User blog comment:GreenMoriyama/Nine, the Magus of Elemancy (collab w-Lesdin)/@comment-4091261-20170913151704/@comment-7709681-20170913162011

When I say that she's alienated is that she doesn't interact with anyone or anything known other than undeveloped organizations (blame on Riot for this) such as the council of ionian elders, doesn't belong somewhere in the known world and isn't related to anyone known but rather characters specifically designed for the story at hand.

And still say, no matter how rich is the quality of the content you put, if the audience feels intimidated by the sheer amount of content or gets exhausted by the lenght of the lecture then the problem radicates on how it was published.

Personally would suggest shortening narrative sightly (For example, as you said, Eight's dialogue gets too lenghty) and could have been published within a schedule, rather than thrown all at once to the audience, or alter the presentation into individual pages within the tabber, rather than the plethora of them pilled up over each other.

Making lecture confortable to the audience, at hand with a good story, regardless of narrative and prose, may cause the potential readers to not be intimidated, but rather lose the notion of time. If you as a reader have to check time during a single chapter then the way is edited is wrong.