User blog comment:Witchking99/Lillia, The Floral Princess/@comment-27002630-20160314084250

What I feel about this champion is that it really gives a new look for champions in LoL. But well, the way of presenting is still... not good. What I think you should do is try to briefly describe skills and use the keywords in it. There's too much text that it feels boring to read. For example, her E should be written as:

"She sends a poison ivy(vine) at the target direction that stops and tethering herself to the first enemy champion hit. Dealing magic damage on enemy units the vine passes through. Enemy units that is in contact with the vine will get poisoned for three seconds. Lillia could reactivate again to dash to the tethered enemy, knock enemies on the way aside. Upon landing, the tethered enemy is disarmed for 1.5 seconds."

You could also find some words used in LoL champions llike "tether" that described in Leblanc's E, so that other people could understand better what are you trying to explain.

For the skills, you really missed some explanations. For example, Lillia's E should also indicate how long the tether holds and how far from her and the enemy champion could it takes. The tether range could be shown on the "range" box. This requires coding skills that you could find on "Wikia Help".

I agree with LivesByProxy's comment that it repeats the LoL champions' concepts. You have to find something more unique for your champion. I suggest you should take a look at your ult, it reminds me of "solar beam" move from Pokemon. Combining with plant concepts, why don't you try "sunflower" concept then? Leona did something like sunlight and eclipse. Lux did something like luminous light. But there's no champion that has interactions between plants and sunlight. That's more unique, better than this one. Anyway, keep up with your progress. I'm sure you could do better.