User blog comment:TheTobarMethod/Guide To ADC/@comment-4022742-20130223113350

Hey, Just some small formatting tips.
 * Try to use Headings more, as it makes stuff easier to find.
 * Try to keep your paragraphs short and consise
 * Try to put in less analogies
 * "Support isnt just a backseat role like a mom watching her kids play in a sandbox" This is cute, but it doesn't actually add to the contents of your guide. Some comic relief is good, too much is distracting.

Just my buck