User blog:Grrrbear26/Need help with a custom champion

I really need help with this character.

I won't go into lore, but I will tell you about her theme's and character. She is a ruler. She commands those who would dare oppose her to obey, before killing them. She shows little to no weakness as she is a demi god.

I don't want to go too in to detail but I can give you a highly abridged run down of her kit thus far and some of my ideas.

Her role is a fighter that is extremely hard to take down. She controls her area, and you must be careful when near her.

The passive is the actual passive thus far. No changes but silly names are added, and it won't make sense without the full text from the other abilities.

Ultimate ideas! THIS IS WHAT I NEED HELP WITH. I need a good concept for her ultimate but this is one of the things I came up with.

I had another version

The idea behind these two versions were that she would force the enemies to make a decision, increase their chance for survival now and buff up her late game, or risk dying more and not let her get massive amounts of health to carry later on.

Before these versions I had something similar to

I'm just not sure what I can do to solidify this kit. She has sustained damage (that can heal her in the full version), she has a "gap closer" (More accurately she makes you close the gap. she is a queen basically, and you expect her to walk to you?), she has damage mitigation and a short NO ESCAPE mechanic.

I need a little help guys.