User blog comment:MacTavish Shadow/Zeraf The Spell stealer/@comment-1864748-20130226124822

Lets see:

First of all: Nice brand template xD

Mov Speed: Too high for a range mage, try with 340 or less. See here http://leagueoflegends.wikia.com/wiki/Movement_speed

Innate: Im seeing it too op. Reduce the ap per stack or make him lose 1/3 on death.

q, flame spells: how much times it bounces? Please no more than 5. Magic damage: 60,75,90,105,120

q, self-destruction spells: at lvl 5 should be 2.5, and still op. And how do you use one or another?

w, lighting spells: Cd at 3 should be 9, at 4 should be 8.5 and at 5 should be 8. Cost just 50 at all lvls. How much seconds it will work? how about "for 8 seconds Zeraf regenerates mana each time he strikes an enemy while using lightning spells."? Dont like the magic damage per second or the total, just delete it. About his passive, try to write down the radius, 525-550 it will be great.

w, Spell charge: to be real... bad magic damage advance per lvl, still "ablaze dmg form brand" and dont understand how you use this ability.

e: perfect. Try to add the seconds the target will be slowed. Try between 2 to 3 secs.

r: I like it. Write down how much mins Zeraf will have the spell.

Try to polish it. I like the skeleton to be edited, and then lets see when you have him all polished.