User blog comment:Reveleron/Malefic, the Abiding Sinner/@comment-7709681-20151104153531/@comment-7709681-20151104204657

For the 100% AD from your question: Is not that deals too much damage, is that along with said damage you have a load of equal CCs and other debuffs (Sunder on Q and other sources of damage, Armor shred on E).

As for wording I could help, just give me some time of lecture for both your kit and your comment and I'll gladly publish it here in the comments as Source Code.

But, before I rush to something dull-witted, like "You need to rework it" or "Your kit is BM", must ask: 'Which is the intention of your kit? What is meant to accomplish that others haven't?'