User blog comment:Mougu/Scyza, the Perfect Soldier/@comment-3391671-20130711021125

Hello. Just a passer-by and saw the interesting title. Wanted to give my two cents(actually it may become 2 dollars worth; you'll get what I mean).

Innate - I'm fine with the concept of this, but I sort of feel like being picky about the name of this innate, but I'll drop it. As for the innate itself, I would either change it's components to fit "perfect soldier" better. Plus, as said below, it does no synergize with Q. Even if it did synergize, 20% is kind of a bulk...would be better to make it either "20% one champ, 35% two champs, 45% three champs, etc." or "10%/15%/20% based on champ level".

Q - Would be a lovely mechanic. But when I think of quickdraw, at least in western literature, it refers to the gun. Also, "quickdraw" refers to the quick act of draw the weapon, not the quick use of it (yeah, I apologize for being very realist, but this is what caught me the most in this ability...). Again, as stated below, better toggle than just activation; you can't button press Q within a fifth of a seconds repetitively right?

W - This is a very neat variation of Yi's Alpha Strike, if that was what you had in mind. Unlike below, I like this idea of being bale to hid multiple enemies. But, what I do propose is that instead of it always being 425 behind the target, having Scyza being X units from his initial position in the direction of the target may make more sense, because if he hits someone at 425 range, he'll go 850...and it can sort of be a pseudo flash to pass a ganking enemy....who knows?

E - This abilty does sound quite op...Even with armor, if this was a carry or any champion that does not use armor: Insta-kill. Probably making it like Irelia's E, where being in this "Advantage" will deliver base damage with a smaller percent based on the health percent differences. This way, it won't be as op. I would say the effect while being in the "disadvantage" would be a bit too strong, but i see how the cooldown and range sort of compensates.

R - Let me be real blunt. How the hell does a human create a lightning bolt!? You say soldier, but what soldier has the power to create a bolt from the sky! I understand the need of an execution move, but please, as many would say looking at this, it's too far-fetched for a perfect soldier...

I apologize for any bashing or comments that may have hurt your feelings. These are only comments that I wished to voice, so please do not take them as much to heart else than as an advice. Thank you for reading. I really want to see how perfect you can make this soldier!