User blog comment:Nhan-Fiction/(Custom, Fan-made Champ) Cerule, the Mystic Mermaid/@comment-67.165.159.66-20121023114541

I feel as if those cool downs are too long to effectively use her passive if it applies a "mark" for every Auto attack and can be consumed for each ability that hits it could be more effective if you had atleast one ability with a short cool down maybe 2-4 seconds. (And I called it a mark because it's more of one than a de-buff, unless her auto attacks reduce their MR by 2 for ever auto attack stacking up to 10 time or something. Making it more effective in lane than in fights,) And you should add an easter egg for Nasus and Renekton, possibly give renekton a movement speed bonus of 1 when near her and give Nasus WW's?

I also feel as if she has too much CC, the only thing I can compare her to is like a Kennen/Alistar mix but that's pushing it, I feel as if you should get rid of the whirl pool ability and add just a multi-target skill shot, shooting out from her with say a 6/5.5/5/4.5/4 second cool down, no casting time, deals 60/80/105/135/160 (+70% AP) Costing 25/30/35/40/45 mana and have a 700 range, this would make her innate/passive much stronger.

Possibly get rid of the knock back on the bubble pop ability and just make it like sions shield? I feel as if a shield that also deals damage is over powered enough, but adding cc to it? That's crazy, perhaps there could be a buff with the shield that gives a player extra AP somewhat like how Janna's give's AD?

And as for the wave, it's a cool idea but it seems as if it would be mechanically hard to make work where you get to choose whether you want to be pulled with it or not, maybe for that, make it somewhat like galios ability where it leaves a speed boost for your team on a certain area of the map for a short duration, and the enemies have their movement speed reduced by 35-70% while in it? It would make it great for peeling and initiating.

And the ultimate is pretty good, but seems to be lacking on damage a bit, Fizz's ult does 200/325/450(+100%AP)

Morgana 175/250/325(+70% AP)x2 so 350/500/650(+140%AP)

Cassiopeia 200 / 325 / 450(+60%AP)

I would recommend raising the scaling a bit? Possibly to 70-90%AP?