User blog comment:Poisonshark/Custom Champion: Erin, the Swift Palm/@comment-3391671-20160709093501

The first thing that came to mind when I saw that passive... was Neji. Am I exempted from making this assumption? She has the ability to infuse "foreign mana" into an enemy to deal increased damage, and she has an ability that grants her detection outside her vision and through Fog of War. She has a ranged-linear AA and a way to dash up next to enemies, but those are lesser indicators.

Otherwise, the first thought that comes into mind is that the kit doesn't actually provide enough damage to be considered as an assassin, at least to me. Take note that I don't play them often enough, neither do I exactly think of them outside the thematic of stealthy and high-damage. Erin seems closer to a Fighter-main then Assassin-secondary for this reason. If you would like her to be more of an assassin (IMO), providing temporal {as|attack speed}}-steroids and more based damage (than the current doubling or tripling of damage) will do better.

I will assume that the lore bit is premature, since it offers some basic backstory but not much further. It's not as much exciting, neither does it describe the origin of Erin and her abilities much. This causes a jump in how she goes from a Freljord plain survivor into an assassin of the Avarosan. Will there be more lore you will be releasing soon?

As a last note, chaining together with my identification that Erin has similarities to the gentle palm of the Narutoverse, I imagine that Erin is a stiff, no-nonsense survivalist who fights her opponents without hesitation. Her hands glow with mana (just like this character) as her long hair sways in the wind as she circumvents the attacks of her target (in most cases, she is actually attacking from an unseen angle of her unaware victim). Because she is an assassin, her armour (if she has any) is light and flexible, some it being somewhat loose in order to hide the movements of her joints in the case she has to face an aware opponent.