nice... but I find that it makes the damage quite inconsistent. It's one of the issues had when RITO tried to balance how much damage she could deal with her spear throws. Here, a snowball can deal over 300 damage easily just by throw it over half the snowy field.
 * Also, this snowy ability is a bit too large and impressionable to be a Q ability on a medium-short cooldown.
 * And if you don't mind, that ability name is bland. =_=
 * For W, the issue still prevades that you can pinball the frozen target. Please read my criticism beyond certain aspects.
 * And this is not what I was asking for when I said to make the Snowman more interactive. I can definitely imagine seeing this happen. Let's not forget, if you are going to have it as a vision tool, keep it as one. Don't aim for uniqueness in trade of marred mechanics.
 * Much better... but likely because of how the other abilities go, there isn't much more to say about this ability. I'm not saying its perfect, but more of that you need to pay attention to your other abilities which need to be more coherent.

While I am glad that my comments and criticism spark a flame within you... I would like that to happen before you release these concepts. Send a message on my wall if need be. I will admit, while your intentions are all pure in the name of creative champions... you've become a repeat offender of inappreciable concepts (ie you create a congo line of champions with mediocre wow-factor...). Passion is good, but needs to be regulated as I have been warning you for the while.