User blog comment:Persephone04/Arannel, The Girl Who Was Left Behind/@comment-4990650-20121118121508

why is this concept has so many similiar to mine.

o.o

mind hack.

oh well but i cant make things this poetic. Creepy thou adorable.

my 1st impressions: this is painful to read.

after ; worth it. nicely done sir, u should work for riot

Try to keep thing clear and simple, instead of saying she doesnt have AD per lvl just make her AD like 40+0, it is the same but is easier to understand and some other stuff.