Thread:GreenMoriyama/@comment-22636720-20160906042435/@comment-3391671-20161017022840

Been busy, but got a bit of time to spare (and want to try that voiceover, since that lore piece would probably sound amazing if spoken).

The first thing that catches my attention since I last looked over the kit is what you have done for the outside kit's ult. I will say that this brings up an issue you are well aware of: bloated kit. But how? That ult kit is essentially a third kit, and the player already needs to monitor two kits (outside and inside). While it brings personality to Erebus, I believe this wouldn't work as a kit and sadly need to be scrapped.

This brings up, once again, as to what the outside kit's ult should be. For now, it's better to have the ult restricted to the domains, but that would be very restrictive since these cannot be spawned left and right. The other champions with a restricted ult have access to it better, since can enter his enraged form relatively easily by entering fights and  has his Q to knock up enemies. This contradicts what I had mentioned earlier that Erebus is fine with a domain-restricted ult, but I take back the thought and will try to think of what will be good for Erebus.

Once again, before continuing my thought process, consult other people, since I am not the only creator with a  on the wikia. If you haven't already, ask around and they should be able to offer more than I can, since my strong points are backstory development, attention to detail and criticism.

Back to looking at the kit, outside-W looks better, although it isn't still viable enough. One thing I can think on the spot is trying something similar to 's, a barrier that also provides CC immunity. I don't think a herald of Darkness such as Erebus would have the capability to heal health, but for sure, he should be powerful enough to grant a good barrier. To make a difference from Morgana, the barrier can also provide bonus magic damage to AAs if the target of the barrier is in a domain; actually, this could mean that W can be consistent for both inside and outside, just the fact that the Barrier benefits those who are within the domain... or would that be in some way unfair?

That blink effect for E, on enemy or allied champion, is unnecessary. I would actually say that it's unfair and also hard to use. It would be a great peel ability, but if the nearest domain is among the enemies... @.@


 * To follow, Devourer of Light should remain as an ability that is focused on blinding his opponents. That was the original goal behind the ability, right?
 * The ability should remain a skillshot, along with making its non-champion effect into its overall effect: "Erebus sends out a projectile, exploding upon colliding with an enemy unit, dealing magic damage and / them for X seconds. A zone of darkness will be left for X seconds, causing enemies who enter it to be inflicted by the as long as they are within it. Erebus will treat this zone like a Domain."

Otherwise, keep working on the kit. I'll see what more I can offer as advice, but little by little, Erebus is being put together.

PS: If you would be so kind, could you check out this voice clip (download if needed)? I asked Lesdin to check it out, but he has not responded. I'll poke him in a moment, but having more opinions of this voiceover would be fantastic. It's for Izo's upcoming lore/Bolverk update! (yay, an update for Izo, finally)