Thread:Denvir/@comment-25050130-20181109193148/@comment-25050130-20181110143431

- Short bio descriptions have to stay and be displayed in a less confusing manner. The CSL commands for each skin needs to be above the short bios and the short bio descriptions need to be exactly the same as the short bios displayed in the game...which means no additional quotes above that short bio. Basically it has to be rearranged in the way it currently is on the Pentakill page. - History section needs some work. There is no title above the massive text placed just bellow the History area where there should be one. Also "Smite and Ignite" is chronologically after that text so the album lore banner should be placed under that large text, same for the Grasp of the Undying album, that one should be under the Aftermath section. Also Aftermath should not be using this "== ==" header command, it should use this "=== ===" since it is under the larger encompasing History header. Also I dont get the tour dates thing just above the Aftermath section, looks oddly out of place. - Remove the sale-y parts from the "Sober Sale" text, it just feels quite off place to see Riot points and real world calendar months in the alternate universe page since the context of that holds no actual meaning to the Pentakill universe as it is now. Plus this is a sale made in 2013, so why is it after the text with Smite and Ignite thats released in 2014? - Albums will be placed in their own separate lore page (each track divided by tabber command). After that the only thing of the albums that should be on the Pentakill page will be the lore banners for those pages giving a more direct link to the album pages. The whole album section as it is now will be removed once the tracks were transferred. - When the "Grasp of the Undying" lore page is made, the music video "Mortal Reminder" should be placed along side the music only version of that song.