User blog comment:Zeagoth/Queen/@comment-71.134.224.173-20120623193126

the kit has too many different scalings, 2 at the most, but three is pushing it. the champ needs a few directions that it could build that would perform better than others.

Passive: I see that you were trying to go for a TF/kat mix of a passive. However, both of their passives demand that you take an active role in acheiving the extra gold; TF: you must actually last hit the enemy, kat: you must participate in the kill. Your passive grants a team extra gold for natural progressions of the game.

Q:stun as well as damage amp is over the top, as well as "unfair" all other damage amps in the game allow you to move during the duration, letting skillful players evade enemy attacks.

W: this scales horribly into late-game. think of how much armor champions would have? or even just flat health. The bases are extremely low, as well as the scaling does not reward the player for building attack damage to increase the damage output.

E: decent, the shield is a tad low and the scaling off bonus health seems tacked on as well. If you were to stick with the entire chess theme, bishops would not be protectors though. They are highly prised for their ability to pierce enemy lines and probide support from clear across the board in ways that rooks cannot.

Ult: hmmm.... not much I can say about this. as far as ults go, it is not really noticeable unless the champion actually dies. It does reduce their damage slightly, but it would not be noticeable in the midst of battle. A good ult includes an immediate effect on gameplay, should the player have good judgement/aim.

few examples:

-karthus ult: impending doom of "tons of damage"

-mordekaiser's ult (which im assuming you took inspirations from): immediately decreases the opponents HP, followed by a DoT.

on a side note: she has high mana costs across the board. this is indicative of a AP mage, but the kit's scalings hardly reward the player for being AP...... and why no rook? my favorite piece in the game.

PS: "what the **** is that smell??!?!"