User blog comment:Kenetron/Ivan, the Lightning Elite/@comment-5333760-20130406090836

problems with your champ:

innate: it would be more suited to a ranged champ since if you use it to harass an opponent in lane, you'd get nothing out of it unless you built yourself AD which would also mean that you would be countered very hard. You could build yourself tanky but then the innate would be less effective. you could combo it with your W or Q but i'll discuss this later...

Q: those scaling are OP, even if you turn it into bonus AD it is still OP, the fact that it deals large amount of damage to an opponent and in turn reduces their damage to you by half makes it more OP... i suggest instead of damage reduction turn it into a slow or CC reduction instead, also reduce the damage, because it is meant to be a GAP CLOSER instead of a DAMAGE skill.

W: this is the paramount of OPness of your champ. first, it passively gives you increased crit damage which is an ADDITIVE value meaning they stack so if i built IE with crit dmg masteries and runes i could deal MORE THAN 300% dmg every attack... and that's just the passive... the skill's active part deals OP damage with a GAP CLOSER and a HARD CC... that's just like combining Sion's stun with Akali or Diana's ulti... i suggest remove the passive, either scale down the damage or remove the gap closer... you know this does not bode well with your Q since you already have a gap closer, why add a hard CC? that's just twisted... like making a champ no one can escape from... wew...

E: not as OP as your W but OP as well... it's like Jax's empower with counter strike literally combined, you already have a hard CC stun with your W as well as 2 gap closers... 2 GAP CLOSERS!... and you decided to add another hard CC? combine this with your W and you get 3 sec stun... even irelia can't escape from that... i don't even know how to fix that...

R: this i think is the most tamest if not albeit useless of your skills. the blind is ok as well as damage(but those ratios... wew) but you already have 3 OP skills that deal so much damage to  a target, what's the use of this? to farm? seems out of place compared to all of your skills...

OVERALL:

The kit is all over the place since most of them deal so much damage as well as have insane ratios and insane secondary effect but the thing is with this kit, the only role you could land is an assassin.... albeit an OP one but nonetheless... also your Innate forces you build AD with ASpeed items so it is out of place with the kit as well since it doesn't go well with the assassination part of your skills... you'll ask why assassin? because your 3 primary skill could and would burst down any champ, ANY CHAMP, as well as having 2 gap closers and 2 hard CCs without having a defensive skill except Q but it is mediocre as well as useless since you already have 3 sec stun... how can they even deal dmg back from that? really the kit is all over the place and i could go longer but this has become a wall of text already... OP fail champ over all...