User blog comment:Asfidyll/Raiju, the Grandmaster's Make/@comment-3391671-20170103160915

Seeing that ClayHuang and the others will be touching on the kit, I wished to offer my opinion of the backstory and theme. Since I do not have enough time as of now, neither would I like to make this long,  so here is the short run down.
 * The theme of Raiju is not apparent in the title, as it requires prior knowledge of the champion's lore, and some convincing to understand why you chose this title. Yet, since CCCs lack images to represent what is the appearance of a champion, the title is also an important factor. What do you mean by "Grandmaster's Make"? Was Raiju created by the last Grandmaster?
 * Story continuity seems to be lacking. Why is a spirit from the Shadow Isles an Ionian based character, with his name and origins being tied to the latter (Asian culture influence)? Why make it so ambiguous of Raiju's alignment in the story, weakening the impact of his impending evil? What happened to the originally pure and innocent Raiju, and what was he like? There is much to question, and I ask if you could study these up, or at the least recognize that there may be disagreements in the flow you had created in the story.
 * Why is of all people saying that quote? What relation does he have to either the Shadow Isles or Ionia? Little, if not none at all, and that makes it awkward in having him say this quote.
 * There are already shallow characters who "seek to destory mankind," such as . This cliche has been overused, so I ask you to create a deeper memaning in Raiju's existance beyond simple destruction. Does he have an ultimate goal in destroying the world as it is, or has he gone simply insane?

I believe much can be written by people, so I hope my criticism will push you to write a lore that can attract the attention of the blog's readers, not just simply justify why the character is who they are with flimsy excuses.