User blog comment:ErdamonPL/Jeefal - the Wanderer of Sands/@comment-6292556-20131201065401

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About the abilities. Sand Column is something similar to, right? Except that enemy in 'inner radius' will be knocked up while enemy in 'center' will be knocked away. Song of the Sands effect OK. This act as an initiation with reasonable cooldown.

Quicksand is an interesting one. It deals a total of. Given how impossible to escape from it, it should have lower damage and range. In other way, you could change its crowd control requirement for a bit. Song of the Sands effect is okay, for me.

Through the dust is fine.

Vengeance of the Wanderer is pretty confusing. As far as I can under stand, it is: Jeefal is invisible Jeefal attack/cast spell Jeefal become visible with 0.25 second 'fade time' Jeefal is visible for 1 second Jeefal then fade back, become undetectable for 0.75 second

Its radius is very big, combined with Quicksand, he would easily destroy the teamfight. Fix for both ability must be done.

PS. I think it's gone beyond LoL lore itself, we've created the new universe of Runeterra.