User blog comment:Commander Marko/Slender, Shadow of the Woods (Final rework!)/@comment-4918830-20121108030323

Better!

but.

Passive: Stealth duration too long for a passive.

Q: Too much range and damage, and the cooldown is too short.

E: AOE silence is too much CC.

R: Sight radius reduction length is too long, since most team fights only last around 10-20 seconds. Death Factor still waaay OP - you haven't changed the true damage or MAX health portion.