User blog comment:Asfidyll/Aevyn, the Spellblade Master/@comment-7463332-20160924075518/@comment-3391671-20160924221947

Aside from what NinjaEditor said, there is also an issue of clarity of the kit and in how it works. The primary culprit of this effect is the innate: how are blades interacted with? You explain that you can pick them up for extra effects, but how dropped blades are used with and other aspects are not elaborated upon. A lot needs to be cleaned up in the rest of the kit, such as and.

I also have issues with the theme. First, the idea of a spellblade is not only as old & cliche as video game history, it already has presence in LoL. We have who has a magical blade,  who can hold multiple blades in the same way as Serrated Edge, and other swordsmen that would outclass Aevyn for the title of "spellblade master."

The next would be the lore, in that on top of the cliche it holds, it is the same "lover, blindness and guilt" trope that I've seen in so many tales and custom champions (the most recent being Absolved's Ganran). If you want to place lore into justifying Aevyn's backstory, I recommend that you choose to write a more detailed and deeper story to separate yourself from the "typical and bad" stories that I admittedly scoff at. Avoid overgeneralizing the story, as that causes the story to seem stale with cliche aspects only.