User blog comment:Lesdin/Darssan, the Inciter/@comment-7709681-20160223140120/@comment-27802145-20160223180950

Well firstly thank you very much for the review. I will now proceed to comment on your criticism.

As for the descriptions, I tried my best to make it go in line with the descriptions of other champions on this wikia, but if it is as sinful of redundancies as you say it is, then I must've failed. All I can say is that I'll try to do better next time, and that I will make modifications to the ability descriptions as I see fit for now.

For the abilities, I wholeheartedly agree with what you've said, as it is sort of how I intended Darssan to work. He is supposed to be built a fighter/juggernaut-esque, but has the job or the niche of an assassin, as his nuke can only target one person, and has a relatively long cooldown. If it is his playstyle in which you do not deem healthy, then there's nothing I can do about that, but indeed I may have overdone his overall power level as per the consequence of basing it on an already existing character of a different fictional universe. I would just like to comment however that what you've done is simply list the capacities of Darssan, and that by itself didn't really convince me as to how Darssan could be unhealthy to the extent in which you are proposing.

Finally, for the character, I must admit that I may have left the lore a bit too ambiguous. My intentions were to show the origin/Darssan's first encounter with Kindred through text, and to imply the latter events through him being rivals with Zed and enemies with Tahm Kench. I don't suppose writing another entry would entirely solve his character problems, but I guess I will do that.

And yeah, as for the quotes, I'm not the best person at making them. In fact, I was even thinking about omitting all of them at one point before the posting of this blog. But I thought that the contrast the quotes provide against Darssan in his encounter with Kindred would've shown for a lot of personal growth, and if not, corruption.