User blog comment:NicknameMy/Garen changes for more balance and interactive gameplay/@comment-3391671-20180302001934

imo, I believe everything you have pointed out would have been better expressed in Garen's comments than as a blog. The changes aren't drastic enough.

Otherwise, I'll criticize what you have later on. What I can say is that the Q's AD scaling. You don't have scalings like that as 1% difference is very little; E has it because Garen hits more than a few times per ability cast, so an increase in AD is more than just 1%. While this is not a custom champ, I recommend that you review my blog on how to make custom champs, as some of the kit advices I offer there would help here.

Also, I recommend a shorter title.