Thread:Emptylord/@comment-1330314-20140525210334/@comment-1330314-20140609164825

Thank you! I might add an additional tab with my Thane kit variant, but he is as much yours as he is mine. You're the one who initiated the project and suggested the Thunder Whip idea first (my Power Overwhelming was based on that), plus the kit you've got on the article has been fully adapted and is your own creation. Here are my thoughts on the kit you've made:
 * Static Shell/Overwhelming Power makes for a great retaliation combo, and by its design allows for great skill expression through good timing. I would, however, look for a way to tie in the two ability components together: since Static Shell here is effectively a 2-second spell shield (minus the debuff immunity), you could have Thane increase the strength of Overwhelming Power by absorbing abilities, such as by gaining charges per ability absorbed in addition to a base amount of charges, up to a cap.
 * There's only one complaint I have about the kit you've made, and it's that the damage/ratios are a bit too high, especially as Thane already has a lot of crowd control and utility. Thunderclap, in particular, deals up to 540 damage, which is too much even when accounting for the relative difficulty of landing three consecutive strikes. You should either bring the damage of each strike down to reasonable levels (  for a total of , for example), or put in damage reduction on consecutive strikes against the same target. Orb Lightning could either have the delay between damage instances increased or the damage per instance decreased, but even with its current damage is fine. Overwhelming Power could do with a greater cooldown on each cast or a charge system to prevent going over 100+% AP ratios. Thunder Whip's damage/ratios are fine.

Muzen'Khan works well, but have you tried shortening it even further to something along the lines of Muz'Khan? Every Void creature currently has a two-syllable name (Cho'Gath, Kog'Maw, Kha'Zix, Vel'Koz...), so abbreviating it would fit with the standard. I'd also love to work on a kit for him if you'd like.