User blog comment:Dragonfly88/New champion?/@comment-8267817-20131218180513

The E seems a bit.... much, honestly.

The R would be near useless late game unfortunately, even Dragon is a pushover for a full build level 18 champion, even at half build, many champions can solo the Dragon. I would like to see something like "Hypnotizes an enemy champion for 5/10/15 seconds, gaining control of their movement and attacks, during this time allies can not target the hypnotized champion, and at the end of the duration, the hypnotized champion will take 250/300/350 damage and then "awaken" in their base."

Also you can find a template for how to do a page similar to a legitimate champion page somewhere in the editor.