User blog comment:FelixFortuneForsFortuna/Draco, The Burning Aegis/@comment-3391671-20160729041149/@comment-3391671-20160730003539

Noticing what you have mentioned above, it may truly be an influence by your other peers. The kit before looked dangerously close to Ember's. It may be coincidence, but I still doubted it could be such when the abilities were outlined in the same order, with such similar capabilities.

Originally, it did say "health"; if I was mistaken, I cannot say much else than there is no patch box/history page to illustrate that.

He may have a somwhat low amount of mana at the start, but when considering that this is not following the standards of league (who knows if your other characters will have just as little mana) and you can build more items, the innate can still become a strong aspect of the kit. As mentioned, it should be a bit of a simple aspect for him to kill minions in lane to get back enough mana to stay in lane.

As for lore, not saying it's bad to post characters that are not related to the LoLverse, but it does mean that none of us will be able to offer you the best of critique. We may some way to balance the characters so they are niche and well-maintained, but there isn't much to say for lore and gameplay since there is no way of learning what the world of your game is like entirely. It disheartens me that I cannot offer much for that reason, but the truth is truth. Just make sure to note that these champions are completely irrelevant to LoL, or else people will continue to do so, since we are on the LoL wiki.

Lastly... please make wholesome replies. There was more you could have commented than three simple sentences. I want to hear more responses from champion creators like yourself and know your mindset, but as long as you keep your words sparse, that is not possible.