User blog comment:Parrrley/Tama'Ssran, the Broodmother of the Void/@comment-26815373-20151023211143

The passive is an example of power without gameplay. Her other basic abilities seem OK, nothing really strikes me as innovative, but you've got some synergy in there. I really like the idea of her W's leash transfer (it's the exception to what I just said about innovation). Overall, however, I'm afraid it is an overloaded kit. It also suffers from what most of the 'transform' champions (besides Gnar) suffer from - that you can just switch back and forth between one or the other based on the situation. To quote gypsylord, "''Giving both forms unique strengths and weaknesses is meaningless when they can just transform at will to lose the weaknesses they had." ''Your static 3 second cooldown seems like a brute-force (i.e. not a very elegant) 'solution' to this.

All this being said, do I think you best capture the 'brood-mother' archetype or theme? Not really. Or not for me, I should say.

My biggest issues are your ability names, which may or may not have informed your abilities design. You seem to take the whole 'mother' aspect and run with it, where as I would focus more on the 'brood' or 'swarm'. This is meant to be constructive criticism though! Keep working on it.