User blog comment:Commander Marko/Aur'Rax, Predator of The Void/@comment-5731482-20121115161345/@comment-5214867-20121115221802

I think he is right, for some reason. His Q reminds me of Kha'Zix jump, and also the complete "bonus gain" is adapted from the Kha'Zix ultimate-bonus system. Also his E is like the spiky thing from Kha'Zix (his W?). Its no bad idea, thought!

As I said, it just reminds me. It seemed nearly like an update for Kha'Zix while reading it first, but no, now I see some differences. So, of course, its not bad. I like the ideas, maybe you can tweak the cd's of the first 3 abilities over the ranks from 1 to 5 a bit, but at all, it seems nice. Well thought about the hunger bar, never seen that before in League of Legends afaik. Well, try to overthink the whole setting a bit, It seems somehow imbalance in hardness and OPness (so his passive is to stronk and his damage output somehow weak - or you tweak something on his damage output and set him as an more tanky creature from the void - I would love the tweaked concept I think.

Well, just some points from me. You dont have to make these points true, but I just wanted to show you some edges of your current concept. Build in some CC (slow on his W, let him fear for 1 sec with his ult while he cries out a scream because of his hunger or something), change the hunger-thing a bit if u want to make him more like a tank and tewak a bit about his damage output and sustain.

Then, you can work out a well done concept of a void-featured tank creature for Riot. (:

GLHF while working on it!

-Fizz'd