User blog comment:Jared Grace/Jacob, Boy of the Shadows/@comment-7709681-20160930182434/@comment-3391671-20161001181357

I rather wish to criticize the lore and all, because it in itself, while not a carbon copy, is another lore of cliche woe and anguish. It has obvious plot holes and simply puts the core character in despair because the author, Jared, wanted to do so. This will need a lot of brushing up since, as an author, I do not find this backstory innovating or intriguing.

As for the kit, it is a decent kit. But since it is a carbon copy from another game, I will brandish you for thinking of this. When adapting a concept from another game, you should do more than copy-paste. "But I changed a few things into the language of LoL." That is no excuse, since you could technically be breaching what some might call copyright, since you take an official idea, post it and taking  of it without sourcing it back to its source. If this was an "original" concept, here are a few of my criticism to its ill points.
 * The innate is not much interesting. As much it promotes Jacob to cast spells as he gets hurt... losing his stack simply from being hit does not fit in line with the title of "Grudge."
 * For basic abilities in general, E seems to be the than the current Q itself.
 * The shadow interaction can be bettered to make it more iconic than it is now.
 * R features a function that is, and probably shouldn't, be in LoL. This is the "punishing an enemy for taking action," in the form of hurting them if they use an ability. This won't be devastating for the likes of auto-attack users, but nonetheless, such type of abilities have been removed from the game as it isn't . This ability also features a delayed stun... which feels nonessential.

In the end, I would opt for you to take the "Boy of the Shadows" idea into a sandbox and think of a kit for yourself. I honestly believe that this blog should be removed under the of what a proper custom champion blog is.