User blog comment:Jao and jom/Shaera, Avatar of the Void/@comment-7709681-20141024051208

The kit has too much elements, dissordered and all over the place; offers some free stats (Which isn't bad per se), but is too overloaded with mechanics (Skillshot range increase, pet, anti-proyectile system, stackable max. and missing health damage, shapeshift) and CC (Two Airborne, a Silence, a Slow and a Madness, which would be classified as Forced Action and would have the highest CC duration in the gamae. And yes, Madness is the name used in other MOBAs for what you call Confusion), all of them for either a secondary, temporal resource or almost non-existing health costs.

The lore doesn't bring her to nothing exiting:'' She gets into the Void, and gets out of Void... just because (You actually don't explain it). Everyone she loved actually hates her; Void is love, Void is life.''

But I do must congratulate you for the quotes, at least unto a certain degree (Which, disgracefully, showcase more lore than the actual lore). And at least, and despite my dislike, this concept showcase far more efford than others previously done.