User blog comment:Jerry Khor/Mimia, Justice of the Magician/@comment-3391671-20161230062528

First and foremost, remove "blog post" from all of your custom champions. Your works are clogging up the front page.

Second, here is my tuned up version of Mimia. I purposely made drastic changes to her lore and backstory because it was sadly lacking in plot, consistency and also intriguing details. I do not know how old you are, but if you don't mind the offense, the lore sounds like a 12 year old wrote it. I recommend brushing up on your writing, since some people are much likely to be off-put by hideous writing.

Also, I fleshed out the kit for you. At this point, people will say this is now my own idea, but I won't take the offer up... just yet...

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Mimia, the Rooder Mage is a custom template champion in League of Legends.

Lore
In the Voodoo Lands, a Yordle girl by the name of Mimia lived a lonely life. Although she had parents, they were killed by an unknown specter, which she vowed to kill in the name of justice. When she felt prepared enough, with the family heirloom Rooder Bow, she set out from the Voodoo Lands to find the killer of her beloved parents.

Only a day after setting off, she met the Yordle who called himself the Cyclonic Ninja, Zono, who offers his aide on her journey. Pleased in not being alone anymore, Mimia accepts his offer.

While on their journey, Zono honed his sword skills while Mimia the many secrets of the Rooder Bow, such as the different arrows it can magically provide. One is the Binding Arrow, able to weigh down its target with magic weights. Another is the Rending Arrow, an arrow with a point so sharp, it can skewer through armor. The greatest of them is the rare Old Rooder Arrow, an arrow that can communicate with the gods to bestow justice on one's enemies.

One day, the skies became dark and the plants around twisted. And as smoke appeared out of nowhere, from it appeared the target of Mimia's conquest: Fushi. In black armor with an evil smirk, Fushi taunted the two young Yordles. Being baited, Mimia and Zono attacked Fushi, only to be easily repelled. They tried again, but to no avail.

Fushi cackled at the futility of their action, only to taunt them once more. But this time, he took out a sword familiar to Mimia: the Rooder Blade, a blade that was in the possession of her mother. "With this blade, I will strike irony within you, little girl," Fushi proclaimed as darkness twisted around the sword.

But before the darkness fully encompassed the blade, light shone from it. Fushi exclaimed in horrow of what is happening, only to let go of the blade. Drawn back to its rightful master, the Rooder Blade flew into Mimia's arms. Although she is confused as to what happened, Mimia knew that this blade should be the one to fell Fushi. And with unblockable strike, Mimia stabbed Fushi in the heart. However...

"This is not over, Rooder Girl. I was not the one who killed your parents. I was only a simple henchman in the entire plan. Hail to Lord Kugoji..."

While bewildered by this new information, Mimia remained composed in learning her new goal. It was not over. Not just yet. Until Justice is done for her parents, Mimia was not willing to stop on her journey. With Zono together with her, Mimia sought out to find Lord Kugoji.

Quotes
Selection
 * "Ready to enforce justice on the evil."

Starting a Game
 * "I'll avenge you. Mum. Dad."
 * "Now that I'm here, justice will be served."

Movement
 * "Ready to go."
 * "I'm on it."
 * "In the name of justice!"
 * "No time to panic."
 * "I better hurry."
 * "Hmm... anyone around?"

Moving near an allied Zono
 * "Hey, wait for me!"
 * "Right with you!"
 * "Together, we go!"
 * "Two as one!"

Attacking
 * "For justice!"
 * "Time to fight... now!"
 * "Take an arrow to the knee!"
 * "How's the taste of my arrow? Painful, right?"
 * "I've trained for this!"
 * "Double the draw, double the power!"

Attacking near an allied Zono
 * "Let's do this together!"
 * "You got my back, Zono?"
 * "My arrow, together with your blade!"
 * "Let's give them a hard time, Zono!"

Using 
 * "This will pierce through their heart... literally."
 * "Power in the draw, and the sharp tip."
 * "I only need to load one arrow for an awesome one-shot."

Using 
 * "Freeze!"
 * "Stop right there!"
 * "Hold it!"

Using 
 * "Here comes some shooting stars!"
 * "The heavens answer my call!"
 * "Justice upon the evil!"

Using 
 * "An archer knows how to use both blade and arrow!"
 * "This is your end!"
 * "Time for you to be judged by me!"

Joke
 * "You think I can't draw a bow because I'm a girl? Hmph."
 * "A bow is about dexterity, not those muscles men muddle about."
 * "My Mum told me to be girly, but I rather be strong than fix make-up all the time."

Joking near Zono
 * "You hurt my feelings the other day, Zono. I don't know you. Hmph."
 * "You think you are great just by having a cool title. Typical teenage boy."
 * "Calm down, or else I'll show you that even a girl can throw a punch."

Taunt
 * "I don't know about you, but I've been through a lot at this young age. Understood?"
 * "Just because you're older doesn't mean you know better."
 * "If you commit a crime, know that you'll be on my blacklist."

Taunting an enemy Yordle or 
 * "We are all small, but as you know, size doesn't matter. Let's fight."
 * "I believe we could understand each other, but I'm still got to deliver justice."
 * "Glad to see that I'm not the only young one here, or are you just short?"

Taunting an enemy Zono
 * "We may be friends, but right now, we are opponents. Capice?"
 * "All is fair in war, they say. So show me what you can do, Zono."
 * "Zono, why are you over there? You only give me reason to fight you."

Death
 * "I... must... keep..."
 * "Mum... Dad... I failed you..."

Respawning
 * "Well, back to serving justice."
 * "I won't stay dead until my revenge is fulfilled!"
 * "I was taught to never give up. Thus, I continue!"

Skins & Trivia

 * Classic Mimia
 * Rooder Princess Mimia
 * Frostfire Mimia
 * Mimiarle (Marle from Chrono Trigger)
 * Musha Mimia (From Musha Aleste/M.U.S.H.A)
 * Red Dragoon Mimia (From Daioh, Daioh Gale, and Shienryu/Gekioh Shooting King)

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