Thread:Lesdin/@comment-3391671-20160912054757/@comment-27802145-20161017045302

Well, the writing's great, but you're probably sick of me complimenting your writing by this point. If I had anything analytical to say, it would be that this piece seems the most polished out of the three you've presented to me so far, which isn't to undermine the other two in anyway, but just something I thought worth saying; most likely due to this one being the one that was least rushed, if I had to guess.

Zanagi really does pique my interest though. When thunder and dragon was mentioned, I was at first thinking "Oh my, is Green bringing out the famed Ao Shin back from his grave?", but then I had a clear read about that section once more. Not that Zanagi in itself is a bad idea, but if you were to perhaps consider bringing in Ao Shin in his place (especially b/c Ao Shin is an elemental dragon whose purpose is to protect Ionia), maybe that might make it easier for others to relate to the story and create links to other official pieces.

I'll be sure to do my part and provide you with the new kit as soon as my schedule conveniently allows. Come Junish/Octoberish of all years, I get piled with work, and it really sucks. :/