User blog comment:Tri De Novus/Claire, the Struggling Hunter/@comment-3391671-20151012012522/@comment-3391671-20151015204837


 * P: If they are stored indefinitely, best mention that. As for the crit percentage, I believe I made a word mistake in explaining myself. As much as it is nice to scale up, I believe my intention is to make that bonus crit chance scale with her current crit chance. Similar to Yasuo, except a bit different in that it's based on those stacks.
 * For example: "After using a skill, Claire gains a stack of Precision that allows her next basic attack's range to increase by 150 while gaining 25/30/35/40 + (20% of current critical chance) bonus critical chance. Precision stacks can be stored up to a maximum of 3 stacks indefinitely."
 * Q: You can actually say "shoot in a very narrow cone" which will allow people to understand that it's meant for that purpose. Possibly a 15 or even 12 degree cone will do the trick. Arrow width is nice, but it's not the most necessary to mention IMO. Your choice :3
 * W: We all make mistakes. No worries. Concept is key, so just be a little careful next time. You can also mention if either cooldowns/recharge time is affected by CDR.
 * E: Think of the purpose of this lunge: Is it only a dash with a half-second of CC-resistance? What more can I add to this that will help synergies with the character's style than being a plain dash with free stats?
 * R: you got the idea. Just make sure this ult identifies the champion, as the Ult is their "big flag" that everyone will say, "Hey, it's that character's ult!" At the moment, the ult feels in line with other buffs such as Ryze or Yi, but that happens when there is already 100+ champions. Even then, try to make it unique ;3
 * In my short time of makng champion concepts, I've faced the same issue of being too buffed up and such. For sure though, we all can improve; some just don't learn.
 * As for the ability box...errr...hmm. Press "edit" for a champion page, and you'll see how the ability details is added into the ability boxes. That's what I did and it has helped.