User blog comment:Poisonshark/Custom Champion: Erin, the Swift Palm/@comment-3391671-20160709093501/@comment-3391671-20160718031217

I'll make this terse, since I've had to rewrite this response so many times due to the "error" that wikia puts up. Just so annoying. I will write more later on though, since so much effort has been placed into this lovely concept.

First off, I'll drop the topic about paragraphs. I'm sure neither of us has to be telling the other on how to make a paragraph. Now, onto abilities:


 * I'm not fond of the opinion of reasoning that "melee-AA oriented champions don't fare well," as some champions could fare well enough with it. Nonetheless, you have incorporated the AS buff I had been egging on about. I'll make sure not to force my thoughts on you too much, though.
 * I did miss out on the text stating the mark requirement. I apologize.
 * I did not intend for you to add a second slow in Erin's kit, but you do what you do. You've done much to "fix" the ability and rearrange the abilities, so I'm quite pleased.
 * E, along with Foreign Mana in general, still feels like 's ... have you had that thought?
 * I'm still bothered by the text, as it can be rearranged to say "Enemies with 2 stacks take 50% more damage and are slowed. Enemies with 3 stacks will take 100% damage along with additional damage based on missing health and be slowed." than stating "2 stacks" and "3 stacks" over and over.
 * Yes, I did say "Reconsideration should be in operation for the ult." knowing that you were on your way to fixing the ult up. And you've done just that, since the aura feels so much smoother than a fixed AoE.
 * I too question what I had meant about "reward" and stuff. How much of a fool am I? I must have been referring to how there was a MS buff, although she already has a dash...

Now, for Lore:


 * TBA