User blog comment:Qarin kawaii/thumbelina the fairy tale's/@comment-5185938-20120621034509

No offense, but this is a very simple idea. It provides little information about gameplay. It isn't really a champion concept so to speak; however, it does look like quite an interesting character concept. If you have time, write the lore, and/or (preferably "and") the skillset/abilities, that way, its a more thorough concept.

I myself have actually made a concept with a full skillset, if you want to see how i did it, you're more than welcome to go check it out.