User blog comment:Chase999/Arcenciel, Heaven's Quintuplet/@comment-3391671-20170108221143/@comment-22636720-20170111154753


 * Problems with the first kit (Guessing)
 * He was too much of a generalist with his abilities being tied to a battle mage and a artillery mage.
 * The Innate, Passive Ult and Seraphic wings ability gave him the feel of a battle mage while his Divine Touch and hand of creation ability gave him an Artillery mage feel
 * Generalists in the game of league of legends usually have too much or too little to offer in terms of what they give examples are Kalista and Azir.
 * Solving Problems
 * I made Rain from the Heavens a Passive ability so that people would not always use him as a support. something that my friend pointed out saying he was a more aggressive Soraka.
 * His Divine Touch ability has an added effect that the duration does not refresh as to not give him an unlimited amount of wave clear with proper management of the ability.
 * Seraphic Wings one of the problem abilities being that it was so out there for a Artillery Mage that it didn't make sense so hopefully now it does. Being an Angel allows him to fly and I want him to use that advantage something that other artillery mages do not have.
 * Every Artillery Mage needs CC, to at least have a chance to protect themselves. whether its a slow, stun or knockback so I gave him a conditional stun with a nearsight. I made use of an Angel's Ability to create Light
 * With the Addition of Seraphic Wing's new effect, I nerfed the range of this ability as to reduce his power curve upon getting his level 6.
 * For Lore
 * I wanted to address the Hollow Demacian Puppet Comment. Okay, So Yes They follow orders but not because it is out of duty. They do it because they are generally happy with what they are doing. they make no complaints because they have none. We as mortals have this sense of good vs evil, we were raised with ideals and with the freedom to look and find our purpose but angels do not have such a luxury nor do most of them wish for it. Angels were given their purpose and were raised in such a way that their thought process wouldn't be "what good can i do today" but "how can i perfectly execute my orders for today?" They have no sense of good or evil for they believe their orders are from the all-knowing. They wouldn't second guess or hesitate if their order was to kill a child merely because they have this notion in their heads that Its not their fault, the blood is not in their hands, I was merely ordered to do so and anyway its for the greater good.
 * For the Replacement of Angels, Heaven does not usually replace angels, usually and more commonly angels stay doing their jobs for all eternity, being Immortal themselves. Their inability to die or grow old causes them to be the perfect servant. they know exactly what to do, how to do it and they would not complain on doing it. Angels are not beings with Infinite Power but with Power enough to do their jobs. They continue living doing their jobs so when an angel for some unknown reason (Falling from grace, Rebelling, Becoming extinguished and others). It takes Heaven awhile to create, train and make sure that the new angel is able to their job. So Heaven would not replace an angel so quickly just because they were unable to their job BUT that is not the reason why Arcenciel was not replaced because they CAN do this if they wanted.
 * Angels at war are usually depicted with Weaponry having swords, javelins and spears even the occasional bow. The reason for this is that Angels have Raw power that they do not have the capacity to concentrate without help from the weaponry they have. If they do use their divine power without a weapon they would not be able to stop it, and could theoretically consume all their raw power in one big burst completely extinguishing their existence (They did not die for they never existed in the first place). Arcenciel is an exception to this because he has a human body and his human body was blessed to be able to create with the hand of creation. normally a Human body would not be able to handle the amount of power that comes with fusing with an Seraphim but Arcenciel's body was able to merely because his arm absorbed the brunt of the energy. This caused a phenomenon of an Angel who could literally concentrate his power without the use of a weapon but to their great dismay he couldn't aim it with any bit of accuracy and caused more harm than good. So they tried giving him a bow where he used full power and it did not help the projectile was too large. so they asked him to decrease the power and it dealt little to no damage at all though it did hit the target. So Heaven gained a Great Asset that they couldn't use and they released him from their custody and replaced him. He didn't fall from grace because he was half human, He had his own freewill and was not allowed to be punished for not being able to do his job. This caused Arcenciel to go to the mortal realm where the angel met the boy called him in the first place. From then on, Mainly because he was part Angel and the other because he was Human, He became Obsessed with gaining something that gave him great accuracy without sacrificing his ability to go Full Power and his search began. While he was on the Island where he met the angel, He met his four other brothers but that is a story for another day.
 * I'm Sorry, If I seem to positive or something. I have had a bad streak of giving out negative comments that get me in trouble or cause people to dislike me so I try to avoid that. I can also feel the frustration from your comments and I hope I was able to succeed in covering up some of the plot holes even if my explanation is all over the place. But I'm guessing I didn't even cover them hahaha. and for the character Design I hope I patched some of the problems up with the new kit that hopefully you will still comment on.