User blog comment:Baristar/Custom Champion - Eleos, The Weeper of Souls/@comment-25235491-20160820180921

First, I'd like to ask, please hide this lore in a tabber, because scrolling through the entire page to read and write every time is a bit of a pain... :/ You should use a |-|Hide= insert lore here notetag and put the lore in.
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There's awkward scalings all over the place. Aside from the scalings, there are also a few oddities. I may review and suggest later on, but I suggest you fix the oddities first.
 * The passive.
 * Its cooldown. It's just, and no idea how it reduces itself.
 * Its heal . Once again, no idea when it's increased.
 * Q
 * Its cooldown: . Why should it go down 2 seconds at level 2?
 * Its damage: . 240 base damage for a rank 3 ability is completely broken by the way.
 * W
 * Once again, cooldown. is not a normal cooldown scaling.
 * E
 * Again, cooldown! can be remotely explained as scaling the CD down too much could be broke, but usually, non-linear CD scaling is reserved for specific cases.
 * The slow duration is even weirder.
 * From the passive, after the heal procs, Eleos cannot gain a charge for 3 seconds? A charge of what? I'm sure it should be reworded as "Eleos cannot generate Memorial Gauge for 3 seconds.", as it's likely what's intended.
 * Also from the passive, picking an allied bloom apparently heals them from "half the amount". You might mean half the amount her own passive heals herself, but since the latest "amount" mention is the amount of damage she took, she basically can let her ally heal for half the damage she takes, at least that's how it reads.
 * Where does that third passive spawn the blooms?
 * Q's leveling tooltips should swap places. The damage is indicated at the side of the text that explains Comfort Zone mechanics and vice-versa.
 * Talking about Q, apparently casting Shady Encounter reduces the duration of the doppelganger by 2 seconds. But this is awkward as the doppelganger isn't even mentioned yet, so this should really be mentioned on Shady Encounter itself instead.
 * Also, "stunned towards Eleos"? You mean, right? In which case you need to indicate its range...
 * Why does W's damage reduction only have 3 ranks? (Note: 60% damage reduction is broke.) Also, from the description, it doesn't reduce damage, it transfers it to her.
 * E's description says the damage is based on maximum health, but the tooltip says it's current health damage. (I'm not sure 30% current health damage on a non-ultimate is very balanced, moreso when it's on an 8-second CD). Also, does killing the doppelganger not avert the damage?
 * The ultimate is fairly straightforward, but feels strong earlier, as leveling it up only decreases its cooldown.