User blog comment:AlacrityAPT/Champion Concept- London, the Gem Crafter/@comment-220.255.1.68-20120905032344

Okay... No harsh comments.

Passive is a built in tiamat. If u were to have a lich bane... haha(does it work? lol).

Q is a snare for 3 seconds...

W hai tf. at least make the scaling to 4 8 12 16 20... Even zyra's seeds were like that. Suddenly throwing one rank and gaining 20% cdr is too much.

E... You need to make the homing drop after a few seconds of not reaching the target. As... If its homing, its guaranteed damage. At rank 1, just rank 1 only, you are dealing 160 damage plus 2.4 ap ratio...

R ratios too high.

Erm, best is a scenario.

I manage to catch opponent mid lane. Both you and the opp are lvl 6.

You used your r(rank 1), follow by a e for guaranteed damage(rank 3), Use your Q(rank 1) while he is snared for 2 seconds and used ur W(rank 1 purple gem) and 4 AAs( 5 second root)

assuming u have a mere 30 ap on lvl 6, and a basic attack of around 50 dmg(just estimation).

Your Basic attacks deal 207.5 damage.

Your Q does 99.5 dmg.

Your W does 75 dmg over 4 seconds.

Real dmg comes in. Your E does 472 dmg.

Your R does 258 dmg.

Total dmg ~1000

Oh and that is when you only got a mere 30 ap.

Your dmg increases much more than other mages when you add ap.

AP RUNES PAGE HERE WE GO.

Idea is good but when you add just too much... It just explodes.