User blog comment:Commander Marko/Cygnus, The Galactic Magus/@comment-15287106-20130903121437

It looks overall cool and interesting to me, but i have some things to say.

1: The ulti's cooldown is really, really, high.

2: Instead of doing bonus damage if the Q travels through the W's star, why don't you make the W explode in a larger radius than the base, when hit by the Q? So it will be like "I can't reach him" or "He's near the star but the detonation won't hit him", but using the Q will do enough damage in a large-enough area to hit enemies.

3: 2.5 seconds to teleport to the other portal on the E? That's just too much. The idea itself is cool, but in 2.5 seconds i can travel the whole distance easily. Think about Lissandra's Glacial Path: It has a range similiar to your spell, and it takes around 1.5 seconds to reach the full distance. In that time, i usually can travel half the distance of the E if i walk towards it. I suggest making it 1.5 seconds before using it again.

Good job anyway, you can still add something here and there to make it better, but i really like the idea :) Keep doing like this