User blog comment:GutsyTick/CC: Viden, the Seeress of Death/@comment-3391671-20150823163858

Hmmm....rather intriguing, if anything. Especially by the fact that you had added some info (the champion pic along with affiliation, allies, enemies, etc). And reviewing some of the info, such as the original Itteration. But I do have a few pointers and questions.

The internet is a free space, but you could say that I'm somewhat erked that you had used an illustration by an online artist for this concept. I don't know if you go permission from the artist (or only intend the given image to be a placeholder/concept of what you had in mind), but gladly you at least linked the source. I had recognized it before reading the trivia, so before even reading the abilities, my shoulders were already chilling...

Looking at the passive (and basically the entire concept of Viden), it's a unique one to look at. Feels like an alternate setup to Fiora's new passive, but I shouldn't measure champion to champion. One thing to note though...100% slows don't "exist"; I would actually recommend reducing it down a bit.

As for basic abilities, I'm sure others may point out some details, but there are certain descriptions that feel over elaborate in how they are worded. In some cases, Riven has extensive range...

The ult doesn't feature an overpowered elemental, which does put a smile on my face. But to me, the bonus range is unnecessary; yes befitting of what might be an assassin, but in the kit...it feels more free than justified. It also does not explain how Incendo and Deviare are activated.

When looking at the lore, while it does sound rather ominous, it does not hold itself together due to both being weak in construct and using what seems to be a "tragic hero" setup that requires construct to remain afloat. Best work on that lore then.