User blog comment:AKCLord/Serverius, The Reality Overwriter/@comment-3391671-20161002231244

First and foremost, I will say nice presentation with all the images and ability pics. But what I am a bit offput by is the completely comical nature of his theme. I myself am someone who is distasteful of it (I like good lore), so the last point may not be a good point against your design. But be warned, I cannot take Serverius at all seriously, unless that is the point of his playful nature.

Moving onto the kit, it requires some streamlining. The scalings are horrendously random (linear/straight scaling promotes a clearer kit) along with some touch-ups on terms and grammar. Some abilities will need a bit of working on, but I will compliment you for having a decent kit for a "first concept posted on the wikia" if you haven't posted other ideas elsewhere. I will let you know what will need the "touch-up" when I have the time, but to note, that ult will need a tweak.