User blog comment:Grrrbear26/Gerigal, born of mana/@comment-10958553-20130714180750/@comment-7481207-20130714215029

That happen's sometimes, I have several concepts with not a single comment on them.

As for your champion, I don't really get what he needs the mana charges for.

His W seems a bit odd too. It has two damage components, one which deals more damage the more mana he has and one that deals more the less he has. Though thanks too his Q you can control your mana levels to either reduce it to raise the flat damage or increase it to do more % damage, or somewhere in between. Really nice ability synergy.

The stats he gains from his ult can be combined into a single scaling since they are the same, such as: Bonus Stats: 10%/20%/30%.

"For the next 3 seconds, Gerigal's basick attacks deal magic damage." change that to "deal bonus magic damage", as it risks sounding like he converts the entire attack into magic damage like TF with his Pick a Card.

Finally, his stats are a bit off. He lacks magic resist scaling, something that as far as I know is only missing on a single melee champion (singed). His range is 5 lower than the common melee range. His movement speed is way too low for a melee (they are usually between 335-350). And his health regen is a bit low for a melee fighter. The rest seems fine though.