User blog comment:Kassyndra/Jubeln the Sincere Sycophant/@comment-18521310-20130922110531

My, you are prolific. I've only managed to work on one custom champ and here you've got at least two in a matter of days. :-p

This looks good. I really like the concept. Biggest thing I see would be to go through (or have someone else go through) and edit for grammar, sentence structure, etc. The information is all there, but the writing is sloppy.

The biggest question I have is what's the difference difference between sleep and stun? If they're the same thing, then you've got a LOT of CC.

Second question: All these abilities have increasing effects if cast consecutively on the same target. Now, do these reset if you use another ability (thus making you want to use one to it's fullest, rather than trying to use them all) or can you direct them all at once?

If you can use them all, it seems like the biggest limiter would be the massive mana costs associated with using three abilities every two seconds. Looks like at max level, your full chains would be 195 mana every two seconds.

Or, let's take your passive into effect:
 * 0s: QWE = -195 mana.
 * 2s: QWE = -195 mana. Passive starts.
 * 4s: QWE = -195 mana. Passive in effect 2s.
 * 6s: QWE = -195 mana. Passive in effect 4s.
 * 7s: Passive goes on cooldown.
 * 8s: QWE = -195 mana. Passive 4s cooldown left.
 * 10s: QWE = -195 mana. Passive 2s cooldown left.
 * 12s: QWE = -195 mana. Passive comes off cooldown.
 * 14s: Repeat as if from 0s.

That means that your non-ult abilies cycle completely every 14 seconds. In those 14 seconds, you burn 1365 mana and gain 3%. On the bright side, you've also put seven stacks of your various abilities on folks. So, up to you to decide if that's balanced or not.