User blog comment:Redeye29/Custom Champion: Etherion, the Earthen Ascendant/@comment-3391671-20170731172830

Here is a short review for the theme, an area that I profess in.

Currently, I find that you are touching a delicate subject. Not that it's fragile, but because the subject of World Runes are not entire clear, and you made an attempt to define them. While it's a courageous act to try to fill in the world of Runeterra, careful measures need to made for consistency, and I find that the lore above does not fulfill that. Many changes were made, and some very critical to other characters (as in other champions). There is also the great issue that you are using retconned lore, as evident that you mention "the League of Legends" as a place when it does not exist anymore.

On top of this, there are grammar/English mistakes. Quite frequent, if you do not mind me saying. You may, however, not be a native speaker, so I won't take this part of criticism any further.

Thematically to kit and the champion themselves, Etherion reminds me of resident Monolith. This is an issue as their themes overlap, and the official champions wins out as to who will keep their theme. The kit may diversify, but Malphite also feels like a magma embedded piece of rock, who can "crack the earth" and give himself a magma defense.