Talk:Timeline/@comment-43526955-20190821034531

Not trying to nitpick, but..

"Mordekaiser ravaged eastern Valoran, demanding young lives and savage worship from the local tribes. Few were welcome in his lair, until the day a pale sorceress approached him with an offer. The two feasted together as equals, weaving magic so dark that the wine at their table soured, and the roses withered, vibrant red turning to black."

Morde wasn't the one in eastern valoran, it was Vladimir. So, at the height of Mordekaiser's conquest as the Iron Revenant, Leblanc sought out Vladimir in eastern valoran. Together, they formed the black rose. This paragraph currently reads like Mordekaiser formed it with her. She was already a part of his conquest, and used the black rose to betray him. Albeit, Morde knew about this and let it happen, but still.

It should read:

At the height of Mordekaiser's dark reign, it was said that a mythic and bloodthirsty fiend (Vladimir) haunted the coastal cliffs of eastern Valoran, demanding young lives and savage worship from the local tribes. Few were welcome in his lair, until the day a  pale sorceress (LeBlanc) approached this barbarian god with an offer. The two feasted together as equals, weaving magic so dark that the wine at their table soured, and the roses withered, vibrant red turning to black."


 * Formation of the Black Rose*

This is in Vladimir's lore if anyone is curious.