User blog comment:Numinous J/Seph & Qliph, the Shards of a Broken Mind/@comment-7709681-20160401200405/@comment-26378838-20160401214950

For points 1 and 2, mea culpa, forgot to be specific enough about the passive only interacting with ability damage and the W slow is a follow up on the hard CC and not simultaneous. Will fix it right away.

As for point 3, I invisioned the E having a neat, yet crazy interaction with minions without being a copy-paste of, or  and was more familiar with creep denial. I'll brainstorm to find a new effect on minions and a new interaction with Q.

Thanks for the feedback, hopefully the rest of the iteration is healthier/more appealing now.